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    Unison

    SCENE 1 (naruto and hagoromo)
    *Sudden burst of power flows inside Naruto*
    Naruto: Woah old man! I feel another presence of chakra.
    Hagoromo: Hmmm... You're going to realize it sooner or later Naruto. Don't get perplexed on...
    Naruto: You're not making sense again old man! Talk casually!
    Hagoromo: Yeah! I forgot about that!
    Naruto: ...
    'Kay so... I feel a sudden boost of power!
    Hagoromo: Relax Naruto, I just gave you a glimpse of my power
    SCENE 2 (sasuke and hagoromo)
    Sasuke: So this... is the power of the Sage of Six Paths eh?
    Hagoromo: Don't get worked up Sasuke, this is just a fragment of my power.
    Sasuke: Yeah, I do get that part.
    HAGOROMO is being seen together with Sasuke and Naruto
    Hagoromo: Now, time for you two to go back.
    SCENE 4
    *Naruto and Sasuke woke up at the same time*
    (Switches to Kamui Dimension)
    Obito: Naruto!!!
    Sakura: Oh, thank God, you're alive Naruto!
    Obito: Let's not waste ti... *spits blood* ..me. We have got to hurry! Kakashi and the others... are in deep trouble.
    Naruto: Yeah, I know... Madara turned out to be the SO6P huh?
    Obito: How'd you know? You were unconscious when he became the SO6P.
    Naruto: No time to waste. Let's get going!
    Obito: Right!
    Scene 5
    (Scene switches onto battlefield)
    Kabuto: Sasuke!
    Karin: Oh Sasuke!
    Sasuke: Ugh... I've no time to waste, we have got to stop Madara!
    SCENE 6
    *Naruto and Sasuke arrived at the same time* IDK how, but... xD
    Madara: YOU TWO!!!
    Gai: NIGHT MOTH!
    While Madara was distracted, he got hit by Gai's night moth.
    SFX: POW
    *tsk tsk tsk*
    Looks like you wasted your last technique on a wood clone!
    Naruto: Last...?
    *Gai falls to the ground*
    Naruto and Sasuke: We will stop you, MADARA!
    Madara: Hmmm, something's changed... I guess you two got visited by the priest huh?! HAHAHAH!
    NO MATTER, you two can never compare to my power! You two are just fragments of the Sage's true power.
    Naruto and Sasuke: Yeah, you are right about that. But when these two fragments fight together...
    MADARA:
    BIJUU DAMA SHURIKEN!!! (forged with senjutsu)
    KIRIN! (With amaterasu)
    Naruto and Sasuke: We can be as equal as the SO6P!!!
    ~END~
    Is it too long? I do hope you like it, it's my 1st thread, xD
     
         

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    Re: Unison

    i actually liked it, although for sasuke and narutos techniques i would rather see something brand new: not just a booster of their old moves.
     
         

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    Re: Unison

    I respect your opinion just couldn't come up with anything , hahahah
     
         

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    Re: Unison

    Quote Originally Posted by SilverfoxUchiha View Post
    i actually liked it, although for sasuke and narutos techniques i would rather see something brand new: not just a booster of their old moves.

    What he said. and it was not long it was ok.
     
         

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    Re: Unison

    thanks man :D
     
         

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    Re: Unison

    it was nice I liked it
     
         

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    Re: Unison

    Thank you so much :D
     
         

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