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    Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    You can read this as an intro. It's a poem from Black Zetsu's perspective.

    ♪°Spores of doom°

    Enjoy the read.

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    Black Zetsu: My mother is the progenitor of all chakra. You brats can't do anything.

    Sasuke: We must create an opening to use the sealing jutsu.

    Naruto: Yeah! We'll have to use that...that technique....
    ------------------------------


    Naruto: Let's do this!

    *Naruto starts producing countless bunshins without making a handseal, he lifts his arm, and points it towards Kaguya.

    On the movement of his arm, the rest of his gudoudamas form dozens of platforms that lead to Kaguya, creating a staircase.*

    *Thousands of Naruto's bunshins are running up the stairs towards Kaguya, while another panel shows Naruto and Sasuke's sun and moon marks violently glowing.

    All of the sudden Kaguya lifts her view, noticing an army of bunshins, a loud burst of cry is heard, she starts hysterically crying.*

    *A panel shows a puddle of tears on the last gudoudama platform beneath her feet, the puddle starts forming into a river of fluid, rapidly increasing it's flow. The alive looking river of tears, poofs out all of the bunshins on it's path.

    A huge wave proceeds towards Naruto and Sasuke with shocked expressions shown on their faces.*

    Sasuke: This...this is a largest suiton attack I've ever seen.

    Naruto: Eehhh!? What's with this crazy lady.

    Sasuke: Naruto, behind me, now!

    Naruto: You wish, jerk!

    Naruto/Sasuke: Yoton/Enton: Oodama Rasengan/Amaterasu

    *A giant molten rasengan enveloped in black flames takes shape in front of Naruto and Sasuke, taking the immense stream of water head on.

    A huge cloud of smoke occurs as the attacks nullify one another.*

    *As the smoke clears out, Kaguya is seen sitting on the ground, her hystericall cries are echoing from the cavern.

    Black Zetsu starts manifesting from her sleeves again, he is shown bursting out in a cloud of dust, into millions of unoticable particles/spores. His voice is heard again but he is nowhere to be seen, not even by Sasuke's rinnegan.*

    Black Zetsu: Now look what you have done! You've made our mother upset! That is unforgivable, you shall bare the consequences, now leave her be! Our mother needs some time to think.

    *Naruto and Sasuke are standing on a platform in mid air, confused and desorianted from the huge and dense smoke cloud that occured, and Black Zetsu's voice coming from thin air*

    Naruto: I can't sense him, but I know he is here!

    Sasuke: I can't see him.

    *A full page panel shows Naruto and Sasuke standing back to back in a defensive stance. Naruto is holding a mini bijuudama rasenshuriken, and Sasuke a Black Chidori*

    *Next one page panel shows the duo in the same pose but as an X-ray image, black Zetsu supstance is clearly visible enveloping their internal organs, chakra points and gates.*

    *Third one page panel shows them emotionessly standing shoulder to shoulder, both completely suited up in black Zetsu*

    Black Zetsu: Let's see, will atleast one manage to survive this time. Ashura? Indra?

    *Naruto and Sasuke Burst out into RBM and PS, Sasuke's Susanno immediatly swings his sword, Naruto's avatar promptly jumps off the sword in a kumite-like way, It's gudoudamas take shape of 10 different types of Rasenshurikens, and land on the avatar's tails, whom than fires them like a slingshot downwards, towards Sasuke.

    Sasuke's Sussano flaps his wings in an unaturally fast motion, sending all RS back to Naruto, while simoultaneously firing Enton arrows, igniting them in black flames....*

    *Naruto bunshin is shown landing outside the cavern, with Kakashi, Sakura and Obito. He places a seal on Obito's heart, reigniting his life force, immediatly poofing away afterwards*

    *Last page shows a back view of Kakashi, Sakura and unconcious Obito, overlooking the huge cavern.*

    *Violent weeps are echoing from below, rays of light are seen bursting from the huge tavern's core, each ray followed by a series of earthquakes.*

    End.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    I love what you did with Kaguya at the beginning! Here take some rep!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    This is one scary prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    good prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Kind of contradictory as sasuke can see the spiritual unknown world of limbo bit can't see a cloud of dust? Even negato could and he had a basic rinnegan.

    kaguya's tears are scary, I'm sure BZ wont state the obvious she was crying the entire last chapter. The staircase thing was created but why use staircases if Naruto can fly and sasuke has a custom built hoverboard? The clones have also shown the capacity to fly.

    its a good predictions and tears into a water style jutsu I'd hate to know what would happen if kaguya burps
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Glad you're enjoying guys!



    P.S. When Kaguya burps, she produces condensed fuuton typhoons.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    It started as epic but later it just lost its feel, it didn't have that something, good prediction though.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Even Naruto's clones can float in air.
    The number of gudoudamas are limited.

    I liked what you did with Kaguya. That's a possibility
    Also I liked what you did with BZ. But I couldn't get the picture of the battle strategy Naruto and Sasuke were doing against BZ.

