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    Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Scene shows Madara, Obito and Sakura in the kamui dimension with the former shooting a black rod.

    Madara: No, I won't let you!
    Obito gets in the way and takes the hit in his stomack.
    Sakura shocked: You!
    Obito with weakened voice: It's okay Sakura, I won't fail for a second time.
    Sakura runs towards Obito to heal him.
    Obito: Sakura no!
    Madara: Oh no you don't little girl! (As he quickly starts to regenates his body).
    Madara uses Limbo and holds her in the air restricting all her movements. Sakura looks terrified.
    Obito screaming in pain by the wound: Leave her, Madara, she's of no use to me, you only want me!
    Obito is about to crash his rinnegan with his bare hand but suddenly he feels a weight in his stomack.
    Obito in anger: Ahh! What did you just do to me?!
    Madara with a calm yet sadistic voice: I keep my animal under control. Now, (he turns towars Sakura) no need to get so afraid, yet. (he stops the limbo and as she falls Madara comes fast from behind and immobilizes her by holding her from her neck.

    Obito now has lost the control of his body but Black Zetsu forces him to stay up.
    Obito starts smirking which slowly turns into a maniacal laughter.
    Madara angered: What's so funny idiot?!
    Obito now slowly stops laughing: I can't believe that you're such a coward Madara, Naruto and Sasuke must have given you a really hard time in order for you to resort to such cheap tricks. That's low even for you.
    Now it's Madara's turn to smirk.
    Madara: Obito, you know me better than this. I grew up in an era of wars and I learned one single thing: Everything is allowed in a war! (and after a look towards Sakura's struggling) and in love as well!
    Sakura shocked by Madara's words tries to kick him and even though she doesn't manage to do anything other than to make him laugh, his grab loses its wrath, leaving her to stand face to face with him.
    Madara: And now what little girl?
    Sakura in tears in her eyes: Take this! (She punches him in his cheak) (What?!)
    Madara's left completely unfazed by the attack and now he starts moving towards Sakura.

    Sakura in awe starts to go backwards.
    Sakura with a trembling voice: Don't come near me!
    Madara with a serious tone now: You're even weaker than that old senju woman...pathetic!
    Sakura now glares at him with anger but she doesn't dare to attack him.
    Madara: What a weakling like you does with Naruto and Sasuke? I guess, not everyone can be perfect.
    Sakura's anger along with her sadness are now obvious but she still doesn't make a move towards Madara.
    Madara now enjoying his small talk: But at least you're not as stupid as your sensei, you know when to give up.
    Obito annoyed: Just stop it already Madara! There is no reason for you to torture her!
    Madara now with a smirk looks towards Obito: I guess you're right. After all, what I want is what belongs to me. (Madara starts to walk towards Obito, who can't move because of Black Zetsu's control, passing by the fallen Sakura).

    Sakura now with a quick movement turns towards Madara: You can say whatever you want for me but don't you dare to put in your mouth the name of Lady Tsunade! ( She uses all her physical power empowered with chakra to land a powerful hit on Madara's back) Take this, as*hole!!!
    Madara immediatey turns around and catches her hand in the air crashing the bones of her arm just with his raw power.
    Madara now with a calm voice: Turns out that you're not as pathetic as her, you're even more stupid... and courageous.
    Sakura looks in his eyes in full of fear and tries not to scream from the pain.
    Obito angered now: Are you really that cold-hearted?!
    Madara: As I said, it's a war and in a war everything is allowed.After all, this war is your doing, you should have known it first- hand, haven't you done terrible things as well Obito? Even to kill little innocent girls.
    Obito now with a shocked face becomes incredibly furious and tries to overpower Black Zetsu's control: You bastard!!!

