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    6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

    CHAPTER 6 – The Threat Resurfaces.

    Kingsley: So, you ninjas are here to capture a criminal who’s surely behind the murder of one of the greatest witches of all time.

    Naruto: Yeah but the evil deeds of Kabuto goes far behind the murder of your headmistress.

    Kakashi: He came here for an unknown purpose and this murder is surely just the initial step.

    Susan Bones: But why target us, wizards?

    Kakashi: I don’t think his aim is the wizard world but he came here surely for one thing – power.

    Shikamaru: He’s pure evil and…

    Detonative sparks and flashes were suddenly heard and seen…

    Harry: What is happening?

    Ron: It comes from the exterior.

    Naruto, Shikamaru, Neji, Kakashi, Harry, Ron, Hermione, Percy, Slughorn and Neville rushed towards outside. Once, on the outside, they were greeted by a green Killing Curse - which missed Percy’s head barely - and an astonishing dreadful sight.

    Harry: Professor McGonagall?

    Ron: But she’s dead?

    Naruto: *thinking* Kabuto, you again!

    Kakashi: She’s been resurrected.

    Ron: What?

    Hermione: But how?

    Naruto: It’s Kabuto’s technique, Edo Tensei which brings dead back to life.
    Naruto’s glance was cold and deep as if he just sensed Kabuto’s murderous aura laughing.

    Percy: So what now?

    Shikamaru: We’ll need to seal her. That’s the only way to finish off with her.
    Hermione: Sealing? But how do we…

    McGonagall: Avada Kedavra!

    Harry: Watch out!

    Ron saved Hermione from an imminent impact from the Killing Curse.

    Harry: Don’t get touched by it or the next thing you'll see will be your grave.

    Kakashi: Thanks for the information.

    McGonagall: Relashio! Relashio! Relashio!

    Neville: She’s breaking into Dumbledore’s grave.

    Harry: I’m sorry. Stupefy!

    The jinx made a hole through McGonagall’s chest but she got back onto her feet.

    Hermione: What! You just hit her, Harry?

    Kakashi: It won’t work! We need to seal her.

    Naruto: Shikamaru!

    Shikamaru: I know! Shadow Sewing Jutsu.

    McGonagall: Avada Kedavra!

    The green flash was about to hit Slughorn as he screamed.

    Slughorn: Expelliarmus! I’m not going down so easily.

    Naruto: Now Shikamaru!

    The dark shadows of Shikamru perforated throughout the revived body parts of McGonagall as she dropped her wand.

    Naruto: Rasengan!

    Naruto passed through McGonagall’s chest with his Rasengan.

    Ron: Wow, impressive.

    Neji: Shikamaru, don’t let her go!

    Shikamaru: I know! Shadow Manipulation Jutsu!

    Naruto: Well done! Just hold up a bit.

    Naruto closed his eyes in order to enter Sage mode as the adrenaline rush decreased for most of them.

    Percy: What are you guys waiting for? Seal her or whatever you say.

    Neji: Wait, Naruto is entering Sage Mode in order to seal her and Shikamaru has immobilized her for now.

    Neville: You guys surely have formidable fighting skills.

    Ron: I agree.

    Harry: May I talk to Professor McGonagall before you seal her off?

    Kakashi: You may try.

    McGonagall: Help me.

    Harry: We’ll send you back where you can rest in deserving peace but why were you attacking Dumbledore’s tomb.

    McGonagall: I’m being controlled by someone and he sent me here to…to…I…no…I must kill you all.

    Minerva McGonagall’s turned into an expressionless flat voice yet squally high.

    Harry: What?

    Kakashi: It seems that Kabuto is controlling her words partly along with her body and mind. That snaky hound surely has improved his techniques.
    Naruto’s eyes turned orange with a fierce look on his face.

    Naruto: I’m ready. It’s the first time, I’m trying it but I think I’ve mastered it.

    Natural chakra began concentrating into a disc spindle seal as he placed his hand onto McGonagall’s head.

    Naruto: Sage Art! Spindle Natural Seal!

    Within seconds, McGonagall’s body turned completely numb.

    Shikamaru: *pant* *pant* finally…

    Neji: Nice job, both of you.

    Ron: Yes but we still don’t know the reason that she attacked us.

    Hermione: Ron is right unfortunately.

    Percy: Whatsoever, this man should apprehend and sentenced by the Ministry of Magic.

    Naruto: So, you’ll cooperate with us.

    Harry: Since our enemy has become the same, I think it’ll be the best.

    Kingsley: I agree!

    Kingsley and everyone from the meeting just came in the alfresco of Hogwarts.

    Kingsley: You, ninjas, fought valuably and we both have important information, so in fact, I’d humbly ask you to stay in Hogwarts till Kabuto is found.

