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    Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

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    The explosion from sasanoo's attack rings far and wide .The edo kage are shown with overwhelming the expression on their faces, as they race toward the scene.

    Naruto is shown shielding kakashi and sakura from the debris.but a fragment escapes hitting kakashi in the head and leaving him unconscious.

    The cloud of debris is slowly settles and sasuke is made visable.
    He is wrapped in kaguya's hair.

    Naruto springs forward and launches a barrage of bijuu bomb rasen shurikan the first hits directley on with no effect the second nearly severs it completley.eventually the final cut is made .It quickly becomes apparant that the shurikan from Narutos sun tattoo was the only one that had any effect.
    Naruto quickly catches sasuke mid air.

    Sasuke are you ok
    Yah, that needle she hit me with earlier apparently hit the chakra point that controls the power in this hand my attack had no effect on her

    Let me see

    Sasuke reaches his hand out to naruto
    And naruto puts his hand over the wound
    And sends chakra through it to heal but it backlashes
    I cant undo it somehow she put a seal on it aswell and now the seal is affecting my sun marking
    even so she drained a lot of my chakra im not sure where we go from here but it isnt looking good
    Kaguya uses a similar attack

    I will have my power back she says

    Naruto counters but now weakened the attack is too strong and soon becomes overwhelmed
    Naruto Shields his eyes

    !Water release water formation wall
    Earth release mud wall
    The barriers lighten the attack but soon fall covering the lava
    The edo kage jump down onto a platform just created from their jutsus over the lava and stand firm
    Naruto and sasuke stand in amazment the timing couldnt have been better

    Let me assist you fourth , says the second
    Sorry I didnt do this sooner

    He reanimates the fourths arms
    It seems we have a new opponent who far exceeds Madara
    Says the third

    I see mere puppets you are and of zetzu flesh none the less
    my tools my will
    Zetzus spring from the ground grasping the kage legs
    Their bodies move like fluid as they engulf the kage then absorb into their flesh
    kaguya uses genjutsu on the kage through the zetzu
    You are my will
    Yes lady kaguya respond the kage
    my fruit will soon ripen
    Dispose of these nuisances I have more important matters to deal with
    Kaguya vanishes

    Flying thunder god technique
    A dagger quickly hits the ground next to Naruto and as it hits the fourth appears
    Blasting Naruto with a rasengan

    Sasuke blocks move after move as the second strikes time and time until sasuke is kicked in the chest and sent backward

    Narutos clone and sakura defend massive attacks from sarutobi and hashirama

    Dad I know your in there you have to fight it
    Naruto is struck down by his father
    Minato throws four daggers surounding Naruto then more into the air before Naruto can react hes kicked ffrom behind then punched from the front before he knows he is hurled into the air attack after fierce attack and finally slammed downward soon minato is diving directly toward him with a rasengan
    Sasuke quickly uses his time jutsu to move Naruto in the nick of time

    hes not your father anymore drop the emotions or were All dead
    Got it!

