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    NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

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    669 - The Peak of Youth

    Burn!! Gai!!
    PAGE ONE
    [First scene shows Maito Gai's ignited body with fire aura completly covering his body in front of shocked Madara]
    Rikudou Madara: ?! *fast ! *
    [Black balls floating around Madara in halo-formation are shown vibrating as about to move]
    [The great amount of fire burst out around Gai as he moves his fist to punch Madara in split of second]
    Gai: taste my youth !
    [Gai sends great amount of punches ignited with fire aura at Rikudou Madara ]
    [Gai finishes taijutsu's assault by send powerfull kick to Madara's stomach]
    [Rikudou Madara is thrown backwards creating ditch in earth as path of his movement.]
    [Rikudou Madara hit the big rock in distance as fire aura fade away in thin air]
    [The half of rock crumbles as a lot of dust blows into air creating clouds which cover area where Madara was thrown ]
    PAGE TWO
    [Maito Gai is shown standing with his right leg raised ,extended in the direction Madara was sent flying]
    Gai: It was just prelude to power of youth !
    [Maito Gai burst out in bigger amount of fire as blood is shown faster evaporating through pores on his opened veins around his body. The red steam becomes more and more red closing to blood color]
    [Maito Gai disappears in the air leaving blurred drops of blood floating where Gai was]
    [The explosion goes off blowing remains of rock as powerfull shockwave spread around]
    [Rikudou Madara is shown smilling as he look unaffected ]
    Rikudou Madara: Is that all you can do ?! *where he went ? I don't see him*
    [Rikudou Madara takes off in air flying up then stops in mid air]
    PAGE THREE
    [Suddenly ignited with fire Gai appears above Madara ]
    Gai: don't understimate my youth
    [Gai claps both his hands unleashing red tiger shapped air pressure which comes at Rikudou Madara ]
    Rikudou Madara: *fast* ?!
    [Red tiger slams into Madara send him falling at high speed then crushing into ground hard]
    [Dust blows out again covering area where Madara hit]
    [Minato, Lee, Kakashi and Gaara are shown watching with different kind of face expressions as they brace yourselves with arms from impact of hit.]
    Minato: Astonishing power...
    Lee(watered eyes): Gai-sensei *The eight gate is really something else to make your taijutsu moves working as Morning peacock and even being able to use daytime tiger as special attacks. *
    Kakashi(worried and pleased): Gai...
    Gaara(mouth widden open): He is beyond any kage's level...
    PAGE FOUR
    [Rikudou Madara emerges from big crater made in ground. The steam is emitting from his body as wounds are shown to close around his body]
    Rikudou Madara(smirks as he coughs a bit of blood): You are really impressive beast . *I like the way this man fights*, Now it is my turn
    [Rikudou Madara lower his arms as he stretch them outside, the focus is shown on Madara's face]
    [Black flares burst out around Rikudou Madara's legs turning into black flames floating around as shockwave emited by Madara get stronger and stronger. ]
    [The Ground shakes a bit as heat emitted from Madara's body is melting the ground around.]
    [Maito Gai falling down slowly is shown in the mid air]
    Gai: I won't let you !
    [Gai disappears and appears in front of Rikudou Madara]
    PAGE FIVE
    [The Scene shifts to Orochimaru looking off in the direction Madara took off ]
    Orochimaru(uneasy and serious look): There is no doubt, this power belongs
    Suigetsu(shivering): I got shivers from this power
    Juugo(worried): I have bad feeling about it
    Karin: I have never meet someone with this kind of energy-!(get interrupted)
    [Kabuto is shown glaring at Orochimaru dangerously as he speaks]
    Kabuto: Maito Gai had to open eight gate: gate of death
    Juugo, Suigetsu, Karin: ?!
    Kabuto: *But there is no doubt that Madara is much stronger after powering up*
    [Lifeless body of Sasuke is shown with closed eyes as it vibrates as reaction to DNA Kabuto transfers into him while healing him.]
    PAGE SIX
    [The scene shifts to Obito keep transfering Yin Kurama into Naruto's body. Sakura is sitting on her knees close to them]
    Obito: *I have bad feeling about it, I should hurry*
    [Suddenly Obito expieriences pain as he catches his forehead with one other arm]
    [The blurred vision shows Burning man fighting against someone]
    [The vision becomes more clears as Obito recognizes Maito gai and Madara]
    Obito: ?! *I can see what Kakashi sees now... it looks like Kakashi wanted to show me it...*
    Sakura(spot schock on Obito's face): What does happen Obito ?
    Obito(gives a short look at Sakura): I saw Maito Gai is sacrificing his life through Kakashi's eyes (fixes his eyes back on Naruto) *damn... I have to hurry up !*
    [Glowing lifeless Naruto's body is shown with closed eyes]
    PAGE SEVEN
    [Scene shifts to Spiral zetsu standing on buddha motionless as powerfull shockwave reaches his battlefield]
    Shinobi: Shit !
    Shinobi: what is that terryfing energy !
    Shinobi: How can we win ?!
    [Hiruzen is shown holding Adamantine staff as he has familliar feeling on his skin]
    Hiruzen: Don't tell me that *This is feeling of eight gate: gate of death opening, Could Gai really be forced to use that ?*
    Spiral Zetsu: Lord Madara's power make you shit in your pants, heehe.
    Spiral Zetsu(lower his head): but I have to admit that the man challenging him has to have balls (silence for moment)in opposite to you(laughs)
    PAGE EIGHT
    Shinobi: Damn you ! (throws many kunai at Spiral Zetsu)