    Neji: Well, that’s very nice of you all. Thank you very much.

    Hermione: I’d like to ask you a request.

    Naruto: A request?

    Sakura: Please.

    Hermione: Well, with this battle, I just saw that you – ninjas - are the only one who is able to seal the resurrected persons unlike us, wizards. It is most likely that Kabuto will use this technique again. So if you could teach this to us in some way. Don’t you agree, Minister Kingsley?

    Kingsley: Well, I think it’s a good idea indeed. No one will contradict this after what happened just now, isn’t it?

    The ministers barely flickered their eyes as the truth was definitely said and the majority nodded their approval while others’ silence was counted as an unclear yes.

    Hermione: So, will you agree?

    Kakashi: Well, I think it will not bother us really.

    Naruto: Yes.

    Percy: We should also take consideration of the students. They might get targeted, so it will be safer to send them back home.

    Ron: I disagree. There’s no better safety than at Hogwarts and by sending them home, we’ll just create unnecessary panic.

    Kingsley: I agree with Ronald. We cannot let this matter be divulged anymore. This needs to remain as secret as possible henceforth.

    Hermione: Since I’m the Headmistress, I’ll take full responsibility of the students and in that in mind; I’d like to re-institute the post of Defense Against Dark Arts.

    Ron: Are you serious? Dark Arts are anyways no more a danger to anyone.

    Hermione: I know but there’s no better way to protect the students than to teach them ways to defend themselves and we don’t know how nasty this can get.

    Kingsley: Well, go ahead and we shall leave!

    A few minutes later, they all flew back from Hogwarts.

    Neville: Let’s go inside now.

    Hermione: You may go inside but I’d like one ninja and Ron to stay here for a while.

    Naruto: Go ahead, you all.

    * * * *

    Ron: So why did you wanted us to stay?

    Hermione: Wait a second! Harry! Harry! HARRY!

    Harry: Oh, sorry Hermione.

    Harry was so hypnotized with the broken pieces of Dumbledore’s tomb that he went into a world of his.

    Hermione: Okay, well, I think I’d like you to become the new teacher for Defense Against the Dark Arts.

    Harry: What? I don’t…

    Hermione: You are the best for this job.

    Ron: But this post is cursed. You do know that nobody ever kept this post for more than a year, do you?

    Naruto: Well, if he’s the best, he should accept it.

    Hermione: Exactly. So what do you say, Harry?

    He went into deep thoughts and just realized that there may be no better way than to help the new generations.

    Harry: Alright but…

    Hermione: You’re bothered about the tomb, isn’t it?

    Naruto: Why? What is there inside?

    Harry: Well, precisely. Why will she be sent to attack this tomb when only we know what is there inside it? I wonder…

    Ron: You two seriously don’t think that he’s searching for this?

    Naruto: What? If you’ve got an idea about what Kabuto is aiming for, I’d like to know.

    Hermione: Well, if someone attacks a tomb of 20 years where not even bones are found…

    Harry: Then he’s surely searching for it.

    Naruto: What is it?

    Harry: One of the Deathly Hallows, the Elder Wand.

    Naruto: The Deathly Hallows…

    Hermione: It’s better if we speak of that inside my new office. Come with me.

    * * * *

    Meanwhile, in a dark cave with a dim lilted fire and a blanketed corpse on the ground…

    Kabuto: Tiger, Snake, Dog, Dragon! Summoning: Impure World Resurrection – Edo Tensei.

    A black coffin rose up from the ground…

    * * * *

    Hermione: Then the 3rd brother waited till time does his job and he handed the cloak to his son, while happily leaving the world…

    Naruto: I see but how are those…

    A sudden scream of prickling pain suddenly abrupt Naruto.

    Naruto: What is it?

    Harry: My…s…scar!


    ~END OF CHAPTER~

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    Well, I hoped you have enjoyed it. I'd also like to tell all my readers that school works is really becoming more and more ponderous and with important exams at the end of his year, I'll obviously give priority to my life and studies. Hope you'll understand it. I'll try to update the FF even if it might get very difficult from time to time or whenever I get the opportunity hopefully. Till then, enjoy this chapter and don't forget to give Cnc or click the 'Rate' and 'Thank You' button :D

     
         
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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

    AWESOME CHAPTER !!!

    I just loved it...

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    kabuto resuructing Voldemor lol that's just freaky.
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

    very good man
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

    WTH epic crossover of harry potter and naruto
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

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    AWESOME CHAPTER !!!

    I just loved it...

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    kabuto resuructing Voldemor lol that's just freaky.
    Thankies :D Well, it's no more really a spoiler

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

    I can't believe I am saying this, due to thinking crossing things over is kinda weird IMO, but this is AMAZING!!! You, sir, rule!
     