    Madara with a sadistic voice, it seems you finally figured it out. In any case, (seeing Obito's struggle) it's futile. Don't try to move. The time of your death hasn't come yet, not before I say so. (turning now Sakura) You my girl will come with us. (Before Sakura does anything he grabs her from her head) Don't try to move too much. I don't want to kill you accidentally.
    Obito tries to regain control of his body but to no avail.
    Madara now turns to Obito: Say, Obito, do you now the famous saying?!
    Obito now looks at him with curiosity.
    Madara takes now full control of Obito's body: An eye for eye ( each one of them takes outs his rinnegan and sharingan, Obito and madara respectively), a tooth for a tooth( Madara regains his pair of rinnegan while Obito his pair of Sharingan), (Madara forces now Obito to use his Kamui to return the 3 of them in the real world).

    Sasuke: There! ( Both of naruto and Sasuke try to attack them, while 3 of them are being Kamuied in between of them, but they're stopped by a dark-aura Susanoo). (Sasuke in his mind: Damn! I won't be able to use my technique for some time now!)

    and Madara now with a triaphant face: and a life for a life! ( Now looking towards Naruto who is left completely shocked by the turn of the events) Your life in exchange for hers, what will be your decision Naruto!


    Naruto's ordeal begins!



    I hope you liked it guys, I did



    P.S Since I saw that many of you don't believe that Sakura being taken hostage is likely to happen, I would like to point out one thing: Kushina, Konan, Rin, Karin, Hinata almost when she was kid, all of these heroines had fallen victims of abduction. Do you see the circle here? Sakura is the next one in the row.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Quote Originally Posted by Byron123 View Post
    Scene shows Madara, Obito and Sakura in the kamui dimension with first shooting a black rod.

    Madara: No, I won't let you!
    Obito gets in the way and takes the hit in his stomack.
    Sakura shocked: You!
    Obito with weakened voice: It's okay Sakura, I won't fail for a second time.
    Sakura runs towards Obito to heal him.
    Obito: Sakura no!
    Madara: Oh no you don't little girl!
    Madara uses Limbo and holds her in the air restricting all her movements. Sakura looks terrified.
    Obito screaming in pain by the wound: Leave her, Madara, she's of no use to me, you only want me!
    Obito is about to crash his rinnegan with his bare hand but suddenly he feels a weight in his stomack.
    Obito ni anger: Ahh! What did you do to me?!
    Madara with a calm yet sadistic voice: I keep my animal under control. Now, (he turns towars Sakura) no need to get so afraid, yet. (he stops the limbo and as she falls Madara comes fast from behind and immobilizes her by holding her by her neck.

    Obito now has lost the control of his body but Black Zetsu forces him to stay up.
    Obito starts smirking which slowly turns into a manical laughter.
    Madara angered: What's so funny idiot?!
    Obito now slowly stops laughing: I can't believe that you're such a coward Madara, Naruto and Sasuke must have given you a really hard time in order for you to resort to such cheap tricks. That's low even for you.
    Now it's Madara's turn to smirk.
    Madara: Obito, you know me better than this. I grew in an era of wars and I learned one single thing: Everything is allowed in a war! (and after a look towards Sakura's struggling) and in love as well!
    Sakura shocked by Madara's words tries to kick him and even though she doesn't manage to anything other than to make him laugh, his grab loses its wrath, leaving her stand face to face with madara.
    Madara: And now what little girl?
    Sakura in tears in her eyes: Take this! (She punches him in his cheak) (What?!)
    Madara's left completely unfazed by the attack and now she moves towards Sakura.

    Sakura in awe starts to go backwards.
    Sakura with a trembling voice: Don't come near me!
    Madara with a serious tone now: You're even weaker than that old senju woman, pathetic!
    Sakura now glares at him with anger but she doesn't dare to attack him.
    Madara: What a weakling like you does with Naruto and Sasuke? I guess not everyone can be perfect.
    Sakura's anger along with her sadness are now obvious but she still doesn't make a move towards Madara.
    Madara now enjoying his small talk: But at least you're as stupid as your sensei, you know when to give up.
    Obito annoyed: Just stop it already Madara! There is no reason for you to torture her!
    Madara now with a smirk looks towards Obito: I guess you're right. After all what I want is what it belongs to me. (Madara starts to walk towards Obito, who can't move because of Black Zetsu's control, passing by the fallen Sakura).

