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    NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

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    688 - Burning Rage Explosion

    Almighty Kaguya in trouble !
    PAGE ONE
    [Moving panel of Kaguya with her face turned down as Naruto slices her arm with Black Zetsu.]
    Naruto(angry face): that is...
    [Kaguya turns her face to left shoulder with missing arm ]
    Kaguya(shocked): ?! *My hand..., my Child !*
    [Kaguya's left hand with Black Zetsu's face visible is shown shocked and in pain]
    Black Zetsu(shocked): ARGH ! *No, how could it happen ?* MOTHER !
    Naruto(with anger reaching boling point): your end, Black Zetsu ! ?!
    PAGE TWO
    [Naruto spots Kaguya moving towards her sliced arm with black Zetsu in]
    Naruto(shocked): I don't let you ! (kick Kaguya with spining kick in stomach send her flying backwards)
    Kaguya: ?! *He again !* (Sent flying backwards from spining kick force)
    [Naruto moves fast following flying backwards Kaguya]
    Black Zetsu(worried): Mother watch out ! *Shit I have to get away fast* (emerges slowly) ?!
    [Giant slash through hand glows as Sasuke cloaked inside God Sussano stop right step behind him]
    Sasuke: You should worry more about yourself, bastard. (Sussano with blade swinged shown.)
    PAGE THREE
    Black Zetsu(in agony): ARGH !! Sasuke Uchiha *Shit I forgot about him*
    Sasuke(cold): this is for using Uchiha ! Amaterasu ! (eyeing BZ with right EMS eye)
    Black Zetsu: ARGH !!! NO MOTHER !!! *Forgive me mother, I failed !* (egulfed by black flames)
    Kaguya: my Child ?! (dodges Naruto upper cut blow attempt on her)
    [Naruto keep charging at her as she dodges and block some of them with problem]
    Naruto: You can not keep dodging, in the end I will hit you ! (punches Kaguya in chest)
    PAGE FOUR
    [Kaguya stops from impact then lock eyes at Naruto filled with anger. Ash bones emerge from her hands]
    [Naruto so much angry charges at her at full speed almost reaching her instantly about to land hit]
    Kaguya(angry): *do it boy, I will kill you in instant*
    Sasuke(shouting): Bansho Tenin ! (extends his hand towards Naruto)
    Naruto: ?! *I am being pulled ! The bones rapidly grow !* (watches bones grow as get pulled)
    [Naruto get pulled towards Sasuke as bones streetch towards him, then stop at half distance from them.]
    Sasuke: uff,Lucky I got in time. Don't charge at her like that fool
    PAGE FIVE
    Naruto(angry): shut your mouth Sasuke. How could you not even try to save Obito !
    Sasuke(ignoring Obito's matter): Focus better on fight, if not Obito's death will be in vain...
    Kaguya(angry): *That boy, he became faster, so it is his true speed.*
    Kaguya(look at her side): *I am low on chakra..., It will takes time to regenerate my arm*
    Naruto(angry): I will let this stuff go away for now but we will return to it.
    Sasuke(focused): Whatever, she is weak now, we should finish her. Use diversion Naruto !
    PAGE SIX
    Naruto(calming down): I will get her attention !, find oppening and use it, Sasuke.
    [Naruto bursts at full speed towards Kaguya as he shoot off few goudama at her]
    Kaguya: ?! * fast !* (flying upwards in last moment barerly avoiding)
    [Close up on Sasuke's left eye as it glows]
    Kaguya: ?! *Forgot that boy !*
    [Sasuke inside God Sussano appears above Kaguya as he swinges blade at her send her smashing in ground]
    [Kaguya hit hard the ground as shockwave erupts causing powerfull blast bursting.]
    PAGE SEVEN
    Naruto(calmer): Nice shot Sasuke
    Naruto: However I am not finished with her yet ! *Son, Saiken, Chomei lend me your chakra please*
    Son Goku(serious): You can count on me, but don't let you anger control you.
    Saiken(serious): Get her Naruto
    Chomei: give your best !
    [Naruto raises his hand above as goudama places on palm as lava, acid and wind spirals around it]
    Naruto(very angry): Take this, Kaguya !Multi layered spiraling Rasengan !
    PAGE EIGHT
    [Close up on Sasuke's left eye as it glows once again. There is one tomoe more then before]
    Naruto(senses): ?! *What the * (notices disappearance of Rasengan)
    [Multi layered spiraling Rasengan appears smashing the ground where Kaguya was followed by explosion ]
    [Gigantic explosion occurs as blast spread around destroying a lot then blinding light fade away]
    Naruto(happy a bit): We got her, Sasuke ?! *I lost track of her chakra*
    Sasuke(focused): Yeah... *I am not so sure * (notices rifts opening up behind Naruto)
    PAGE NINE
    Naruto(shocked): fast ! (flies a little as Kaguya emerges from portal comming at him)
