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    NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    Format of predictions:

    • characters
    • [] - descriptions of scenes
    • () - actions
    • techniques
      POV - point of view


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    690 - The Deal

    After Overcoming many struggles... Ther power become one !!
    PAGE ONE
    [Close up on Kaguya's face with blood flowing down her on from her mouth]
    Kaguya: ?! *This is bad !*
    [Close up view on Sum's mark and Moon's mark glowing placed on Kaguya from opposite sides]
    [Close up on Black Zetsu's scared and worried face]
    Black Zetsu: No Mother !
    [Naruto and Sasuke push their marked hands on Kaguya while swirl pattern form close to Sakura falling down]
    Sasuke: Yin release: Spiritual seal !
    Naruto: Yang release: Life force seal !
    PAGE TWO
    [Kakashi's point of view shows at distance glowing hands of Naruto and Sasuke on Kaguya's body]
    Kakashi(cheering): Finally get rid of her, Team 7 mission succesfull (Sakura comes out of swirl)
    Naruto/Sasuke(shouting): Yin-Yang: Celestial body imprisonment !
    [Close up on Kaguya's robes with yellow marking spread from Naruto and purple from Sasuke ]
    Kaguya: *I can not break this seal, it is too strong !, shit !*
    ??????: Foolish woman, You have so much power and yet you can not make use of it
    Kaguya: *That voice... I know you, Madara ?!*
    PAGE THREE
    [Kaguya dive deep inside her mind as she appear in black void. ]
    Kaguya(angry): Why do you call me ?
    [The man with long black hair and glowing purple eyes is shown restrained by black substance binding him]
    Madara(smirks): Someone is about to get sealed, to be honest you already lost
    Kaguya(angry): Watch your tone, I will give you beatdown of your life.
    Madara(annoyed): You don't understand your position. It is your end
    Kaguya(shocked): I will break this seal, you will see man.
    PAGE FOUR
    Madara(focused): You could but you lack knowledge and skills I can help you with that.
    [Kaguya ready to leave suddenly freeze for moment not moving her feet any further
    Kaguya(smiles): You are bluffing, I would know if there was something to do.
    Madara(smirks): Overhelming power is great but without proper use you will lose in the end
    [Meanwhile in Real world, Dimenssion begin to shake violently as wind blow dangerously around trio]
    Kaguya: Ugh (tense her muscles and try as hard she can )
    Kaguya(mad): dammit,*This seal is too strong and I begin to loose my consciousness
    PAGE FIVE
    [Back inside black void Kaguya is shown nervous while facing restrained Madara]
    Madara(serious): You don't have much time, decide wise. *It is better to work with her then be sealed*
    Kaguya(desperately): Ok, tell me fast. Don't waste time. what you want in return
    Madara(smiles): You are not stupid as I thought. In return I want freedom.
    Kaguya(serious): *I already sucked nature energy from him* Fine, however I keep nature powers.
    Madara(serious): Deal (feel black substance leaving him)
    Kaguya: (with extended hand) Now it is your turn
    PAGE SIX
    Madara(very serious): Listen and act fast
    [Close up on yellow marking spread from one side and purple marking spread from other side]
    Kaguya(schocked): *My Goudama, that it* ugh... *I will split it and attack them forcing to cancel seal*
    [Somwhere in air Giant black ball begins to vibrate as it begin to split]
    Sakura: ?! Kakashi- sensei, That giant orb, it moves and split ?!
    Kakashi(narrowed eyes):I have bad feeling about it...
    [Cross panel of Close up Naruto's and Sasuke's faces as they watch their marking about to connect on Kaguya]
    PAGE SEVEN
    Sasuke(smiles): Finally, get rid of that witch
    Naruto(smiles): FInally, she is done for.
    [Sad face of Black Zetsu watching his Mother getting sealed pierced by Naruto's goudama rods.]
    Black Zetsu(scared): No Mother ?! (Notices giant amount of black orbs flying at Naruto and Sasuke)
    Black Zetsu(smiles): *Mother's goudama* Haha Naruto and Sasuke will fail.
    Naruto: ?! (sense attack incomming)
    [Naruto turns his face a bit and notices rain of goudama incomming at him and Sasuke ]
    PAGE EIGHT
    Naruto(tense): Holly shit ! Sasuke watch out !
    Sasuke: ?! (turns his head and notice big number of goudama incooming) *I know it was to easy*
    [Massive amount of magatama flying at goudama is shown from Perfect Sussano of Kakashi]
    Kakashi(focused): Kamui magatama ! Don't forget about me, Kaguya !
    Kakashi: Naruto, Sasuke focus on the seal, you can not fail now !
    Kaguya(struggles): Ugh... *This man , I will get rid of him when I free myself*
    Naruto/Sasuke: Right !
    PAGE NINE
    [Magatama clash with barrage of goudama as spiral patterns form next to them ]
    Sakura: Nice shot, Kakashi sensei !
    [Suddenly Most of spiral patterns close and fade as goudama bursts towards Naruto and Sasuke]
    Kakashi(shocked): No way (take step forwards)
