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    Naruto 684: Between Worlds

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    Naruto 684: Between Worlds

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    Obito begins his plan of accessing Kaguya’s dimension in order to rescue Sasuke!! And Hagoromo’s sudden appearance!?

    Page 1
    [Obito is shown looking up at Kaguya with strong resolve. Kakashi and Naruto are both shown smiling behind him]
    Obito- Let’s do this then Naruto!
    Naruto- Yeah, my real body has a plan. When she uses her portal thingy, be ready Obito and Sakura-chan!!
    [Kakashi is shown with a small smile on his face as he begins to walk towards Obito]
    Kakashi- Obito, take good care of my students. They’re in your hands now.

    Page 2
    [Obito looks back at Kakashi]
    Obito- {smiles} Of course Kakashi, I won’t abandon my comrades!
    [Scene switches to Naruto’s original body stuck in the ice spikes]
    Naruto- {thinks} (I need a jutsu that will bind her temporarily)
    [The Eight Tails is shown speaking from Naruto’s subconscious]
    Gyuuki- Naruto use my chakra for your jutsu. My ink should be able to restrain her for a short while.

    Page 3
    Naruto- [in his mind] That might work thanks!
    [A Gudou-Dama is shown in the palm of Naruto’s concealed hand]
    [It begins to compress as the Eight-Tails chakra is added until it is the size of a large marble]
    BZ- Mother we should absorb his chakra while he is immobilized; however, {looks toward Obito} that Uchiha can be troublesome.
    [Kaguya looks toward the group of Obito, Sakura, Kakashi, and Naruto’s clone]
    Kaguya- They can be dealt with later!!

    Page 4
    [Kaguya begins to fly towards Naruto with a clawed hand extended]
    Naruto- (I must time this perfectly!!)
    Kaguya- Now your chakra is mine!!
    [Naruto forms a Cho-Oodama Rasengan in his free hand and sends it toward Kaguya with a chakra arm]
    Kaguya- That won’t work on me!
    [Kaguya simply dodges the attack, but Naruto redirects the chakra arm towards Kaguya’s back like he did to the Third Raikage]

    Page 5
    [Kaguya senses the change in direction and uses her hair to block the Rasengan]
    [Naruto is shown flinging the small Gudou Dama with the Eighth Tails chakra while Kaguya is turned around]
    Kaguya-{surprised}!!
    Naruto- Take this!! Sage Art: Ink Style Tailed Beast Bomb!!

    Page 6
    [Naruto’s jutsu collides with Kaguya and instantly expands covering a large portion of the ice dimension in ink as well as Kaguya]
    [Half of Kaguya’s body is covered in the ink which begins to harden quickly due to the cold temperature]
    BZ- Damn that Naruto! You can’t absorb senjutsu attacks as quickly. Are you alright mother?
    [Naruto is shown flying towards Kaguya while she is still struggling to break free from the ink prison]
    Naruto- Isobu! Lend me your chakra!!

    Page 7
    [Isobu is shown within Naruto’s subconscious]
    Isobu- Yes Naruto!
    [A large Rasegan surrounded by three smaller ones appears in Naruto’s right hand as Isobu’s Coral begins to surround them]
    [Kaguya sees this and manipulates the ice world to form a large block shielding her from the attack]
    Naruto- {grins} Let’s see how your ice works against this!! Sage Art: Planetary Coral Rasengan!!
    [The Planetary Coral Rasengan begins to drill through the Nature chakra enhanced ice with its multi-directional rotation]

    Page 8
    [Kaguya finally shatters the ink bindings with a burst of chakra and forms a portal behind her in order to slip away just as Naruto’s attack finishes destroying the ice]
    [Naruto’s jutsu instead hits a the side of a nearby mountain creating a large explosion]
    Naruto- She got away, but it was just what we needed! {smiles}
    [Obito is shown focused on the now shrinking portal with a close-up of his double MS]
    Obito- Naruto and Sakura now!!
    [Naruto and Sakura both put their hands onto Obito in order to transfer the chakra necessary to access Kaguya’s dimesion]

