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    Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Basic Information
    Name: Haku Yuki
    Nickname:"Zabuzas Fool"
    Gender:Male
    Age:10-16 approx.
    Clan:Yuki

    Looks:When not wearing a mask Haku has soft facial features, kind smile, soft eyes, long dark brown hair, brown eyes. When weating a mask Haku wears his hair in two braids down each side of his face, with the rest put up on top. His mask is that of a Mist Hunter Ninja.

    Personality: Quiet, caring, analitical, sensitive, devoted,subdued/subdominate, when in battle he can be loud and passionate about protecting those he cares for(A rolemodel for Naruto).Beleives that people can grow stronger when having someone to protect. Smart , and skillfull as well, Haku knows medicnal herbs, as well as acupuncture points of the human body and target them with senbon to cause a death like state.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: A snowy village in the Water Country.
    Village of Alliance: (N/A) Although he wares the forehead protector of the Hidden Mist Village ( Kirigakure )

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Jounin - 800 Chakra - 850 Health - B + A Rank - 4 elements -Battle Training-
    Specialty: Ice elementCan not be used yet so enjoy your time!
    Elements: Water-needs to be trained Wind-needs to be trained Earth-needs to be trained [Lightening-needs to be trained.
    Your ninjutsu:
    E Rank ( basic ninjuitsu)
    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.


    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Sennen Goroshi) - 1000 Years Of Death

    Rank:E
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:5(apply damage cost for kunai and exlopsives seprately if either or both are used with this jutsu)
    Description:The user makes the sign of the tiger and forceable puches it into the enemys behind.






    Background Info:

    Haku comes from a turblant past. His father found out that he, and his mother had the Ice Element (Hyoton) kekkei genkai (blood line limmit). Haku killed his father after he blacked out and released the powers of his clans kekki genkai. After this Haku left his village, and was found and taken in by Zabuza Momochi, and trained in the ninja arts of the hidden mist. During their years together Haku and Zabuza they left/abandoned the Mist Village after Zabuza killed the 4th Mizkage, (as far as I have figured.) and failed coup of the Land of water. They (Haku, and Zabuza) have been followed by the Mists hunter ninja, to the Land of Waves off the shores of the fire nation.

    History:
    After watching his father kill his mother, Haku was next to be killed by his father. But as his father approached to end his life Haku like many users of kekkei genkai in the Land of Water. Haku blacked out when his abilites emmerged (Similarly to when Negato killed the leaf ninja in the Land of Rain.) . When Haku came around there his father was dead, and his home destroyed, with huge spikes of ice breaking through the roof. Showing the raw powers of his Hyoton in action. Haku was able to manipulate water from a young age, but was told not to. After being taken in by Zabuza he was trained in ninjuitsu of the mist, and was taught all of Zabuzas water release techniques, while in training Haku also learned how to use his Ice release to exceed his Senpais' prowes as a ninja.

    Other
    Hakus training included, skills of the ANBU of the Hidden Mist Village. The ability to make hand seals with one hand. He also seems to know much about the human body (acupuncture points) as well as some formal knowladge of medicinal herbs. Like his Master Zabuza they both wear the forhead protector of the Hidden Mist Village, but unlike other missing ninja, they dont have symbol scratched through.

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    Theme Song and Background Music:

    Theme song:
    "Cold" by Breaking Benjmin
    http://youtu.be/rTiGlNDnOtE

    Background Music:

    Ambient-
    http://www.di.fm/ambient/

    Liquid DNB-
    http://http://www.di.fm/liquiddnb/

    Chillout Dreams-
    http://http://www.di.fm/chilloutdreams/

    Psychill-
    http://http://www.di.fm/psychill/

    Chillout-
    http://www.di.fm/chillout/

    Battles

    Won:
    Lost:
     
         
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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Nice, a few errors here and there but you stated that you were editing....Joining Kumo?
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    nice i like it :D
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Meee Tooo!
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Good bio.
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    You can't make this bio. You need Rei's permission. So that will take a long time to get answered.
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Quote Originally Posted by Dei Dei View Post
    You can't make this bio. You need Rei's permission. So that will take a long time to get answered.
    Hmm..? I thought you only need Rei's permission to make custom ice bios..
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Thanks for the props on my first attempt at entering/attempting the bio.

    Any suggestions/help?


    Can someone tell me why I can't make this bio? Could this be elaborated on the reason other than because Rei says so or not would be nice.