         

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    Rated, by the way.:D
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

    who knows how many reps you get from each chapy...I know I give you 1 everytime you post a new chapter
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

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    I can't believe I am saying this, due to thinking crossing things over is kinda weird IMO, but this is AMAZING!!! You, sir, rule!
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    Rated, by the way.:D
    Well, when I decided to make a crossover FF, I couldn't resolve myself from just creating a senseless or silly plot. It had to have a background story for it to be the more explicit possible. When I read mine now, atleast I know I achieved the explicit story I wanted; so no regrets on that part . Thanks for the nice comments and if you're new to it, then catch up with the previous chapters...Thanks for the 5/5 also!

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    Thanks for that :D I think a minimum of 5-7 (but it varies )
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

    For those confused or interested, I created some dates/years examples for the time setting about my FF to be more explicit.

    Check it out here ~ Time Setting of 6thHDC
     
         

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    Sweet work , now I wonder who's Back . He who shall not be named.
     
         

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    Sweet work , now I wonder who's Back . He who shall not be named.
    Thanks :D Yeah, I wonder if I'll keep the name taboo
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

    Ha! Impure World Resurrection for Valdemort, eh? Damn Kabuto, he just loves raising up people from time to time, eh?

    Good job, still!
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

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    Ha! Impure World Resurrection for Valdemort, eh? Damn Kabuto, he just loves raising up people from time to time, eh?

    Good job, still!
    Hehe, he's one freaky bastard indeed. It's also why it's fun to write about him since he can do so many despicable things. Believe me, he's not done yet...

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    :DAwesome chapter man, I give it a 10/10:D
     
         

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    :DAwesome chapter man, I give it a 10/10:D
    Thanks But you should have read from the beginnin'
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

    This is awesome. Can't believe I just saw this now :P

    I hope old Voldy gets resurrected ^_^
     
         

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    This is awesome. Can't believe I just saw this now :P

    I hope old Voldy gets resurrected ^_^
    Thankies. Well, you only read it not literally seen it lol

    Yeah, Voldy is no more moldy, now it's gonna get fun
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

    Well, I’ve finally caught up to your Fanfiction! ^.^ What a ride it has been from reading the final book to your chapters from one to six. I read your note at the bottom and it is unfortunate. However, life has a way of producing many road blocks and we have to try our best to juggle it all. You, Mikey and the rest of the gang ;p are very impressive to be able to continue with all the things you’ve got going on. I wanted to let you know that you made a slight mistake and if you would like to correct it? I will cut and paste so you will know the pin point:

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    Ron: So why did you wanted us to stay?

    Hermione: Wait a second! Harry! Harry! HARRY!

    Hermione: Oh, sorry Hermione.
    (This name above should be Harry instead, ne?)

    I hope you don’t take offense I just thought I know I’d like when my readers report something that they’d feel I may want to fix.

    I was surprised with how Kabuto choose to use Professor McGonagall as a tool-didn’t see that coming call me naive or what have you lol I’m excited to see where you will go next in the following chapters to come ;) I was thrilled to see that I could give you a thank you rep. I was like "Finally for once I don’t have to spread" lol XD
     
         

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    Re: 6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 6

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    Well, I’ve finally caught up to your Fanfiction! ^.^ What a ride it has been from reading the final book to your chapters from one to six. I read your note at the bottom and it is unfortunate. However, life has a way of producing many road blocks and we have to try our best to juggle it all. You, Mikey and the rest of the gang ;p are very impressive to be able to continue with all the things you’ve got going on. I wanted to let you know that you made a slight mistake and if you would like to correct it? I will cut and paste so you will know the pin point:

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    Ron: So why did you wanted us to stay?

    Hermione: Wait a second! Harry! Harry! HARRY!

    Hermione: Oh, sorry Hermione.
    (This name above should be Harry instead, ne?)

    I hope you don’t take offense I just thought I know I’d like when my readers report something that they’d feel I may want to fix.

    I was surprised with how Kabuto choose to use Professor McGonagall as a tool-didn’t see that coming call me naive or what have you lol I’m excited to see where you will go next in the following chapters to come I was thrilled to see that I could give you a thank you rep. I was like "Finally for once I don’t have to spread" lol
    Indeed, you did catch up and frankly, I'd like to thank you for each of your interesting reviews on my chapters. Yeah, I've barely written something in like more than 1.5 month apart from some mere brainstorming.

    Thanks for the error point you've pointed out. I wonder how no one took notice of that yet. I've edited it anyways. That's really a gross error. I wonder how I didn't see it.

    Kabuto's creepiness is something I really enjoy writing as I don't really need to explain his actions as he's almost evil to the core. Credits to Kishi of course for that. Thanks for the Rep+
     
         

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