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    NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

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    • characters
    • [] - descriptions of scenes
    • () - actions
    • techniques
      POV - point of view


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    686 - The Change

    At least !
    PAGE ONE
    [Sakura closes her eye as she about to fall down on ground]
    [Sasuke gently puts Sakura on ground as he lean forward next to her ear]
    Sasuke: We will talk later, Sakura
    [Obito kneeling watches Sasuke standing up turning towards him]
    Obito: ?!
    Sasuke: I would never expect you to help us.
    Sasuke(smirks):Naruto was right about you.
    Obito(smiles): heh( cough blood) (cough blood)
    Sasuke(serious): You overexerted yourself, didn't you
    PAGE TWO
    [Obito turns his head back looking forward as serious voice spread]
    Obito: I don't have much time left. get ready I will put everything left to bring as to Naruto.
    Sasuke: Naruto ?! Is that Fool alone ? What about Kaguya ?
    Obito(smiles): You and Naruto aren't so much different, you know.
    Sasuke(calm): There is not time to joke, answer me Obito
    Obito(smiles): Well, Kakashi is there as well. Naruto keep holding off Kaguya, that all.
    Sasuke: *Hold on Naruto, I will get back soon*
    PAGE THREE
    [Scene shift to ice dimenssion as Kaguya block Naruto's clone punch with her hand]
    Naruto's clone(overpowered): Her strength.... *Why did it go up so much ?*
    Kaguya(calm): I can easily tell that you are clone even skipping black orbs behind you.
    Naruto's clone: ?!
    Kaguya(smirks): Your strength is nowhere close to original body of yours
    Naruto's clone(enraged): Damn You !
    [Naruto charge at Kaguya as she kick one clone poofing instantly then blocking Naruto's clone kick]
    PAGE FOUR
    Naruto: You may deciphered it, but I have more aces in my sleeve
    Kaguya(get serious): So I have. (activate Byakugan) Play time is over get ready to die
    Naruto(serious): Bring it on, Kaguya ! *I hope I can hold off her just a bit longer. Hurry up Obito*
    [Kaguya smoothly evade Naruto's clones attack, blocking some then punch and kick clones make them poof]
    [Overhelming amount of Naruto's clones surround her from all directions as they charge at her]
    Kaguya: *You will never learn Naruto boy* Full body blow: Rain of ash bones !
    PAGE FIVE
    [Kaguya expel emerging bones from her whole body shooting them as procjetiles hitting Naruto's clones.]
    Naruto: ?! *Shit, If it keep up then she ends my clones right now. I have to act fast ?! I know*
    [Clones Keep poofing around turning into ashes as Naruto flies straight her ]
    Naruto's clone(nervous): Let's hope she catches that bait
    Kaguya(smirks): You are stupid (emerge bone from her opened palm, die !)
    [Naruto with goudama almost reaches her as bone pierce through his stomach]
    Naruto's clone(scared): ARGH ! NO !
    Kaguya(smirks): Finally get rid of you (turn off byakugan)(get interrupted as she got punched in air)
    PAGE SIX
    [Real Naruto lands uppercut on Kaguya's chin send her flying up]
    Naruto: Payback, Kaguya !
    [Kaguya keep hurling up as another few clones reach her from different angles. One of them have goudama ]
    Black Zetsu(shouts): Mother, Look out !
    [Kaguya snaps out as she grow massive bones from her whole body piercing ]
    [Clones get pierced including one with goudama who now hang on bone comming from Kaguya center of chest]
    Kaguya: Foolish boy (reaches out with her hand to take kim out or choke him)
    [Suddenly Kaguya get hit in head from above by Naruto's clones having hands connected together ]
    Kaguya: ?! How
    PAGE SEVEN
    [Kaguya is shown hurling down at incredible speed as she encloses toward block of ice]
    [Kaguya smashes into block of ice creating powerfull schockwave comming]
    Naruto(smiles): Straight on head, Got you (extend his hand with V sign as victory sign)
    [Goudama set behind Naruto's back floating in spiral]
    Naruto: I don't give you time to recover, let's try this !
    [Goudama vibrates as they flies down at incredible speed towards block of ice Kaguya smashed into]
    [Goudama smashes into block of ice breaking whole giant block of ice as explosion occurs]
    PAGE EIGHT
    [Goudama besides just two missing floats back comming to Naruto who watches deep hole in ice ground]
    Naruto(serious): I hope I didn't pissed her too much...
    [Suddenly One goudama shoots up from ice block moving towards Naruto at flash speed ]
    Naruto: ?! *I can not stop this goudama ?!*
    [Naruto get hit straight on chest with goudama as he try to withstand ]
    Naruto: ARGh ?!(spot another one right in front of his head)
    [Another goudama smashes Naruto in head throwing him back a bit falling down]
    Naruto: ARGH !
    PAGE NINE
    [Naruto hurls down faster and faster as remaining goudama follow him trying to reach him ]
    Naruto: I have to stop myself ! (closes towards ice of block at opposite side)
    [Pushing himself Naruto flips in air landing safely on ground as he rub his scratched chin and stomach]
    Naruto: It hurts dammit *It was close one...*
    [Explosion of ice small block followed by powerfull blast spreading around comes from kaguya's place]
    Kaguya(threatening): How dare you (voice comes from hole as Kaguya is not yet visible)
    Naruto(turns to source of blast): She is comming !
    [Kaguya floats from deep hole as pieces of ice fall. Kaguya's hair are violently blown away by sheer of blast. Black aura glows around whole Kaguya's body]
    PAGE TEN
    [Kaguya's robe is weaving due to strong blow of wind as her eyes glow furiously]