    Page 9
    Obito- I got it!!
    [Naruto’s clone, Obito and Sakura are shown being sucked into the rift created by Kamui just as Kaguya’s portal closes]
    [The portal opens again as Kaguya reappears back in the ice dimension near the original Naruto]
    [Scene switches to a black void]
    [The spiral pattern of Obito’s Kamui is shown as Naruto’s clone, Obito, and Sakura land in Kaguya’s mysterious dimension]

    Page 10
    Obito- We’ve made it. Now we must find a way to locate Sasuke.
    [The three man group begin to look over the dimension, and they see something peculiar. There are nine castles situated on large wooden platforms, each one with a different architecture]
    [Two of these castles appear to be the same ones seen in the ice and lava dimensions seen previously]
    Sakura- These buildings, what do you guys think are their purpose?
    Naruto clone- Errm. I have no idea, but two of them look like the buildings that were in the other two worlds if I remember correctly.

    Page 11
    Obito- If that’s the case, then I assume that each castle acts as an anchor or gateway of sorts that allows Kaguya to gain access to the other dimensions via her space-time shifting.
    Sakura- So this world is in a sense, a world between worlds.
    Naruto clone- So what are we waiting for, let’s go find Sasuke!!
    Obito- It’s not that simple. We simply do not have enough chakra to try each and every dimension to find Sasuke.
    Sakura- Alright then, let’s look around each building and see if we can find any clues.

    Page 12
    [Scene switches back to the Edo-Hokages and Hagoromo]
    Hashirama- So that’s what happened!!
    Tobirama- {thinks} (I knew that Naruto and Sasuke shared distinct similarities between my brother and Madara, but to think they were both reincarnations of these Indra and Ashura characters.
    Minato- (Naruto I’m glad you are safe. To think you are…)
    Hagoromo- My brother and I had never considered that my mother could one day return. The powers I gave to Naruto and Sasuke may not be enough to defeat her now.

    Page 13
    [Hagoromo’s spectral form grows hands as he grasps hold of his staff]
    Hagoromo- However, the only thing I can do now is give you what little power I have remaining, as well as a few tools that may be beneficial when facing my mother.
    [Hagoromo holds points the staff towards the Hokages, and fours bursts of energy shoot forth going into each of the Hokages]
    Minato/Hiruzen/Tobirama/Hashirama- !!?

    Page 14
    [The Edo-Hokages’ bodies are shown glowing as the cracks indicative of the Edo-Tensei begin to vanish; however, their sclera remain black]
    Tobirama- !! (This has restored us back to our full power, no it’s slightly greater than the power we had in life)
    Hashirama- I feel better than ever!!
    Hirzuen- Even a small piece of the Rikudo Sennin’s chakra is able to increase our power this much!
    [Minato’s arms are shown regenerating as he also is surprised by the boost in power]

    Page 15
    Minato- {bows in gratitude} Thank you Hagoromo-san, for helping to save my son. I am in your debt.
    Hagoromo- {smiles} It wasn’t only me that helped Naruto. It was mainly thanks to your student Obito, and Naruto’s teammate for his revival.
    [Hagoromo closes his eyes as he becomes serious]
    Hagoromo- Now I will be able to open a portal that will take you straight to where my mother is. Be ready, I won’t be able to hold it open for long.
    [Hagoromo is shown with his two Rinnegan widened, as he holds his staff vertically with both hands. The red Rinnegan marking on his head begins to glow]
    [A black, rectangular portal, similar to Kaguya’s begins to open]

    Page 16
    Hagoromo- Good luck to you all!
    [The Hokages are shown entering the portal. Once they have all entered, Hagoromo’s spectral figure is shown disappearing]
    [A hundred feet away Spiral Zetsu, who witnessed this entire event hiding behind a branch of the Shinju, is shown]
    Spiral Zetsu- I must inform Kaguya-sama of this at once!!
    [Spiral Zetsu begins to merge with a root of the Shinju]

    Page 17
    [Last page shows an exhausted Sasuke walking through the desert]
    Sasuke- {pants} I must find a way out of here, no matter what!!
    [Panel zooms out showing a domed castle in the distance]
    [Naruto’s clone is shown entering a similar structure in Kaguya’s dimension]
    Naruto clone- I think I’ll check this one out!

