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    Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Page 1

    Naruto opens his eyes

    Naruto: Kurama! Everyone!

    SFX: Standing up

    Naruto: What's this place? (Pause...) Yeah, that's where I met the bijuus.

    SFX: Walking
    Far away, a figure is disappearing into the dark.

    Page 2
    Naruto: Wait! Who are you?
    SFX: Running
    Naruto runs toward the vanishing figure.
    SFX: Water splashing
    Naruto: Heh...Wait! What are you doing here?

    Naruto: ( Damn it, I fell unconscious.) Heh, do you know what's happening up there? What is Madara doing?
    SFX: Halt
    The figure stops with Naruto close to him.
    Mysterious person: Shukaku, Matatabi, Isobu..

    Page 3
    Mysterious person: .... Son Goku, Kokuo, Saiken, Choumei, Gyuki, Kurama!
    The whole place lits brightly and the nine bijuus form a circle around Naruto.
    Naruto: Huh, what's happening?
    Mysterious man: It's about time I meet you Uzumaki Naruto!

    Scene changes to Madara
    Madara(scary smile): Now, don't disappoint me!
    SFX: Regenerating

    Page 4
    Madara's wounds heal instantly, his broken horn grows again and his clothes reform anew.
    Gai: !!!
    Gai stretches his arm and brings his hands together.
    Gai: Not yet. The red springtime of youth is still not over.


    Gai: (This is my last technique before all the gates close again. I cannot miss) Gozenreiji no hōō! ( Midnight Phoenix)
    SFX: Energy roaring! Pulsing!

    Madara: ( All the air around him is compressing into a single point. And this energy is... natural energy?)

    Page 5

    SFX: Landing

    Madara: (If I am hit head on, the juubi might be affected)
    SFX: Hand seals


    Madara casts a barrier around him
    Gai: The phoenix announces rebirth. I may die here but youth will prevail in the subsequent ages.
    SFX: Heartbeat weakening
    Gai: (Farewell.....Everyone)

    Page 6
    The scene changes with a flash to gai's childhood
    Dying Dai: I have taught you everything my son. Now is the time...
    Dai dies with the other swordsmen on the ground around him.
    Gai: Father! Father......!
    SFX: Crying
    Gai (shouting): Father!!!!!!!

    Page 7
    Scene changes to Gai

    Gai: (Shinobis endure and pass their will to the next generation. That's what you did father! Now is the time for my rule)

    SFX: Flight

    Crimson energy is shot forward and it expands to take the form of a crimson phoenix.
    SFX: Clash
    Madara: Perhaps this energy is too much even for that barrier.

    Page 8
    SFX: Stepping behind
    Madara gets away from the barrier from the rear.
    SFX: Crack
    The barrier shatters apart and the phoenix gains more momentum

    Madara: It absorbed it! It might come faster than I had expected.

    SFX: High speed flight

    Page 9

    Madara gets away while the phoenix penetrates through and outside the barrier.

    Gai: I won't let you escape...
    SFX: Gates closing
    Gai: ( I have reached my limits)
    SFX: Fall


    Madara: It is getting closer. Shinju!!!
    SFX: Creak!!!

    Page 10
    The god tree moves towards the ground to take the attack head on.

    SFX: Evading
    The phoenix dodges the roots of the god tree.
    SFX: Eruption
    Wood erupts from the ground and the phoenix strikes against it.
    SFX: Explosion

    Madara: As I thought, this won't be enough to deal with it.

    Page 11

    A crimson figure emerges from the smoke.

    Gaara: I have gathered enough chakra.
    SFX: Hands raising
    A huge wall of sand surrounds Madara.

    SFX: Shooting

    The black balls are shot, explode in the sand forming a barely visible hole.

    Page 12
    Madara (smiling): Impressive defense! Guess I am cornered.
    SFX: Hands stretching
    Madara: You are amazing but still your abilities pale in comparison to me. Shinra Tensei!


    Scene changes to Naruto

    Naruto: You look familiar. Do we know each other?
    Mysterious person: We are closer than you would ever think.

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    Bijuus: It is time to meet your destiny Naruto.
    Naruto: You are all there! Even you Kurama. I am sorry-
    Kurama: It's my other half which got taken.
    Son goku: It can't be helped. This Madara guy has the rinnegan, the old man's eye.
    Naruto looks at the figure in front of him
    Naruto: Could he be the sage of six paths?
    Shukaku: Not really-
    Kurama: Shut up and let the old man talk.
    Shukaku: You always get on my nerves stupid fox.