    [Close up on Kaguya's face showing Byakugan glowing and her Third eye reddish glow]
    Kaguya: You hurt me forcing me to heal wounds. I will ****ing kill you !
    Naruto: Shit, I overdid it this time ! *I have to stop her with clones*
    [Naruto's clones charge towards Kaguya at incredible speed screaming]
    Kaguya: I won't let you fool me again. Fire release: Sphere of ashes !
    [Kaguya blows huge sphere containing most of Naruto's clones as sphere get filled with red fire instantly]
    PAGE ELEVEN
    Kaguya: Burn !
    [Naruto's clones burn engulfed by red fire. Great amount of clones escape just in last second getting out range]
    Naruto(focused): not bad, Granny. Take this ! *I have to use diversion*
    [Naruto's clones approach Kaguya from all sides as she floats up then stops looking at them]
    Kaguya: Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven: swirl of devouring scorch !
    Naruto: ?!
    [Kaguya begin to spin in air with her hands folded on her opposites shoulders as swirl/hurricane forms]
    [Swirl/Hurricane fills with red fire pulling all charging Naruto's clones towards it from huge range.]
    PAGE TWELVE
    Naruto's clones: ARGH ! (screams as they are devoured by red flames of hurricane)
    Naruto: Damn, What I will do ?!
    [Scene shift to Hagoromo talking with The Hokage as he fully takes on shape]
    Hagoromo: you are the one named by Hokage title, Am I right ?
    Hashirama: Yes, we are. Why and how did you appear in front of us ?
    Hagoromo(smiles): so many questions, you were indeed ashura's rencarnation. Let me explain then
    [All Hokage turn and pay attention to floating form of Sage of six paths as he speaks]
    Hagoromo: I am here to help you. I can appear anywhere and anytime as spirit form made of chakra.
    PAGE THIRTEEN
    Tobirama(with folded arms): so Why didn't you help us eariler ? Why did you wait so long ?(sceptic look)
    Hagoromo: Harsh and serious. You are clearly different from your brother but in some way I can understand you. Anyway I decided to do not interfer in mortal affairs but It went too far so I decided to act.
    Hagoromo: Sadly, Tobirama right ? you are incapable of trusting someone. Just like you couldn't trust Madara when hidden leave village was created.
    Hiruzen(shocked ): Do you know all about past ? I have never heard about someone like that.
    Hagoromo: My reincarnation. You clearly look alike me. My soul was once part of you, but then I decided to go away and don't interfer anymore in mortals affairs.
    Hiruzen(lower head): Now I can understand, why I was so strong as young shinobi... then at some point get weaker.
    PAGE FOURTEEN
    [Minato steps forward pulling everyone attention to him. Even Hagoromo turns to him now]
    Minato: I am sorry Great Sage for interrupting you, but there is serious matter ahead. I am afraid of my son also.
    Hagoromo(smiles): I understand Minato. I transfered my powers to him and Sasuke boy so he is safe.
    Minato(relieved): Thank you so much. Do you know where is he ?
    Hagoromo: He along with Sasuke are inside my Mother's Dimenssion.
    Hiruzen: Can you take us to them ?
    Hagoromo(serious): No, You won't make difference against my mother. Even if you won it would be pointless as long as you won't release people from IT before they turn in White Zetsu soldiers.
    Hokages: ?!
    PAGE FIFTEEN
    Hashirama: maybe Madara could help us after convincing him somehow.
    Hagoromo: Sadly Indra's previous reincarnation isn't as cooperative as current. However you need him to stop IT.
    Tobirama(harsh): I will never trust Madara. Besides he is just like his brother Izuna, They both had to die...
    Hashirama(enraged with glare): stop talking like that Tobirama or I will kill you myself brother. Anyway we have to try at least, it is better to try then sit here and do nothing while youngers fight...
    [All hokages exchanges glances with each other]
    Hagoromo(serious): What did you decide then ? (put his staff on ground)
    PAGE SIXTEEN
    [Scene shifts back to exhausted Naruto who is facing calming down Kaguya]
    Naruto(tired): Shit.. *I understimated her...* (hold his hurt chest)
    Kaguya(smirks): Time to put boy in his place. Get ready my child
    Black Zetsu: I am when you are, Mother
    [Kaguya flies at incredible speed creating blowing winds around her]
    Naruto: Bring it on*Lets hope it work again* (creates clones while expeling steam)
    [Kaguya pierces through steam as swoosh effect spread around]
    [Close up on Kaguya's byakugan as she smirks]
    PAGE SEVENTEEN
    [Naruto's clones flies at Kaguya with one having goudama as steam could is dispersed]
    [Kaguya block then punch and kick incomming clones as one with goudama closes in]
    [Suddenly Kaguya hurls down avoiding clash with one with goudama as she smirks]
    Naruto: How ?!
    Kaguya: You won't fool me when I turn on my eyes !
    [Kaguya Kicks Naruto in face send him flying backwards as she fly behind him instantly]
    Naruto: *She got me !* I have to recover fast* ?!
    PAGE EIGHTTEEN
    [Naruto dodges Kaguya's punch in last second. Kaguya kick him in guts send him flying up]
    [Cornered Naruto forms Acid Rasengan from one of goudama which reached him as Kaguya closes ]
    [Scene shifts back to Obito falling on knees as he clench his eyes while Sasuke watches ]
    Obito: I am sorry but I have no chakra left to even bring you back... we are stuck
    Sasuke(calm): Not on my watch (walks towards Obito)
    Obito: ?!
    Sasuke(smirks): It should be enough (put his moon marked hand on Obito)
    Obito: ?! What a incredible power ?! but Sasuke why ? (wrinkles on Obito face go away)
    Sasuke(step forwards so his face is not seen): You have done your part. Now is my turn