    The Hokages are restored to full strength and are sent to aide Naruto!! Will Sasuke be rescued in time!?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Nice one. Great effort !
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Its worth reading this man. Really enjoyed it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Quote Originally Posted by Cauzing View Post
    Nice one. Great effort !
    Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by LordNarutoSo6P View Post
    Its worth reading this man. Really enjoyed it
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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Fine prediction my brother from another mother!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    just awesome
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    A lot of effort put in to it. Good job
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Really good prediction. I like how you empower the hokages

    Their has to be a reason why Kishi brought them back and now Hagoromo appearing before them
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    It's good, I liked it.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Amazing as usual. :3
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha Aizen View Post
    Fine prediction my brother from another mother!!
    Thanks bro

    Quote Originally Posted by akinlaja6 View Post
    just awesome
    Thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by Saso View Post
    A lot of effort put in to it. Good job
    I appreciate it. Thanks!

    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha Usman View Post
    Really good prediction. I like how you empower the hokages

    Their has to be a reason why Kishi brought them back and now Hagoromo appearing before them
    Yes I thought that they would need at least a small power-up, as well as having Minato's arms restored. Prime SM Hashi is already a beast, so him being at greater than full strength in addition to Edo benefits will be a force to be reckoned with. Also the Sage's chakra may help out Minato is molding Senjutsu chakra.

    If you notice I also gave the Sage's tools to the Hokages with the assumption that Hagoromo can summon them forth:
    Hagoromo- However, the only thing I can do now is give you what little power I have remaining, as well as a few tools that may be beneficial when facing my mother.
    I figure the Hiruzen could use the Banana Fan since he can use all five elements.

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    It's good, I liked it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ugh View Post
    Amazing as usual. :3
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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Amazing

    good joob
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Radical! good job!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    cool.prediction bro. awesome
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Great prediction!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Quote Originally Posted by The Lightning Lord View Post
    Amazing

    good joob
    Quote Originally Posted by XxTsukikagexX View Post
    Radical! good job!
    Quote Originally Posted by Harsh srivastava View Post
    cool.prediction bro. awesome
    Thanks everyone Glad you guys liked it!

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    good job. i love your predictions
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

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    good job. i love your predictions
    Glad to hear that! Thanks
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Amazing Prediction! I don't see how you do it bro!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

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    Amazing Prediction! I don't see how you do it bro!
    Thanks Spidey

    I usually have to get most of the scenes outlined in my head before writing anything.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Impressive prediction buddy 8.6/10
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Exciting pred bro!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Why do you guys that put out predictions each week make sure it's extremely long. A longer chapter of naruto wouldn't even have half this much dialogue.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Quote Originally Posted by ultimater View Post
    Impressive prediction buddy 8.6/10
    Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by Waindo View Post
    Exciting pred bro!
    Thanks man

    Quote Originally Posted by FreeTanner17 View Post
    Why do you guys that put out predictions each week make sure it's extremely long. A longer chapter of naruto wouldn't even have half this much dialogue.
    I guess it's just the way I tend to write. What did you think of it besides being too long ?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 684: Between Worlds

    Great prediction. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

    I like how you brought the Bijuu's chakra back into play. We haven't seen that for a while and I like how you came up with the idea of an ink Rasengan that changes form/density with the surrounding environment.

    It's also nice to see Hagoromo enlightening the Hokages of the current situation and restoring them their power to more than they had while they were alive. I hope we see this in the upcoming chapters, especially the regeneration of Minato's arms so that we can finally get a glimpse of that long-named jutsu that was hyped.

    Also, I like the idea how the castle represents a gateway for access between the dimensions. It makes sense, considering that Kishi has kinda foreshadowed this in the coloured page that showed Team 7's journey towards the castle, highlighting its significance of some sort.
     
         

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