    Narutos clone is destroyed by hiruzen
    Sakura stands shielding kakashi as he lies unconsious on the ground
    Fire style jutsu
    Naruto dashes to sakuras aid launching wind style rasen shurikan in front of the attack the flames spew back at sarutobi
    Naruto grabs kakashi and sakuras hand and begins to fly out of the volcano only to be hit by hashiramas wooden dragon summon dragon dives down after Naruto
    Sasanoo's sword slices its head off
    But sasuke is then hit from behind by water jutsu from the second
    If you get in the way again ill kill you myself
    sasuke says to sakura
    Naruto has a shocked look on his face
    Sakuras face turns from sadness to determination
    She punches the ground as large splints of pointed hot lava rock rise into the air she quickly grabs a piece and launches it right at sasuke it stops passing sasuke only missing his head by an inch
    And sticking into sarutobis head who stands behind she jumps over sasuke and slices the third in half
    Sasuke uses amaterasu on the third zetzu is seen squirming out of the burnt corpes
    Im sorry sakura says naruto
    Dont be hes right
    Hes an ass but hes right its time I show im not just a weak kanoichi
    Sakura races toward hashirama and battles fiercely
    Sasuke continues with tobirama
    And Naruto with minato
    Blades clash sasuke is sent back and activates chidori sending it through his sword
    Their blades clash again and the second is sent flying back sakura hits the ground hashirama stumbles but recovers the second rolls off the edge frantically grasping and slippinguntil he falls into the lava
    Sasuke jumps over to assist sakura by clashing with hashirama
    Sakura hits hashirama indenting his chest and hurling him into a wall
    Sasuke uses amaterasu on hashirama
    I dont need your help says sakura
    Sasuke eager to finish it uses ameterasu on minato
    But as he teleports the flames fail to stay attached he repeats with the same result
    Naruto we have to seal him the flames wont stick
    How your arm he says while dodging blow after blow
    Sakura grabs sasukes arm
    What are you doing
    Dont worry its not for you
    She sends chakra through his arm the seal lights up
    It must be related to senju
    Sakura releases the seal
    Naruto remember the chuunin exams your fight with neji

    Im kinda busy he says as hes hit across the face and slammed to the ground

    Ive got it says sakura

    Sakura races to Naruto and kicks the fourth as he appears
    She pulls Naruto up and removes the seal
    Thanks


    Minato appears sakura continues the battle hand to hand she hits him across the battlefield again a kunai falls in front of her she knocks it into another direction minato appears with his back to her she quickly grabs him and quickly marks him with seal after seal each one stronger than the last
    She quickly performs hand signs
    Kage Sixth dimensional banishing technique
    His body quickley turns to stone then ash

    Relief fills team sevens faces and sakura releases her healing jutsu then a shocked look on her face a blade pierces her heart tobirama stands scolding hot and engulfed in flamesNaruto and sasuke quickly react knocking him away sasuke uses a sealing tech from Oro

    Im sorry Naruto
    No dont your going to be ok
    no im not talking about that
    Ive spent my life chasing after sasuke
    And he didn't care
    You you've been there the whole time haven't you
    Sasuke was right but I had no reason in this war
    But I did hold my own right
    Im sad it took me this long to realise I really love you
    I really do its funny hinata deserves you shes been in love with you since day one she knew who you were before anyone else
    Please save this world stay alive and know love as I wasted my life chasing false hope in a blind love
    Make hinata a lucky woman
    Use the bijuus chakra to unblock the chakra points just like when neji blocked your Chaka
    Sakura eyes close and her heart stops
    Naruto forces bijuu chakra through his body
    Unblocking the Chaka point in his hand
    He reignites the flame in her chest but
    It exstiguishes itself he tries again
    However this time it fails to ignite at all
    I see Naruto says as he rises to his feet
    His head rises and tears are seen rolling down his face
    His teeth sharpen and flames roll off of his body furiously
    Naruto passes bijju chackra to sasuke
    Sasuke we finish her then
    Its you and me
    Got it
    That was the plan all along idiot
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    To set the mood.

     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    If the second could help the fourth with his arms, he would have did it a long time ago
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Good.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Sorry guys this is nowhere near done I write as I go but phone was dying will update asap
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Good but too short
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    cool thread specialy naruto saving sasuke part
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    its good but short...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Quote Originally Posted by -Nagato- View Post
    Good but too short
    Still needs some work but I wouldnt say its too short anymore lol
     
         
    Last edited by shonersage; 06-12-2014 at 09:32 AM.

