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    What We Believe

    There's what I'd like to believe
    And there's what I'd like to receive
    There's something lost I'd like to grieve
    But in the end what would that achieve?

    No we didn't have a perfect start
    Nor did we enjoy our time apart
    So let's throw the junk in a cart
    And throw it in the heart of the past like a sharp dart

    So may say this is not yet our time
    But what do they know either than a dime?
    If loving each other is a crime
    Then I'll gladly give it another rhyme..

    I can't say it'll always be perfect
    But nothing in life is that we can respect
    It's still each other that we'll never reject
    Now why are we still listening to what other's inject

    There's what we believe is true
    There's what I receive from you
    And there's no grieving still due
    There's only what we can achieve as two
     
         

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    Re: What We Believe

    Great work. I really enjoy reading your work, I look forward to your next poem.
     
         

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    Re: What We Believe

    You know what rhymes with orange don't you?
     
         

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    Re: What We Believe

    Good very good.
     
         

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    Re: What We Believe

    Beautiful. I love reading your poems.
     
         

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    Re: What We Believe

    Nice poem......
     
         

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    Re: What We Believe

    Quote Originally Posted by YokoKurama View Post
    Beautiful. I love reading your poems.
    Be nice if what's said in this poem still rang true for me. Just goes to show how ****ed up I've got it, because the girl this was written for is now on my most hated list. Which says a lot seeing as she's only the second person I have ever really hated ever.
     
         

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