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    The end

    im in a dark room
    my only companion is the sense of doom
    deep inside me
    the oxygen gets thinner and thinner
    until i cant catch my breath
    i cant predict anything
    but certain death
    as i wait for my end
    i try to befriend
    the reaper
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    i know i will be a weeper
    because only the devils will see me as a keeper
    above my body as my soul rises high
    i cry one last tear of fear
    i realize my end is here
     
         

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    Re: The end

    Nice work, I like it.
     
         

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    Re: The end

    Good job cuzzo plus rep and thanks.
     
         

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    Re: The end

    I like it
     
         

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    Re: The end

    Kudos that is a work of art right there
     
         

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    Re: The end

    Nice work.
     
         

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    Re: The end

    Kudos dude.
     
         

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    Re: The end

    Well done. It is good!
     
         

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    Re: The end

    Nice one.
    Nicely constructed.
     
         

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    Re: The end

    Cool poems you have
     
         

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    Re: The end

    Nice one mate .
     
         

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    Re: The end

    nice work man!
     
         

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    Re: The end

    good one !!
     
         

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