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  • Death

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  • Silence

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  • Without You

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  • What is Peace?

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    I was bored so I figured i post some of my poems



    Death

    The close restraints of death,
    Makes you feel like you're going deaf,
    Feel your heart race, Can't keep the pace,
    Lose control yell in pain, Nothing left to gain,
    You cry and try to regain control, You really don't know if you can pay the toll,
    You're scared so you try bardor and sell your soul,
    Leaving nothing but an empty hole,
    You yell for help, But all they hear is a silent yelp
    Feel the last breath leave, Everyone learns how to grieve
    Nobody knows when, it's not written out in pen
    Can strike whenever and whoever
    No warning no threat, no need to fret,
    It will happen you will see, and you may never flee,
    But the truth is after, maybe laughter
    Maybe Hell, or even an empty shell,
    I do not lie, don't be shy
    Its a waste of your time, and also mine
    See you after, or maybe not,
    We only have one shot



    Silence
    Oh how i hate silence
    so much worse than violence
    no one says anything no one does nothing
    silent arguments back and fourth
    no one remembers the direct source
    that started it all no matter how small
    blown out and up till no one cares
    continues with awkward silent stares
    it goes on for days and the silence stays

    Without You
    Without you there's no reason to be,
    I'll always just try to flee,
    You and I right here,
    We have nothing left to fear,
    You say just leave me be,
    So I still flee,
    I know not what to say,
    I just want you to stay,
    You don't want a nice guy,
    I still don't understand why,
    You cry I ask why, You leave I'll never believe...


    What Is Peace?

    This is what we waited for,
    Come on people this is war,
    What is peace but a war in the making,
    Come on people I'm not faking,
    Bad decitions made, Death and waste laid,
    Who am I to criticize, Hell I told my fair share of lies,
    I'm as much to blame, Hell I"ll take half the shame,
    Thats not the point now, I see you're dirty smile,
    Lets begin this war, We'll even that damn score,
    This is to the death, Till nothing is left,
    Shoot the guns, Lets have some fun,
    Ninety miles an hour lets get this done,
    We'll have some great fun,
    It's only human nature, Thats what we'll say,
    We were only trying to play,
    It's not our fault, We couldn't hault,
    Freedom worked away, Nothing left to say,
    Who's to know it was us, We'll keep it on the hush
    No one has to know, We'll blame our woes,
    We'll count the time on our fingers then our toes,
    What can I do, It's your fault too,
    You don't belive in peace you belive in the time between wars,
    And just as bad as I you want to settle the scores,
    The scores left by others, Our fathers and mothers,
    It was those who came before who started we just finished,
    Even if it just deminishes,
    It wasn't us, It was the lust,
    Lust for power, Lust for others to cower,
    Grovel at our feet, That what it was the heat,
    The heat of battle warped our minds,
    The heat of battle that binds,
    Us to the hate, that was our fate,
    Not chosen by us, Just be quiet shush
    Treaties signed peace clamed, Still the underlying flame,
    WHAT IS PEACE BUT A WAR IN THE MAKING,
    COME ON PEOPLE I'M NOT FAKING

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    Re: Bored

    silence is the best
     
         

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    Re: Bored

    This brat approves!! Poems give a sense of depth, keep writing them! Though remember, two can't be at the same time, they aren't related nor born out of each others ending. Brat out!
     
         

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    Wait a sec. Did you write these?
     
         
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    Re: Bored

    Quote Originally Posted by Narutocroatia View Post
    silence is the best
    I wrote that one when my girlfriend was not talking to me because I said something inaproprate to her friend which I thought was helping her

    Her friend was wearin a thong and a skirt so I told her her butt was showing
    which it was and I got in trouble for LOOKING when I was trying to help her out.....
     
         

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    Re: Bored

    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaBrat View Post
    Wait a sec. Did you write these?
    Yes would you like the link
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by HightimesHoward View Post
    I wrote that one when my girlfriend was not talking to me because I said something inaproprate to her friend which I thought was helping her

    Her friend was wearin a thong and a skirt so I told her her butt was showing
    which it was and I got in trouble for LOOKING when I was trying to help her out.....
    Geez... Boys.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by HightimesHoward View Post
    Yes would you like the link
    Sure!
     
         

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    Re: Bored

    Quote Originally Posted by HightimesHoward View Post
    I wrote that one when my girlfriend was not talking to me because I said something inaproprate to her friend which I thought was helping her

    Her friend was wearin a thong and a skirt so I told her her butt was showing
    which it was and I got in trouble for LOOKING when I was trying to help her out.....
    ojojoj
     
         

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    Re: Bored

    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaBrat View Post
    This brat approves!! Poems give a sense of depth, keep writing them! Though remember, two can't be at the same time, they aren't related nor born out of each others ending. Brat out!
    You are one confusing dude.....:confused:
     
         

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    Re: Bored

    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaBrat View Post
    Sure!
    I only have those four posted right now I haven't been on to post any more for a while but


    http://www.myspace.com/steven_howard_/blog
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by HightimesHoward View Post
    I only have those four posted right now I haven't been on to post any more for a while but


    http://www.myspace.com/steven_howard_/blog
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    Quote Originally Posted by HightimesHoward View Post
    You are one confusing dude.....:confused:
    How so?
     
         

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    How so?
    How you said what you said it confused me at first.....
     
         

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    How you said what you said it confused me at first.....
    And you're not confused anymore?
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaBrat View Post
    And you're not confused anymore?
    I think you ment that they sound alike and I should try devercifing my work........ My english teacher told me the samething and I ignored her.... Maybe I should try it.......
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by HightimesHoward View Post
    I think you ment that they sound alike and I should try devercifing my work........ My english teacher told me the samething and I ignored her.... Maybe I should try it.......
    Hmmm? You mean your style? That was not what I was referring to though^^
     
         

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    Hmmm? You mean your style? That was not what I was referring to though^^
    Umm ok I'm lost again
     
         

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    Umm ok I'm lost again
    It doesn't matter! As long as there is candy!! Brat out!
     
         

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    It doesn't matter! As long as there is candy!! Brat out!
    Wait theres candy and you're not sharing...
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by HightimesHoward View Post
    Wait theres candy and you're not sharing...
    ... *shares*
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    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaBrat View Post
    ... *shares*
    Btw, check out my Kumi and how many posts I have, scary!
    79 posts

    79.97 kumi

    Good one Btw what did you mean by what you said earlier
     
         

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    Good one Btw what did you mean by what you said earlier
    When I said what?
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaBrat View Post
    This brat approves!! Poems give a sense of depth, keep writing them! Though remember, two can't be at the same time, they aren't related nor born out of each others ending. Brat out!

    That

    also we both have short attention spans ha thats great
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by HightimesHoward View Post
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    also we both have short attention spans ha thats great
    I meant: 1. You're poems got bra(t)pproved. 2. Poems have that kind of effect(sense of depth) 3. Peace has nothing to do with war as well as love has nothing to do with hate or desire. Therefore one can't be when the other is existent. Also that's why they can't be born out of each other, though I'll have to correct a mistake, I meant that they are born when the other ends, but not born out of the other. 4. Brat out!
     
         

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