    Sakura now a quick movement turns towards Madara: You can say whatever you want for me but don't you dare put in your mouth the name of Lady Tsunade! ( She uses all her physical power empowered with chakra to land a powerful hit on Madara's back) Take this, as*hole!!!
    Madara immediatey turns around and catches her hand in the air crashing τhe bones of her arm just with his raw power.
    Madara now with a calm voice: Turns out that you're not as pathetic as her, you're even more stupid... and courageous.
    Sakura looks in his eyes with full of fear and tries not to scream from the pain.
    Obito angered now: Are you really that cold-hearted?!
    Madara: As I said, it's a war and in a war everything is allowed, even to kill small innocent girls.
    Obito now with a shocked face becomes incredibly furious and tries to overpower Black Zetsu's control: You bastard!!!

    Madara with a sadistic voice, it seems you finally figured it out. In any case (seeing Obito's struggle) it's futile. Don't try to move. The time of your death hasn't come yet, not before I say so. (turning now Sakura) You my girl will come with us. (Before Sakura does anything he grabs her from her head) Don't try to move to much. I don't want to kill you accidentally.
    Obito tries regain control of his body but to no avail.
    Madara now turns to Obito: Say, Obito, do you now the famous saying?!
    Obito now looks at him with curiosity.
    Madara takes now full control of Obito's body: An eye for eye ( each one of them takes outs his rinnegan and sharingan, Obito and madara respectively), a tooth for a tooth( Madara regains his pair of rinnegan while Obito his pair of Sharingan), (Madara forces now Obito to use his Kamui to return the 3 of them in the real world).

    Sasuke: There! ( Both of naruto and Sasuke try to attack them, while 3 of them are being Kamuied in between of them, but they're stopped by a dark-aura Susanoo). (Sasuke in his mind: Damn! I won't be able to use my technique for some time now!)

    and Madara now with a triaphant face: and a life for a life! ( Now looking towards Naruto who is left completely shocked by the turn of the events) Your life in exchange for hers, what will be your decision Naruto!


    Naruto's ordeal begins!



    I hope you liked it guys, I did
    great prediction man!
     