    Kaguya: *Nothing work against Onmyoudon, but still I have to active it for it work, it is not passive*
    Naruto: *tsk* (shoot his own goudama at Kaguya) (focus some chakra in other hand creating FRS)
    Sasuke: dammit, Blaze release: piercing wall ! (wall from black flames forms with spikes)
    PAGE TEN
    Kaguya: ?! *the seal loose a bit. Now is my chance !* HAAAA !
    [As the purple and yellow marking try to connect at center, it keep breaking and comming again]
    Naruto(worried): shit *we can not hold seal and deal with goudama, Kakashi won't be in time*
    Sasuke(schocked): *We have to fully focus on seal, or she break it* (notice Kakashi comming) hurry up
    [Few goudama suddenly shoot at full speed towards incomming Kakashi]
    Kakashi: (Flying at full speed Sussano) ?!
    Sakura: Sensei ! watch out !
    PAGE ELEVEN
    [Hagoromo is shown vaccuming Hokage's chakra while all of them is focused. Hashirama and Minato are in SM]
    Hagoromo: I am almost ready , keep it up
    Hashirama: *Soon I will be back Madara. I wonder how you react about Uchiha being used...*
    Tobirama: Hurry up Sage, we don't have all day
    Hiruzen(frown): now, now show respect to Great Sage Lord Second.
    Minato: Naruto hold strong, You too Sasuke I know you guys will do it
    Hagormo: *I have bad feeling about it, Could it be you Mother....*
    PAGE TWELVE
    [Goudama smashes through Perfect Sussano cracking it fully as they fly through Kakashi and Sakura]
    Kakashi: *Once again, Obito's power saved me*
    Sakura: Sensei, Look the seal is retreacting back ?!
    Kakashi: why now, damn it *I used up a all Rikudou chakra I got from Obito...*
    [Naruto and Sasuke keep trying to hold seal while pushing goudama back]
    Kaguya(in pain): I Have enough ! (powerfull bright light envelops her body)
    [the seal breaks and yellow and purple marking fade away]
    Naruto/Sasuke: Impossible !
    PAGE THIRTEEN
    [Intese very bright light blind everyone as it spread around followed by blast]
    [Incredible powerfull blast spread instantly from Kaguya throwing Naruto and Sasuke back ]
    Naruto: (put up arms to cover face)Uwah !
    Sasuke: (put up arms to cover face)No !
    Kakashi: ?! (put up arms to cover face) What a bright light, AHH !!!
    Sakura: (put up arms to cover face) My eyes, hurt !
    PAGE FOURTEEN
    [The effect of blast along with explosion finall wears off showing Kaguya floating]
    [Close up on Black Zetsu's face cheering and laughing]
    Black Zetsu: Hahaha, Mother trolled them, Kill them Mother kill them all.
    [Naruto is shown getting up while struggling. There is big crater where he is]
    Naruto: ?! Ugh... It couldn't happen... how ?!
    [Sasuke is shown getting up while having problems. There is big crater where he is]
    Sasuke: I can not believe, she escaped. *Damn, if I didn't waste so much chakra in that dimenssion to get out..* (clench his hands) Our marks got burnt as well...
    [Close up on Naruto's marked hand and Sasuke's marked hand messed badly]
    [Swirl pattern appear close to them as Kakashi and Sakura come out]
    PAGE FIFTEEN
    Kakashi: ?! Are you alright ?!
    Naruto: Yeah... sort of.
    Sasuke: Our seals got messed. Anyway now I see Obito's chakra entered your body
    Kakashi: so you know...
    Sasuke(cold): I know that you may got my chakra. I shared some with Obito, but how you have Naruto ?!
    Kakashi: Fine, I wil explain. Both you and Naruto gave some chakra to Obito and he was once Juubi jinchurki so somehow he could react to it, anyway...
    Sakura: That it ?!
    [Everyone look around as Sakura barerly speak. The ground everything is badly deformed]
    PAGE SIXTEEN
    [Kaguya is shown flying down towards ground as she eye all of them.Goudama with her]
    Kaguya: *I can not let myself be distracted. That mean I have to get rid of man, or
    Kaguya: I release Madara so he won't take over at any chance while get rid of them as problem... like kill two birds with one stone* (smirks)
    [Naruto, Sasuke step forwards while Kakashi and Sakura stay behind them ]
    Naruto: Grr... You will get sealed no matter how long you resist
    Sasuke: You just prolong this, You only postpone unavoidable (cold)
    [Kaguya spits saliva at them as it fly super fast towards them]
    Everyone: ?! What the ?!
    [Everyone fall on ground dodging saliva which suddenly turns in Madara's body !]
    PAGE SEVENTEEN && EIGHTEEN
    [Madara's body hit the ground behind them]
    Everyone: Madara, no way !
    Black Zetsu(shaking): Madara ?! *Mother why ?!, what did happen*
    [In mere second Kaguya appears next to Madara gently placing her hand on him]
    Kaguya: I will share a bit of chakra with you, use it wisely.
    [Madara's body begin to glow a little as he regains Sage's robes. Madara begin to get up ]
    Kaguya: Take this as small gift, oh here is another one(put hand in Dimenssion portal)
    [Konoha with Minato's cloak is shown as goudama lay on it unmoved. Suddenly they react]
    [Powerfull blast erupts forcing Team 7 to resist while trying to stay on feet]
    [Wide panel shows Madara and Kaguya hand to hand smirking facing Team 7]