    [Kaguya about to attack Naruto with her hand regrown as she get blasted by push suddenly. Her body is shown smoking as acid and lava leave marks on her]
    Sasuke(winded): Shinra Tensei ! *Damn her*
    [Kaguya stop her backwards movement forced by push force.]
    Kaguya(nervous): You killed my Child... Now I will kill you ! *If I didn't absorb some of attack, I would be fataly wounded*
    Naruto(out of breath): We are The one who will finish you, Kaguya !
    Sasuke(cold): Your end is comming, Kaguya
    PAGE TEN
    [Scene shifts to Hagoromo talking with The Hokage]
    Hagoromo: Get ready, everyone ! (extends both hand in Hokage direction)
    [Close up view on each Hokage charging chakra]
    [Hashirama and Minato enter each other respective Sage mode]
    Hagoromo: ?!(notices marking on Hashirama/Minato's faces) so you can use nature energy
    Hiruzen: Great Sage, What do you know about nature energy ? What did you mean ?
    PAGE ELEVEN
    Hagoromo: Don't loose focus. I will explain meanwhile.
    Hagoromo: Both, me and my brother Hamura mastered use of nature energy to degree that we could mold out own chakra with added nature energy to it creating new chakra.
    Minato: Wow, Impressive but afterall you are The Sage of six paths. (focused in SM)
    Hiruzen(schocked): I didn't know Minato-kun that you have learnt Senjutsu
    PAGE TWELVE
    Minato: Well I only barerly learned it,but I never actually used it in my life
    Hashirama: It seems we were unaware of many things(focused in SM)
    Hagoromo: Don't blame yourself. Lately I myself have found out about creature existence which changed my writtings on stone I wanted Indra to read and follow.
    Tobirama: Who do you mean ?!
    PAGE THIRTEEN
    [Naruto and Sasuke again dodge all of approaching bone which explode after missing]
    Kaguya: *They caught my bait* You won't last long !
    [black rifts open under Naruto and Sasuke as they land]
    [Kaguya kneel down as she put one hand on ground while other still hold inside portal]
    Naruto/Sasuke: it is uselsess. Can't you think up something better ?
    PAGE FOURTEEN
    Hagoromo(frown): Black Zetsu called one. It was him who helped Madara to use him as all Indra's descendants in the end. (sad) I would act faster if I knew...
    Hashirama: Don't blame yourself, Lord Hagoromo. If you didn't know so it is ok. Besides Madara wasn't such bad it was fun while it lasted (cheering)
    [Hashirama laughs as Minato smiles admiting Hashirama is right. Hiruzen and Tobirama stay quiet]
    Hagoromo(smiles): You are ineed Ashura's former reincarnate. Hashirama. Anyway It seems animals I taught use of nature energy took my words to heart. How is Royal Slug Karyuu, White Snake Sage Ommaru and of course Great Toad Sage Gammaru ?!
    PAGE FIFTEEN
    Minato: Sorry I have never opportunity to thank Great Toad Sage Gammaru, right ?!
    Hashirama: I was long time dead, but last time I saw Karyuu she was in good shape.
    Hagoromo: I see. Enough of talk, Now I will absorb all of your chakra, get ready !
    Hagoromo: Now, give me all you got. (closes his eyes)
    [Hagoromo spirit floating in air extends both hands towards Hokage as they glow bright light]
    Hashirama(shocked): What the ?! (crinkle eye)
    Minato(shocked): How can this be (crinkle eye)
    PAGE SIXTEEN
    Tobirama(shocked): Such amount of Chakra (crinkles eyes)
    Hiruzen: leave us at such rate !(crinkle eyes)
    [Vacuum wave draw chakra from area containing all Hokage moving to Hagoromo as Hokage turn their heads ]
    [Focused Hagoromo closes eyes while he absorbs through his hands vacuum wave carrying absorbed chakra ]
    [Scene shifts to Naruto and Sasuke approaching enraged Kaguya ]
    [Kaguya opens small black rift as she thrust her hand in it as she flies at them]
    Kaguya: I will finish both you at the same ?! (freezes as black rift closes)
    PAGE SEVENTEEN & PAGE EIGHTEEN
    Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (punches her in guts. Reach her with marked hands from both sides)
    Kaguya: Gah !... *How, I won't let you *
    [Naruto's and Sasuke's marked hands reach her shoulders as she grab their arms with her own]
    Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
    Kaguya: *My insides it pains, that him ! He attack me from inside but his chakra is mine*
    [Kaguya flies backwards pushing Naruto and Sasuke as she vomits/spit saliva which turns into Madara's normal body (after Rinne Tensei he got) ]
    Naruto/Sasuke: Madara ?!
    [Naruto moves towards Madara's body as Sasuke notices Kaguya entering black portal]
    Sasuke: You won't get away ! Blaze release: Piercing deadly spear !
    Kaguya(out of breath): I will come back and make you pay ! (fades in rift as black spear end enter rifts as rest get cut and dissolves) *For now I need to recover*