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    wall of text with no colour. why did i begin to read it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    I know u did ur best with this prediction.... but there is no chance of what u put here happening... Sakura throwing her life away.... the hokages being used for kayuga's own purpose & Knocking kakashi out... Man that prediction sucked ass.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaOfKonoha View Post
    I know u did ur best with this prediction.... but there is no chance of what u put here happening... Sakura throwing her life away.... the hokages being used for kayuga's own purpose & Knocking kakashi out... Man that prediction sucked ass.
    I think sasuke is right and naruto should end up with hinata so i wrote it with those two things in mind
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaOfKonoha View Post
    I know u did ur best with this prediction.... but there is no chance of what u put here happening... Sakura throwing her life away.... the hokages being used for kayuga's own purpose & Knocking kakashi out... Man that prediction sucked ass.
    Not really I could write out at least five different predictions before the next chapter releases give me a topic and I run with it I just get bored with punctuation and lose interest
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    in short I feel sakura must die in order for the story to progress
    and knowing how kishi has trolled her so much I think he will make her useful prior to his final major sakura trolling
    I also don't believe she can show any worth against kaguya as she is too powerful
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    give me your ideas and I will write another prediction with those in mind
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Quote Originally Posted by shonersage View Post
    in short I feel sakura must die in order for the story to progress
    and knowing how kishi has trolled her so much I think he will make her useful prior to his final major sakura trolling
    I also don't believe she can show any worth against kaguya as she is too powerful
    LOL sure sakura can show no worth but kakashi is in the same boat too.... but ur forgetting obito is there so if naruto wakes him up from a coma.... well kishi has something in mind for obito to be given a send off like a true shinobi... dieing on the battlefield for your comrades. + of course u want sakura dead. ur a naruhina fan. I'm not surprised. with naruhina fans... killing sakura off is like eliminating the competition for who gets naruto's heart.... am I right?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    & I highly doubt Sakura will die in the war lol. she is the Main Heroine in the series.... if u didn't know this.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    If Sasuke and Naruto could lose to the Kage or at least battle on their level, then they must have gotten weaker over the last few chapters. They could at least fight Madara and be on par with him. Madara soloed the 5 Kage. So Naruto and Sasuke also should be able to.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaOfKonoha View Post
    LOL sure sakura can show no worth but kakashi is in the same boat too.... but ur forgetting obito is there so if naruto wakes him up from a coma.... well kishi has something in mind for obito to be given a send off like a true shinobi... dieing on the battlefield for your comrades. + of course u want sakura dead. ur a naruhina fan. I'm not surprised. with naruhina fans... killing sakura off is like eliminating the competition for who gets naruto's heart.... am I right?
    Not really naruhina fan but it seems more promising than the opposed
    And as for Naruto and sasuke being weaker to battle the kage that was the point with sasuke losing the chakra point in his arm and and accidentally passing it to naruto

    The idea is to pitt sakura up against someone she might actually stand a chance against so she can finally show some worth and actual development it wasnt madara and sure in hell isnt kaguya so the kage are the only powerful option to give her some value
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Quote Originally Posted by shonersage View Post
    Not really naruhina fan but it seems more promising than the opposed
    And as for Naruto and sasuke being weaker to battle the kage that was the point with sasuke losing the chakra point in his arm and and accidentally passing it to naruto

    The idea is to pitt sakura up against someone she might actually stand a chance against so she can finally show some worth and actual development it wasnt madara and sure in hell isnt kaguya so the kage are the only powerful option to give her some value
    Push comes to shove... Sasuke don't give a rats ass about sakura & kakashi... he sees them as nothing but dead weight...& as he said they were next to naruto. I've read through the latest chapters... nothing comes to mind sasuke is trying to influence naruto go for hinata... he ain't no matchmaker lol. sakura has shown development during the war. do u really expect someone like sakura to stand toe to toe with the legendary Madara Uchiha & Kaguya? No I don't think so. right now its not about her. its about Naruto & Sasuke.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    damn too long
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Sakura was the hero ...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    you are biased against naruto...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    I really enjoyed it except for the last part. I don't think sakura will die and she will not say all those things
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 681 My Sacrifice

    Nice try, but I'm opposing where u said d 2nd re annimated d 4ths hand. No1 he can't, cause reanimation isn't 4 a part of d body, but 2 ressurect a whole body. No2, he can't cos it was one of d black orbs of madara dt got him. So d only thing dt makes sence of how d 4th(Minato) got his hand back is if Naruto uses his yin chakra in restoring his arm lyk he did 4 kakashi. Peace
     
         

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