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    Naruto & So6P Meets #3 (third part by TIGER)

    PART #3 (by PakTigers)

    Then.. Let's begin..!!!


    In my PART #1.. Here:
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=488196

    Naruto & So6P had a cup of Tea and after that Naruto come's back to the real World (kamui dimension)..
    The last Chapter ended up there when Naruto was Standing..

    (saying) Naruto : Time to leave...!!! Let's go (japenese: Igzo.. [I guess ] )

    In my PART #2.. Here:
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=488258

    Naruto and Sasuke Finally clashes with Uchiha Madara.. And everyone notices that Naruto is somewhat different..
    And the PART ends at Naruto making Shadow clones..

    I hope you know The DRILL ==>>

    [] ==>> Scenes / Panels
    () ==>> Emotions thoughts feelings
    CHARACTER


    Then Let's Begin ==>>

    PART #3

    [The panel starts from... Naruto using Kage Bashino Jutsu..]

    Naruto : Kage Bashin'no Jutsu.. (naruto makes 2 clones)

    [Madara is seen rushing towards Naruto and Sasuke..]

    [But then.. Suddenly, sand barrirer comes in his way..]

    Madara : Dam'mit...!! That Kazekage Brat...!!

    [Madara sends those balck bijuu dama balls towards Sand Barrier..
    When those balck chakra balls reach near sand barriers... They explode like
    a large Big Bijuu Dama ...]

    Gaara : Shit...!!
    Lee : What happened..!! Gaara-kun??

    Gaara : (in a soft tone) Madara in his current level.. I don't think
    we can stop him..
    [Flashback of that explosion is shown..]

    Gaara : He just swept away my sand..

    Minato : At this rate,.. We.. We won't be able to land a single blow
    on him...

    Lee : What about Tai-jutsu..!! With my speed...??
    Kakashi : Never ever mention it again.. Gai just ended up dying due to
    using those techniques...!!!

    [Flashback of Gai dying is shown...]

    [The panel shifts to Naruto & Sasuke..]

    Naruto : Sasuke..!!
    [Sasuke moves his head towards Naruto..]
    Sasuke : !!!....

    Naruto : I think you know shape manipulation.. Your chidori surely requires it..!!

    Sasuke : ....!!

    Naruto : You have to do the same with my rasengan.. Let's see the results..!! Got it..??

    [Sasuke thinking : Naruto had got clever... He is no more that dumb, who always created
    hype..!! Heh..!! ]

    Sasuke : (smirks) Got it..

    Naruto : My one of the clone would be putting nature energy in it..!!

    [Naruto leaves everything to Sasuke and his clones...]

    [Flashback..!!]
    Yang Kurama : You can't do everything alone.. You have forgot everyone struggling for you..
    Naruto : You are right..!! (thinks about everyone)
    Kurama : Just because you have become powerful.. You can't forget everyone... You should
    have faith on others..
    [Flashback over..]

    Naruto : I have faith in you Sasuke..!! I am sure, you won't put it down..!!

    [Naruto rushes towards Madara.. And Madara is also going towards him..]

    -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    [Inside Naruto]

    Yin Kurama : Hey..!! You brat..!!
    Naruto : Oh..!! Me..??

    Kurama : So can you see anyone else here..?? Heh..!! (smirks)

    Kurama : Who made you think, that you can Beat Madaras ass... At his current level...
    I guess you have forgotten that he had got all the bijuus...!!!

    Naruto : The atleast I can do, is to give it a try..!!
    Kurama : You have got to be kidding be.. Idiot (japenes : Pak- Ka {I guess so})

    [Kurama moves his leg/arm out of the Cage..]
    Kurama : Open up the damn seal.. Then I will show you what is the real fight..!!

    Naruto : (thinking : Hmm..!!) I don't want to use power of Your's.. I want to protect
    everyone with my own abilities...

    Kurama : That's not what He (sennin) wanted..!! You are runing everything.. So6P and
    all the other bijuu's put their faith in you...!! That's why...

    Naruto : Alright fine..!! Then let's do It together..
    Kurama : Yeah..!! (smirks)

    [Naruto is shown opening the seal..]
    Naruto : You know Yin-Kurama You remember me of Yang-Kurama..

    Kurama : (laughs/smirks) Hah..!! Indeed we were one in the past.. I hope I'll
    see him again...

    Naruto : (promising) You will...!!

    [Cage/seal opens.. Naruto and Kurama are shown bumping fists with one another..]
    [Both Smiles ]

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    [Real World]

    Kurama : (inside Naruto) You will see a new bijuu mode..!

    Naruto : !!!...

    [Naruto get's a white cloak just like Rikudou Sennin.. And horns on his head.. And a staff
    in his hand.. The colour of His hairs changes to Orangish-Red / Greyish-White...]