    Side text: Kaguya approaches cornered and struggling Naruto. Sasuke begin to act will they arrive in time ? What is Hagoromo's plan and what roles of Hokage.
    END

    687 - Our connected power against goddes !



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    Last edited by KCMNaruto; 07-23-2014 at 07:33 PM.

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Didn't read after the first two lines
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Why promote such a controversial theory in the first 2 sentences? Sasuke is clearly Asexual which is why he has denied Naruto, orochimaru, Madara, KArin, Sakura, Ino, and Mei's advances... But I will read anyway
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Sasuke is out of chatacter dude and you just reposted the back end of your last prediction on to this one.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Black Zetsu(smiles): Mother, Look out !
    why would he smile..
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by throneoo View Post
    why would he smile..
    Sorry I meant frown... lol thanks for stating my errors
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Nice prediction excluding the flaws mentioned by the people above me.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Pretty good. Well done bro.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    nice job
    I like it
    keep up the good work
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    I was okay with the prediction and then the Hiruzen = Hagoromo reincarnation crap emerged. I lost all interest after that, sorry.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Yeah no.... all characters were out of character.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Good prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Remove the part about Hagaromo's reincarnation -_- . Nice one .
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Nice one.
    I guess you copied the Hokage part from your last prediction to this one
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    stopped reading after "Hagoromo: My reincarnation. You clearly look alike me. My soul was once part of you, but then I decided to go away and don't interfer anymore in mortals affairs.
    Hiruzen(lower head): Now I can understand, why I was so strong as young shinobi... then at some point get weaker."
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    seriously.... its too long....kinda got lost in between pages.....bt nice prediction though
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 686 "The Change" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by voids View Post
    I was okay with the prediction and then the Hiruzen = Hagoromo reincarnation crap emerged. I lost all interest after that, sorry.
    lolzz....my thoughts too!!!
     
         

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