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    Choumei: They are doing it again.
    Naruto(laughing): My bad, this two can never get along.
    Mysterious old man: Not really. They are like the yin yang. Though they are opposed, they can be united because they are similar.
    Naruto: Yin Yang? I don't get it. Anyway, if you are not the sage of six paths, what's an old man doing here?
    Mysterious old man: I guess you are responsible for this, kurama.
    Yin Kurama: Yes, sorry. I couldn't help but hate these humans. So I did it.
    Naruto: Do what?
    Mysterious old man: It doesn't matter. After our talk, I will return it to you.
    Naruto(putting his hands on his head): It and this aren't telling me. I can't figure out anything.

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    Yin Kurama: I absorbed your yin essence before you were born. Unlike other human, you lack mental energy.
    Naruto: It doesn't matter. It's all thanks to you I was able to work hard to achieve anything.
    Yin Kurama: Now I see why my other half was converted. You are undoubtedly the chosen one.
    Mysterious old man: Uzumaki Naruto, do you know who I am?
    Naruto: Hmmmmm. Let's see..... Teuchi? Nope. Damn, it seems like a distant memory.
    Mysterious old man: Who is Teuchi?
    Yin Kurama(annoyed): The Ramen Guy it seems.
    Isobu to son goku: This conversation is getting annoying. Let's get this over with old man.
    Mysterious old man: Naruto, I will help you find yourself. It's about time you remember the past.

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    Mysterious old man: The shadows that obscure the world are darker than one can imagine.
    Matatabi: The shinju is incarnate destruction.
    Saiken: It must be stopped at all cost.
    Kokuo: The elder son set the cycle of hatred in motion and the mind of the shinju is getting reborn again.
    Naruto: What is the shinju?
    Kurama: The ten tails, the progenitor and the destroyer.
    Naruto: So, you mean that there is more to the ten tails?
    Mysterious old man: Much more than you would ever imagine Uzumaki Naruto!

    NEXT WEEK: The old man is revealed. The terrific past is about to unfold.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Amazing....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    deus ex machina
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    This is good
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Quote Originally Posted by Mattek2008 View Post
    Amazing....
    Quote Originally Posted by Henry1350cent View Post
    This is good
    Thanks for reading guys.
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    deus ex machina
    Indeed, juubi is final villain @sig
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    lol... interesting..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    nice work man ..+
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Nice Prediction. I like the part of the Bijuu fighting, made some good comic relief.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Gai kill Madara and Juubi is free and now Juubi is humanoid form :D cmon Kishi do this
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    so many people think this is going to happen...

    seeing as the manga is getting to a point where ANYTHING can happen, i guess this is a good prediction...

    but please no Might Dai flashbacks, we already know he died no need to waste time...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    nice one boss
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    very good!!!!...pretty possible too!!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    nice job!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    magnificent..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Quote Originally Posted by -Jiraiya- View Post
    lol... interesting..
    Quote Originally Posted by Igrou View Post
    nice work man ..+
    Quote Originally Posted by SIXPATHSSENNIN View Post
    Nice Prediction. I like the part of the Bijuu fighting, made some good comic relief.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hasisas View Post
    Gai kill Madara and Juubi is free and now Juubi is humanoid form :D cmon Kishi do this
    Quote Originally Posted by Gdamon View Post
    so many people think this is going to happen...

    seeing as the manga is getting to a point where ANYTHING can happen, i guess this is a good prediction...

    but please no Might Dai flashbacks, we already know he died no need to waste time...
    Quote Originally Posted by nandachikara View Post
    nice one boss
    Quote Originally Posted by Hermit Of All Paths View Post
    very good!!!!...pretty possible too!!!!
    Quote Originally Posted by EmergNOnEm View Post
    magnificent..
    Quote Originally Posted by Sugiyama View Post
    nice job!
    Thank you for reading.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Dude, awesome read! Nice prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    I'm simply not seeing it coming....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    I love how Sakura just sits there idle while Naruto has a crazy monologue
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    I liked it it , even that I dont think ten tails is the final, nice one
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Great prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    SIMPLY SUPERB. GREAT PREDICTION
    +REP FOR YOU
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Great Read mate nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Too much to happen in one chapter, I believe that the fight between Gai and Madara will be skipped (Sadly), and the next chapter/few chapters will be entirely dedicated to Naruto, especially if he does meet the sage of six paths and we go into a few chapters of flashbacks about him.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Wicked, now you got me interested please write more.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 670- The Mysterious Old Man

    Great prediction man .
     
         

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