    Keep it up
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Good Prediction!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Great prediction Bro!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Damn! That was an excellent prediction! Good job. Would give you some Rep but need to pass some around.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Really good prediction I like your idea of Black Zetsu splitting into a cloud of spores; it was really creative.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Thx guys. Keep them coming!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Quote Originally Posted by Waindo View Post
    You can read this as an intro. It's a poem from Black Zetsu's perspective.

    ♪°Spores of doom°

    Enjoy the read.

    ***

    Black Zetsu: My mother is the progenitor of all chakra. You brats can't do anything.

    Sasuke: We must create an opening to use the sealing jutsu.

    Naruto: Yeah! We'll have to use that...that technique....
    ------------------------------


    Naruto: Let's do this!

    *Naruto starts producing countless bunshins without making a handseal, he lifts his arm, and points it towards Kaguya.

    On the movement of his arm, the rest of his gudoudamas form dozens of platforms that lead to Kaguya, creating a staircase.*

    *Thousands of Naruto's bunshins are running up the stairs towards Kaguya, while another panel shows Naruto and Sasuke's sun and moon marks violently glowing.

    All of the sudden Kaguya lifts her view, noticing an army of bunshins, a loud burst of cry is heard, she starts hysterically crying.*

    *A panel shows a puddle of tears on the last gudoudama platform beneath her feet, the puddle starts forming into a river of fluid, rapidly increasing it's flow. The alive looking river of tears, poofs out all of the bunshins on it's path.

    A huge wave proceeds towards Naruto and Sasuke with shocked expressions shown on their faces.*

    Sasuke: This...this is a largest suiton attack I've ever seen.

    Naruto: Eehhh!? What's with this crazy lady.

    Sasuke: Naruto, behind me, now!

    Naruto: You wish, jerk!

    Naruto/Sasuke: Yoton/Enton: Oodama Rasengan/Amaterasu

    *A giant molten rasengan enveloped in black flames takes shape in front of Naruto and Sasuke, taking the immense stream of water head on.

    A huge cloud of smoke occurs as the attacks nullify one another.*

    *As the smoke clears out, Kaguya is seen sitting on the ground, her hystericall cries are echoing from the cavern.

    Black Zetsu starts manifesting from her sleeves again, he is shown bursting out in a cloud of dust, into millions of unoticable particles/spores. His voice is heard again but he is nowhere to be seen, not even by Sasuke's rinnegan.*

    Black Zetsu: Now look what you have done! You've made our mother upset! That is unforgivable, you shall bare the consequences, now leave her be! Our mother needs some time to think.

    *Naruto and Sasuke are standing on a platform in mid air, confused and desorianted from the huge and dense smoke cloud that occured, and Black Zetsu's voice coming from thin air*

    Naruto: I can't sense him, but I know he is here!

    Sasuke: I can't see him.

    *A full page panel shows Naruto and Sasuke standing back to back in a defensive stance. Naruto is holding a mini bijuudama rasenshuriken, and Sasuke a Black Chidori*

    *Next one page panel shows the duo in the same pose but as an X-ray image, black Zetsu supstance is clearly visible enveloping their internal organs, chakra points and gates.*

    *Third one page panel shows them emotionessly standing shoulder to shoulder, both completely suited up in black Zetsu*

    Black Zetsu: Let's see, will atleast one manage to survive this time. Ashura? Indra?

    *Naruto and Sasuke Burst out into RBM and PS, Sasuke's Susanno immediatly swings his sword, Naruto's avatar promptly jumps off the sword in a kumite-like way, It's gudoudamas take shape of 10 different types of Rasenshurikens, and land on the avatar's tails, whom than fires them like a slingshot downwards, towards Sasuke.

    Sasuke's Sussano flaps his wings in an unaturally fast motion, sending all RS back to Naruto, while simoultaneously firing Enton arrows, igniting them in black flames....*

    *Naruto bunshin is shown landing outside the cavern, with Kakashi, Sakura and Obito. He places a seal on Obito's heart, reigniting his life force, immediatly poofing away afterwards*

    *Last page shows a back view of Kakashi, Sakura and unconcious Obito, overlooking the huge cavern.*


    *Violent weeps are echoing from below, rays of light are seen bursting from the huge tavern's core, each ray followed by a series of earthquakes.*

    End.
    Interesting at bold.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    I'm glad you liked it. What's interesting, the fact that they're not ITed or the probable fact that Obito could potentially Kamui the whole damn cavern away? Or a random interest?


    (I am sooo contemplating about writing a sequel revolving around the second option)
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Nice Prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Thx. I know it's awesome.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    great prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Glad you liked it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Thanks dude.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    i liked it. cool suiton move by kaguya.

    liked that you found a way to make naruto and sasuke battle it out...like it's an epic battle that was waged before and only one survives. maybe that even happened with kaguya's sons. they never say what happened to the brother, right?

    liked how you gave obito his life back and i'm not an obito fanboy. maybe he could use rinne tense to bring back everyone who died in the war to make amends for his crimes. not unrealistic when you consider what naguto did for the leaf.
     
         

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    Do not fear death. Death is
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    Re: Naruto Manga 682 Prediction "Profound Tears of Condemnation" [by Waindo]

    Well glad you liked o
    It. Obito doesen't have the rinnegan anymore though.
     
         

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