    This is my intro into the village system, could also use some help to tote my bios. And a list of other bios I can't make should be made not just for me but for everyone just starting into the leaf system.

    I used the template, read the rules for Bios, did I miss something though?


    Quote Originally Posted by Mugen Ryukyu View Post
    Hmm..? I thought you only need Rei's permission to make custom ice bios..
    I make a Haku Yuki bio how is this a costom bio?
    Requirements:
    Restrictions:
    -Members who can use ice release are Haku characters and shinobis from Yukikagure or members with a custom biography that allows them ice (in this case special permission is needed by Rei based on a background that will be related to the Naruto manga.
    -Only for Haku characters ice release is considered to be a bloodline and the ice jutsus can not be copied by Sharingan users.
    -To be able to use ice release one must have mastered water and wind.
     
         
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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    I thought it goes for all ice users
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Quote Originally Posted by Dei Dei View Post
    I thought it goes for all ice users
    My requirements referance is direct quote from the sticky from Rei. And is this a statement or a question?

    I know I still have training to do before I can use the Ice Element, but I have to create the bio before I can do that (right?). And again this is my first bio and can use some help.

    Edit: Can I get some help on how to tote my bio in my sig?
     
         
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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Nice one !
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Quote Originally Posted by shadedcrow View Post
    Thanks for the props on my first attempt at entering/attempting the bio.

    Any suggestions/help?


    Can someone tell me why I can't make this bio? Could this be elaborated on the reason other than because Rei says so or not would be nice.


    This is my intro into the village system, could also use some help to tote my bios. And a list of other bios I can't make should be made not just for me but for everyone just starting into the leaf system.

    I used the template, read the rules for Bios, did I miss something though?




    I make a Haku Yuki bio how is this a costom bio?
    Requirements:
    Restrictions:
    -Members who can use ice release are Haku characters and shinobis from Yukikagure or members with a custom biography that allows them ice (in this case special permission is needed by Rei based on a background that will be related to the Naruto manga.
    -Only for Haku characters ice release is considered to be a bloodline and the ice jutsus can not be copied by Sharingan users.
    -To be able to use ice release one must have mastered water and wind.
    I was replying to Dei Dei. Nice bio btw!
    Quote Originally Posted by Dei Dei View Post
    I thought it goes for all ice users
    nah only custom ice bios
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    thanks! I'll get my E ranked ninjuitsu added in lime.

    Edit: do I have my ninja rank correct? Anyone?
     
         
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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    for your ninja rank, all you have to do is put S-Class. Take a look at my Torune Bio in my signature. That'll show how its done.
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Quote Originally Posted by McAfeezy View Post
    for your ninja rank, all you have to do is put S-Class. Take a look at my Torune Bio in my signature. That'll show how its done.
    Thanks, how do you tote around your Torune Bio? And what theme do you want for your profile. I have a kumo theme/Dauri theme of pics assembled. But let me know. And thanks. We'll work out how to get your profile done via, email or yahoo?

    So I looked at the bio why is it Jounin level when your S class? Has it just not been updated?
     
         
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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    oh yeah.
    To have an Ice bio, you need to have already mastered Water & wind.
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Mastered or started Wind and Water? Saying that you can't use any ice jutsu until you mastered wind and water. But you totally can have the bio.
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Requirements:
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    -Members who can use ice release are Haku characters and shinobis from Yukikagure or members with a custom biography that allows them ice (in this case special permission is needed by Rei based on a background that will be related to the Naruto manga.
    -Only for Haku characters ice release is considered to be a bloodline and the ice jutsus can not be copied by Sharingan users.
    -To be able to use ice release one must have mastered water and wind.
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Exactly to be able to use it, but he can totally have the bio right?
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    They probably wont allow it
    i am also waiting on Rei's permission for an ice bio also you know.
    it will take time for her to say yes. its about patience here
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Nice bio dude.
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Quote Originally Posted by Pineapple View Post
    They probably wont allow it
    i am also waiting on Rei's permission for an ice bio also you know.
    it will take time for her to say yes. its about patience here
    Patience im a ninja not a dr. Going to edit in that I cant use Ice element yet but its going to remeain my specialty.

    Quote Originally Posted by Bipz View Post
    Nice bio dude.
    Thank you sir.
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Nice Bio, it is very smexy
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Quote Originally Posted by Darui101 View Post
    Nice Bio, it is very smexy
    Thanks (o.O) tell Anntone I have my eye on him! And you too....(O.o)
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki (My First Bio)

    Okay, I will be sure to tell him.
     
         

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