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    Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Naruto Chapter 680 – Forefather {by Edo Hashirama}

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    Scene Begins with All Team 7 members looking in awe at KAGUYA’s godly power……..
    Sasuke: Ugh….

    Naruto: Ugh….

    Sakura: This is ….

    Kakashi: A god!

    Everyone lands on what seem like a debris with a grin on Naruto and Sasuke’s faces
    Naruto: hey Sasuke….you’re a self-proclaimed team 7 leader, have you come up with any plan yet ?

    Sakura: Naruto-kun is right Sasuke k….u
    Sasuke: I said you should just shut up sakura…your opinion doesn’t matter here!

    Kakashi: {some things still never change even after coming back from darkness} sighs#
    Kakashi: Sasuke, Naruto …..you said you both met with the So6p right? And you both seem to know the enemy in front of us…I think its better you relay whatever information that might help us analyze this situation

    Sasuke: !!!!! {that’s it}!
    Before they could formulate any strategy, Kaguya send down a Black thunderstorm similar to the JUUBI’s Ten-pen-chi
    Kaguya: (Spreads her two hands upwards) Raikyu-Tenchi

    Naruto: Sasuke!!!!!!!
    Sasuke:{ These two are just hindrances} (He quickly covers Sakura and Kakashi with his Susanoo)

    Susanoo gets completely destroyed by the powerful strike of the thunderstorm leaving Kakashi half-dead and thanks to Sakura’s byakugou still active, starts healing herself as well as kneeling to heal kakashi but sasuke looks completely in disbelief while Naruto is landing just a meter beside him

    Naruto: Kakashi Sensei!!
    Sakura: He’ll be fine
    Sasuke: Naruto….

    Naruto: I know….( Quickly makes a clone carrying both Sakura and Kakashi along with him to a far away location)
    Sasuke: {Kaguya mentioned Hamura..so that must be Rikudo’s brother that fought alongside him against the Juubi}

    {Tobi did mention something about Senju’s distant Relative being the Uzumakis and Rikudo’s decendants are just the Uchihas and Senjus}
    Sasuke: (Snaps out of thought)!
    Naruto: (Yells) Sasuke! Have you come up with anything yet?

    SFX: Step! Step!! Step!!!
    Scenes shows Hashirama and Tobirama walking towards both Sasuke and Naruto.
    Sasuke: So you were able to remove Madara’s chakra immediately he got possessed right?
    Tobirama: {Uchiha sasuke,smart as always} you have changed also Naruto

    Hashirama: (Smirks)….umh….sorry I am late
    Sasuke: Hokages…we will need your help to do something but for now….we need to retreat!
    Naruto: are you insane? People are gonna be turned into zetsu and you want us to retreat?

    Sasuke: Shut up Loser! Even Rikudoo said she’s far more powerful that nobody could defeat her
    Tobirama: How do you intend on us helping out if Rikudo couldn’t defeat this woman?
    Naruto/Sasuke :Because She was his mother!

    Hashirama/Tobirama:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
    Sasuke: Hashirama….you married an Uzumaki right?
    Hashirama: Yes…why do u ask?

    Sasuke: This woman had 2 sons …..one was Rikudo and the other is supposed to be the Forefathers of the Uzumaki and there must be some kind of secret about him so we need to device a plan based on that hypothesis and fast!

    Hashirama: I promised MITO never to tell anyone though but I guess i have no choice…Tobi!
    Tobirama: Alright brother
    Naruto: Forefathers?!!!!!!!!!!!!! UHn..wait, wait….
    They all retreat with the help of Tobirama’s FTG and lands in an uzumaki Temple with hashirama bringing out a scroll from his pouch

    Hashirama: Uzumaki Naruto!
    Naruto: Uhnm!(puzzled face) Ai!
    Hashirama: I need your blood for a contract (Places the scroll in naruto’s front)

    Naruto: (Screams) {Zombies drinks blood} Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
    Sasuke: Naruto! Cut the crap already!

    Chapter Ends with Tobirama looking surprised about what’s about to unfold!
    Side text: who is Hashirama about to summon and what help is he gonna offer?

    hope u enjoyed it
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    Last edited by edo hashirama1; 06-04-2014 at 12:59 PM.

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Great prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    good one!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    so you want to say that sage bother was the first uzamaki father like sage is the father of the first senju and first uchiha anyway great predication keep it up
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Drops....

    rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Quote Originally Posted by LUMOS ULTIMATUM View Post
    Great prediction.
    Thanks a lot..glad you liked it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Quote Originally Posted by Raiolu25 View Post
    Drops....

    rep
    thanks bro
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Quote Originally Posted by ahmher View Post
    so you want to say that sage bother was the first uzamaki father like sage is the father of the first senju and first uchiha anyway great predication keep it up
    Yea bro..........kishi sama seem unpredictable these days and quote me bro ''he might make his appearance''
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    mhh nice idea really like it. has some fresh stuff in it. i am the same opinion.

    sorry if some spelling mistakes. ftw
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    something new at last.great prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Quote Originally Posted by cube View Post
    mhh nice idea really like it. has some fresh stuff in it. i am the same opinion.

    sorry if some spelling mistakes. ftw
    Hahahahahah nice one bro
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Quote Originally Posted by keshav31 View Post
    something new at last.great prediction
    Really? I could make another in 2 days from now
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Not a good prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Awesome Prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    That was more than interesting if your interested check out mine

    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=531094
    hope you enjoy it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Nice prediction.....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Awesome prediction! Dat ending...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    the only clan strong enough to stand beside the senju was the uzumaki.The uzumaki surpassed the senju in sealing prowess and long living. i like this predicition
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    This or something similar to this would be pretty cool, but that beginning speech was a little bit bad. It seemed a little bit unnecessary and out of character. Also you forgot the fact that at the end of the last chapter, they were falling into a pit of magma, not random debris. The only ones who were any close to something that they could land on were Kakashi and Obito. That part should be resolved before they are standing in front of her. Plus I doubt they would just stand in front of her and think.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    SO u want to tell Harumo is the father of uzzumaki..Den add he had two kids uzzumaki and a hyuga..jst like madara did..by combined power of senju and uchiha he got more powerful..so if naruto get neji's eyes.. he'll be more powerful..
     
         
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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    I love it!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Cool, but don't forget she teleported them above what looked like lava...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Oh man
    awesome prediction

    keep it up.

    5/5
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 680 - Forefather

    Maybe the uzumaki and hyuuga clans were the decendant of hamura. Nice prediction.you think like kishi
     
         

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