    Side text: Madara and Kaguya join forces !, Naruto's and Sasuke's seal failed. Hagoromo is about perform special technique, and Edo Hokage will...
    END

    691 - Evil duo force



    What will happen next ? Find out on next Naruto manga chapter !

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    Last edited by KCMNaruto; 08-28-2014 at 04:14 PM.

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great prediction !
     
         
    Last edited by Obítō; 08-21-2014 at 07:26 PM.

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]



    This is probably better than what will happen in the actual chapter.. Which is sad.

     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    i don't think madara and kaguya will fight also she doesn't talk to much
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great prediction as always
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great Prediction

    I like the idea of a 3 way battle between Kaguya, Madara, and Team 7 + Hokages. I don't think BZ would use the word trolled, but that really doesn't matter I also like the part with Sasuke questioning Kakashi on obtaining Obito/Rikudou's chakra. Getting to see more hints of Sasuke's darker ambitions which will lead to the final fight is a nice addition as well.
     
         
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    I hoped that Madara comes
    back, but now we have Evil
    Sasuke who is awesome too. So:
    Evil Sasuke save this manga in
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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great prediction though you should keep them in character
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    great predication
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    Its great! Youre great!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by sasusaku19 View Post
    Its great! Youre great!
    answer as above
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    Your prediction is greater than the actual manga!
    Good Job
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    WTF, join forces... this no, but other possiable
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 690 "The Deal" [by KCMNaruto]

    Well its obviously i mean 100% not that way of talking...quite frustrating to read but i like the idea where your going to so it was nice prediction even tho the way of talking is just so wrong lol..
     
         

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