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    Onslaught Bio (Updated)

    I stand for Justice and Peace

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    Name: Eric(Onslaught) Xavier
    Nickname: That which shall survive
    Gender: Male
    Age: 40
    Clan: None

    Appearance: This proud man is approximately 7 feet tall weighing in at 295 lbs. His suit is a collection of Samurai armor. His eyes are glowing white, and he has no hair.

    Personality: Onslaught is known as the cold hearted outcast, he dreams of the day when he get's to see his little daughter Lucy again. He seeks only the destruction of a man that killed and raped his Wife and his 9 year old daughter. He is described as a stern man who believes knowledge is power. He shows no compassion or mercy to those who go against him, or try to end his journey of revenge and resolve.




    Village Info :
    Village of Birth: Kumogakure
    Village of Alliance: Konohagakure

    Rank/ Chakra Info:
    Ninja Rank: S - Jounin
    Specialty: None
    Elements: Earth - Needs Training
    L:ightning - Needs Training



    Background Info:
    HISTORY: Onslaught was a kind man known by the name Eric Xavier who only lived his life for His pride and joy, Lucy his 9 year old daughter, and his beautiful wife Abigail. While on a recon mission to spy on the Hidden leaf, his home was invaded by a missing nin. They ferociously tore his house apart, and as if part of a sick game took care in raping his wife and daughter one after the other then slicing their throats and leaving. Hearing this news he set out on a journey and with an aid from Konohagakure, he fashioned a unique armor which is seemingly stronger than normal samurai armor and more resistant. He decided he was no longer the kind hearted man but a vengeful soul whom he named Onslaught.





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    Won: -
    Lost: -

    - Updating last Onslaught bio, changing my amount of elements-


    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Reborn; 06-20-2014 at 03:01 AM. Reason: Time Stamp: Approved 6/19

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    Re: Onslaught Bio (Updated)

    nice bio but you cant have something as a specialty if you dont have training in it
     
         

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    Re: Onslaught Bio (Updated)

    So you updated for nothing basically? That's cool.
     
         

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    Re: Onslaught Bio (Updated)

    No he edited his other bio that I already approved...permission to yell at him granted to those who wish
     
         

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    Re: Onslaught Bio (Updated)

    Quote Originally Posted by Moxxi View Post
    So you updated for nothing basically? That's cool.
    Wait this is the right way to do it though, right?
     
         

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    Re: Onslaught Bio (Updated)

    Quote Originally Posted by patrickscott View Post
    Wait this is the right way to do it though, right?
    No . Just because you ranked up and can learn another element doesn't mean you jump to making an update. You update as you learn a bundle of things. And based on what Reborn said, you edited your prior bio after it was approved? That's a no no.
     
         

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    Re: Onslaught Bio (Updated)



    Ya know what they say for dem girls.
     
         

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    Re: Onslaught Bio (Updated)

    And your armor being "shock absorbent" would be a very cosmetic ability as you cannot do this without a jutsu. So when you battle, don't say "My armor absorbs it" like 99% of the new RPers would or you will surely get laughed at.
     
         

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    Re: Onslaught Bio (Updated)

    Quote Originally Posted by Moxxi View Post
    And your armor being "shock absorbent" would be a very cosmetic ability as you cannot do this without a jutsu. So when you battle, don't say "My armor absorbs it" like 99% of the new RPers would or you will surely get laughed at.
    Yes thank you I will definitely be taking that into regard when battling, thanks!
     
         

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    Re: Onslaught Bio (Updated)

    Quote Originally Posted by Reborn View Post
    No he edited his other bio that I already approved...permission to yell at him granted to those who wish
    *yells at him*
     
         

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