    Shinobi: taste this ! (blows fire ball at Spiral Zetsu while jumping in his direction)
    Shinobi: Don't understimate us ! (unleashes wind blades while moving)
    [Scene shifts to Ten Ten running in Madara's and other direction]
    Ten ten: *please don't do anything stupid, guys ,I will be there soon*
    [in distance explosions are shown as Ten ten is closing to them.]
    [Gai is shown moving his fire ignited fist to punch Madara but miss as Madara ducks at side]
    [Gai unleashes furious assault of taijutsu punches and kickes as Madara is dodging or blocking each of them]
    [Gai tries to finish Madara with 360 degress spin kick but Madara blocks at the last moment with his staff]
    [Barerly released for second powerfull air pressure taking on shape of tiger breaks apart as it spread around powerfull shockwave busting ground around]
    PAGE NINE
    Rikudou Madara: you looks surprised, heh. Do you really think that it could be enough ?
    Gai(frown): It is not my full power yet !
    [Rikudou Madara sends one of black ball at Gai but Gai jump backwards in split of second]
    [Gai forms daytime tiger seal with his hands as he push more and more energy into attack resulting in spreading very destructive shockwave which get stronger and stronger]
    Gai: Take this ! Infinite explosion of Daytime tiger !
    [Gai unleashes barrage of huge red tigers shaped air pressure which slams at Madara shielded with sphere made of black fluid]
    [Huge explosion goes off, anihilating big amount of ground]
    PAGE TEN
    [Big clouds of dust blows into air completly covering big deal of area]
    [Clouds of dust scatter and fall down]
    [Rikudou Madara is shown with black fluid sphere with few cracks around it]
    Rikudou Madara(smirks as black sphere disperses around him): So powerfull and yet so futile.
    Gai(schocked): ?! *It looks I have just one last finishing move...*
    Rikudou Madara: You are fool to challenge me. You are fool to think that you will be the most powerfull upon death door as youth stuff is worthless
    PAGE ELEVEN
    Gai(shocked expression): ?!
    [Gai reminds the same words spoken by him as child to his father: Maito Dai]
    [Maito Gai lowers his face as he move his head down while not moving at all]
    [Flashback]
    kid Gai: You are not normal, How can you say that death is related to youth ?!
    [/Flashback]
    Rikudou Madara: Nothing guarantes that you can defeat someone word aparts powerwise, the simple belief or hope will bring you nowhere.
    PAGE TWELVE
    Rikudou Madara: Face the reallity, there is no hope.
    Gai: ?! (Gai's body shivers a lot as struck by lightining)
    [Flashback]
    kid Gai: A Real victory is not when you win against someone strong
    Maito Dai: It's when you are able to protect something you really care for !
    kid Gai: I just wanted... to protect the youth you always talks about !!
    [/Flashback]
    PAGE THIRTEEN
    [Gai reminds himself another flashback of his battle against Kakashi]
    [Flashback]
    [Kakashi is shown standing little messed up with kunai pointed at Gai who is kneeling on ground trying to get up]
    Kid Kakashi: I have enough of your youth stuff, You are annoying brat who will never grown up.
    Kid Gai: ?!
    Kid Kakashi: Also stop challenging me, because you will never win against me (serious blazing sharingan as Kakashi keeps serious face expression)
    [/Flashback]
    PAGE FOURTEEN
    [The Scene flashes fast forward showing teen Kakashi and Teen Gai after battle]
    [Flashback]
    Teen Kakashi(puffing and sweating): I can't believe you could match me...
    Teen Gai(puffing and sweating): I told you that you should never understimate power of youth !
    Teen Kakashi: You become very strong Gai, but I hold up my claim that you will never surprass me
    Teen Gai: I will show you, just watch me Kakashi. *Since this time we are eternal rivals until the end* (smiles)
    [/Flashback]
    PAGE FIFTEEN
    [Another shots scenes of Kakashi and Gai taking part in challenges]
    [The paper shows Kakashi having bigger number of win over Gai as 50 to 49]
    [The panel shows Maito Gai as Sensei of team eight: Lee, Ten ten and Neji]
    [Maito Gai and Kakashi are shown meeting each other as teachers were summoned by Third Hokage]
    [The scene finally shifts back to current time]
    [Maito Gai rasies his face to look at Madara as he speaks]
    PAGE SIXTEEN
    Gai(smiles while burning): You don't get it, right.
    Rikudou Madara(confused): ?!
    Gai(closes his eyes): A Real victory is not when you win against someone strong !
    Rikudou Madara: ?!
    Gai(keep his eyes closed ): It's when you are able to protect something you really care for !
    [The images of Kakashi, his team, Naruto Konoha and all shinobi in background is shown]
    Gai(opens his eyes blazing with inner red fire): and I have a lot of precious people to protect. That why I can not loose ! *Even if I only gain time by last attack, it is worth it as long as new generation will blooms into their youthfull days*
    PAGE SEVENTEEN
    Rikudou Madara: once fool, always fool. I will finish your pathetic existence.
    [Bloody aura blows up in huge amount around Gai as heat emitted by him burn everything around]
    Gai: It took a lot of time for me to reach this point as the elephant makes his moves slowly *Now is the right time to use it, as you did, dad* (tears drops on ground)
    [The ground breaks apart under Rikudou Madara's feet as strong blows of wind blow his hair away]
    Gai: But once elephant finishes his move, the strongest attack will be released !
    [Burning blood flames swirl into center taking on elephant shape]
    Gai: My flame of youth reaches boiling point. face my wrath, Night-time elephant !
    [The last panel shows Gigantic bloody elephant charging feriously at Rikudou Madara]