    **Note: You can say that Naruto becomes a whole copy of Sennin**

    Naruto : (shocked) Ho---w??? Wha...''at is goooin...g ON??

    Kurama : Did you forget that you have all the nine bijuu's chakra..??? That's what...!!

    Naruto : (suprised) Oh..!!

    [The clones which Naruto made also turns into Juubi chakra mode..]

    Sasuke : (surprised) !!!... So, That was what you were hiding all this time???..

    Naruto's clone : (sensing something) ???... Sasuke... How do you..!!

    Sasuke : ???... What!!

    Naruto's clone : From where did you got this technique of molding Nature energy??? I just
    sensed it in my Bijuu mode.. And..!!

    Sasuke : !!! (thinking : Had Kabuto???)

    Naruto's clone : Seems like you got the senju DNA... >_<

    Sasuke : .... (thinking : So.. It was Kabuto indeed.. Then, that means I can..!!) Naruto..!! listen..
    I have to check something out..

    Naruto : @_@ ...!!!

    Sasuke : So, I have to go..!! And I think you can defeat madara yourself in your current level...!!!

    Naruto : No..!! This mode is temporary then, I will be back to Kyuubi mode.. >_>

    Sasuke : Can't help with it.. 2nd hokage.. Time to go..

    [Sasuke grabs Tobirama's hand and both vanishes..]

    Kabuto : So.. They are coming back..?

    [In the next panel Tobirama and Sasuke are shown in front of Kabuto and Oro..!!]

    Sasuke : Why didn't you tell me that what you have done..!! Now tell me how to activate it?? >_<

    Suigetsu : !!!
    Karin : !!!
    Juugo : ...

    [Kabuto tells Sasuke the secrets about, how to unlock Rinnegan.. And some other healing techs...]

    *** So will Sasuke be able to unlock Rinnegan..?? How Naruto will fight alone with Madara..!! To
    know it.. Wait for the next 4th part... ***





    Summaries for next Parts...
    Part #4 - Juubi's jinchurikis collides...??

    Part #5 - Sasuke Rinnegan V.S Madara Rinnegan..!!

    Part #6 - (maybe) Madara's Destiny..?


    EDIT:
     
         
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    Re: Naruto & So6P Meets #3 (third part by TIGER)

    It's okay, but there is too much happening to Naruto.
     
         

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    It's okay, but there is too much happening to Naruto.
    Hmm..!! In Part #5 there will be no Naruto... Happy
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    When those balls reach near sand barriers... They explode...
    , this was pretty decent
     
         

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    , this was pretty decent
    Your comment is More descent then it...
    Anyways I will edit it a little thenn...
     
         

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    Your comment is More descent then it...
    Anyways I will edit it a little thenn...




    Okay
     
         

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    Very nice man

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    Very nice man

    I really enjoyed reading it
    Thanks.. I am glad you liked it...
     
         

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    u can do better truly i liked the second one .this one is ....
     
         

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    u can do better truly i liked the second one .this one is ....
    You just said it too directly.. ....
    I was just out of ideas.. So I just wanted to put few twists ... which I did in the end.. So I'm sure you will like next part..
     
         

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    Not bad, 4/5.!
     
         

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    Not bad, 4/5.!
    Heh..!! Someone who really cares.. Thanks!! I am glad you liked it
     
         

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    Superb work i want mOre more more :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto & So6P Meets #3 (third part by TIGER)

    Nice prediction!
     
         

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    You just said it too directly.. ....
    I was just out of ideas.. So I just wanted to put few twists ... which I did in the end.. So I'm sure you will like next part..
    it doesn't matter how i say it......by the way i am looking forward to its next part...and we will see what wonder can you do
     
         

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    Pretty decent
     
         

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    Truthfully I loved all three parts , you've written it quite like Kishi yet kept some of your ideals.
     
         

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    Truthfully I loved all three parts , you've written it quite like Kishi yet kept some of your ideals.
    Thanks for your honest Feed Back..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto & So6P Meets #3 (third part by TIGER)

    Great Prediction. 5/5
     
         

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    Re: Naruto & So6P Meets #3 (third part by TIGER)

    I don't think Sasuke would escape from a battle, and he would never leave a strong enemy to Naruto just like that... he could compete.

    :S anyways, decent prediction.

    3/5
     
         

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    Re: Naruto & So6P Meets #3 (third part by TIGER)

    Quote Originally Posted by Hirudora View Post
    I don't think Sasuke would escape from a battle, and he would never leave a strong enemy to Naruto just like that... he could compete.

    :S anyways, decent prediction.

    3/5
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    Quote Originally Posted by Naruto Uzumaki Sage View Post
    Great Prediction. 5/5
    Thanks dude..
     
         

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