    Side text: Naruto and Sasuke corner Kaguya forcing her to escape. Hagoromo begin to act, What is Hokage's role. Also what is the meaning of Madara's body spit by Kaguya
    END

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    Last edited by KCMNaruto; 08-07-2014 at 06:06 PM.

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    I love it...
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    at the crinkle eyes
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Nice prediction.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    That was beautiful mate, +rep.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Very good prediction!! Good job!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    aalot of the stuff at the end was copied from others predictions
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    lmfao coughs up Madara . Good job though great prediction.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    As always great prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Amazing Prediction !
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Great prediction, though Kaguya was talking a little bit more than usual. I really smiled at Sasuke being able to use the Six Paths, he just needs them!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit spit LOL lovely
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    you really have a talent for creating these predictions. Good job as always!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    It was alright.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Very good predicton let's see what happens!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Very good predicton let's see what happens!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Nice prediction man just a little more because it seemed a little repetitive overall good work
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Excellent prediction! I yotally enjoyed )
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Amazing!

    I want to read what happens next!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by OWanime View Post
    Nice prediction man just a little more because it seemed a little repetitive overall good work
    I agree. A bit too much for one issue, but I agree. Great work!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    you went from Naruto to a DBZ ending. It felt as when i was reading i was watching gohan vs cell fight. Was good up till that point but that last port kind of ruined my naruto fun and made me go dbz mode xD
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Man you be epic.
    Get it "uubi" epic.
    Anyways awesome prediction!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Man you be epic.
    Get it "uubi" epic.
    Anyways awesome prediction!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    Man you be epic.
    Get it "uubi" epic.
    Anyways awesome prediction!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 688 "Burning Rage Explosion " [by KCMNaruto]

    I liked the prediction, it was just as satisfying as the real thing.
     
         

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