         
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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    even to kill small little girls? Really? You think madara would say something like that? Anyways, its a prediction based on your own personal preference, so it wont happen this way.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Isn't Madara cut in half?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Quote Originally Posted by anonymityIx View Post
    Isn't Madara cut in half?
    isnt nardo already dead
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Ok, nice to know.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Quote Originally Posted by novacore View Post
    even to kill small little girls? Really? You think madara would say something like that? Anyways, its a prediction based on your own personal preference, so it wont happen this way.
    I know this sentence doesn't suit him but I intentionally put him using it to tease Obito and to make him realize that he was behind Rin's death. Besides, it's highly possible for Madara to want to take a hostage. Since Naruto and Sasuke together are very strong, what a better way to make his fight easier by forcing one of them to commit suicide to save the life of the one he loves?
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    Isn't Madara cut in half?
    Yeah, I'll add it, but it's not such a big deal, we know how he regenerates very fast.
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    great prediction man!
    Thanks man
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Nice Prediction! I liked the saying you put in "Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth, and a life for a life" in conjunction with Madara's actions of controlling Obito.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Quote Originally Posted by Sparks View Post
    Nice Prediction! I liked the saying you put in "Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth, and a life for a life" in conjunction with Madara actions of controlling Obito.
    Haha thanks, you know it's one of those small things that once you think of them, you must somehow put them in
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Quote Originally Posted by Byron123 View Post
    Haha thanks, you know it's one of those small things that once you think of them, you must somehow put them in
    Yea and with Madara taking Sakura hostage, Naruto might be forced to evaluate Itachi's quote to him "You're such a child. You talk nothing of pipe dreams... There are times when people must make painful choices." His life for Sakura's.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    “are you really that cold hearted?” says the man who tortuned the main character by killing off portions of the entire SA and his friends
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    It was an interesting read. But I don't think madara will set there and tease them when his limbo version is getting ****ed up by naruto. He's just going to get his rinnegan and quickly try to kill them and leave
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Very, Very Nice!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Quote Originally Posted by throneoo View Post
    “are you really that cold hearted?” says the man who tortuned the main character by killing off portions of the entire SA and his friends
    Yeah I know but the reason for which I emphasize on that is that I wanted to imply that Sakura reminds to Obito Rin and that's why madara tried to tease by specifically talking about killing small innocent girls.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mikeyofthesharingan View Post
    It was an interesting read. But I don't think madara will set there and tease them when his limbo version is getting ****ed up by naruto. He's just going to get his rinnegan and quickly try to kill them and leave
    Well as for the teasing you're probably right but as for Sakura and Obito I highly doubt about that. Why should he kill him as long as he can keep him under control and all that while he manages to boost his power with a Susanoo. It would be a powerful asset, to have him with both of his MS. Same goes for Sakura, killing her won't succeed anything since she already doesn't pose any threat to him. However, using him as a hostage can result to the death of naruto and thus making his fight against Sasuke way easier. It would actually help a lot plot-wise.
    Quote Originally Posted by Sparks View Post
    Yea and with Madara taking Sakura hostage, Naruto might be forced to evaluate Itachi's quote to him "You're such a child. You talk nothing of pipe dreams... There are times when people must make painful choices." His life for Sakura's.
    Indeed, and in general it would be a interesting twist of events since it would go to show how dirty Madara's games can be and the general cruelty of a war.
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    Very, Very Nice!!!
    Thanks man
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Good prediction ! :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

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    Good prediction ! :D
    Wow you're a fast reader and thanks
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Oi oi oi, I've just found myself another predictions sensei, great job!

    I like the idea of Obito's susanno (I gave it to Kakashi ) , the ending is tense.

    Kanpai!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Quote Originally Posted by Waindo View Post
    Oi oi oi, I've just found myself another predictions sensei, great job!

    I like the idea of Obito's susanno (I gave it to Kakashi ) , the ending is tense.

    Kanpai!
    Haha thanks, well I thought it would be more twisted to give a Susanoo to his original owner and to make him get to unlock the full potential of his MS only to be served as a puppet in madara's hands.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    No bad no bad
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Come'on man, we just hear him (madara) say: lets see who is the strongest or something like that in the previous chapter. There is no way he'd get this low to bargain naruto's life for sakura. You made it look like madara is a pathetic villian who would resort to this kind of shit (just like villians in indian movies, who would go so far for trading heros life). Sorry man, didnt like it.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Quote Originally Posted by itach15 View Post
    No bad no bad
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    Quote Originally Posted by Silvers Rayliegh View Post
    Come'on man, we just hear him (madara) say: lets see who is the strongest or something like that in the previous chapter. There is no way he'd get this low to bargain naruto's life for sakura. You made it look like madara is a pathetic villian who would resort to this kind of shit (just like villians in indian movies, who would go so far for trading heros life). Sorry man, didnt like it.
    Well neither did I expect him to go after the rinnegan so fast because he was cornered, yet here we are.

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    Thank you.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    amazing nice great job
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    It was a nice read but aren't you forgetting that madara cannot use limbo because naruto has blocked his shadow in the real world?
    I'll give it a 4/5
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 675: Madara's slyness

    Quote Originally Posted by The Lightning Lord View Post
    amazing nice great job
    Thank you
    Quote Originally Posted by -ahhimane- View Post
    It was a nice read but aren't you forgetting that madara cannot use limbo because naruto has blocked his shadow in the real world?
    I'll give it a 4/5
    Indeed but I hadn't understood completely how it works and that's why I put him using it.
     
         

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