    Side text: Overhelming Weight stopping Madara's from movement, The bloody elephant symboling of youth's explosion about to crash Madara !
    END

    670 - Until the end in the heart


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    OK, Guys. IT IS FINALLY FINISHED ! , check it if you want
     
         
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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    It was really good
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    I thought the battle between Gai and Madara should have lasted longer.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    spiral makes it better lol.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    ahh I read it all .. and I never regret for Reading your threads and Predictions KCMNaruto .. Nice prediction man . 1question : any assume of what Tenten is about to do ?
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    Uh, What happened to Morning Elephant ? Anyways, Nice prediction. I Hope you bring it to a nice end.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    Awesome! I really enjoyed this one, quite spectacular!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    Suugoooiiiiii! nice work :-)
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    great ad always
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    What about the Evening Elephant?
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by ShiroShonen View Post
    What about the Evening Elephant?
    Its on the way

    OT: Great prediction as always
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by Madara the Solo King View Post
    It was really good
    Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by Madara the Solo King View Post
    I thought the battle between Gai and Madara should have lasted longer.
    Well I think two chapters to show full wrath and abilities of Eight gate should be sufficent

    Quote Originally Posted by obikage View Post
    spiral makes it better lol.
    Hahah, I know

    Quote Originally Posted by dark legion View Post
    ahh I read it all .. and I never regret for Reading your threads and Predictions KCMNaruto .. Nice prediction man . 1question : any assume of what Tenten is about to do ?
    Thanks a lot my dear friend . Well it is hard to say what Ten ten is up to ?, if I had to guess then it would be something with Rikudou's tools

    Quote Originally Posted by Dylan Porsche View Post
    Uh, What happened to Morning Elephant ? Anyways, Nice prediction. I Hope you bring it to a nice end.
    Welll Night-time or evening elephant , anyway I made it as cliffhanger I hope you enjoy reading it as it is complete now

    Quote Originally Posted by Mattek2008 View Post
    Awesome! I really enjoyed this one, quite spectacular!
    Thanks you very much

    Quote Originally Posted by Angie4568OST View Post
    Suugoooiiiiii! nice work :-)
    So much praise , I am blushing now lol

    Quote Originally Posted by Crystal Chakra View Post
    great ad always
    You know what good stuff is

    Quote Originally Posted by ShiroShonen View Post
    What about the Evening Elephant?
    Well it was not finished then yet, but now it is complete. Feel welcome to check it

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuuybi View Post
    Its on the way

    OT: Great prediction as always
    Thanks you and you caught it perfectly

    Yes it was on the way, now it is finished so I put it as cliffhanger

    Did you read it when it was complete or no ?, if not then I ecourage you to read it again
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    oh my god ..... it just felt like a real chapter.
    you focused every part of the battle field even with the perfect timing of flashback that i liked the most.that is what was missing in mine . i have to learn many things from you bro. +ve rep for you and you deserve it.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    Its really good...enjoyed reading it
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by bdm View Post
    oh my god ..... it just felt like a real chapter.
    you focused every part of the battle field even with the perfect timing of flashback that i liked the most.that is what was missing in mine . i have to learn many things from you bro. +ve rep for you and you deserve it.

    I think you overrate me too much

    Anyway thank you very much for praise I got from you

    Quote Originally Posted by devilmaker View Post
    Its really good...enjoyed reading it
    Well ,I am very thankfull for your feedback
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    it was good
    I really like it
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great Prediction.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    I seen every image of this battle as if it was the actual chapter good job
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    nice bro . good work
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    You're the only dude who makes the most plausible theory, Great as always!!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great Prediction.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 669 "The Peak of Youth" [by KCMNaruto]

    great prediction
     
         

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