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    Sons of the Sun

    A poem from Hamura Ototsuki and Hagoromo Ototsuki perspectives.


    Oh, brother,
    How would I rather,
    Sing our mother an ode.

    But dark clouds have gathered,
    Earth is crying.
    Hell has unfold.

    Brother, once more,
    Release the roars,
    Of love, friendship
    And peace.

    We will not seal her,
    She must seize to
    Exist.

    Sun and Moon,
    Will conquer her,
    Never shall we
    Seize to persist

    I consider this poem as a "soundtrack" for my 685 prediction. Please check it out!

    Brothers, Once More
     
         
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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    This is good.
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    Nice poem!!!!!
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    Nice poem bro .
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    Mhm

    Thx peeps!
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    I like it, Great Work
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    Very nice, I like it.
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    Me like it
    Nice work man
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    Six, Derp, Complex! Thx guys ♥

    Spread the word of Waindo's awesomeness!

     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    Excellent poem, Good job!
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    Thank you!
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    its very nice
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    Thank you bro!
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    Not bad. But they had to seal their mother so the world could exist.
     
         

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    Re: Sons of the Sun

    This is a poem from a new perspective of theirs... Jesus do you even read?
     
         

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