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    What Really Happened.. ( Secret Uchiha Story )



    (This is not true..its just a script i made and i was inspired by TC9tails..Thank you very much)
    ( Please use the sound for more pleasure ^_^ ) :D

    (Sounds : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sNjtr...eature=related)

    Scene of Uchiha Madara And Uchiha Izuna..



    Uchiha Madara : Come on little brother..is that all you've got..

    Uchiha Izuna : Then take this ( throws a shuriken at madara )

    Uchiha Madara : ( deflected the shuriken ) you think you can hit me with that.. ( smoke coming at his back ) what the ?

    Uchiha Izuna : Got you!! ( Trying to land a kick and hitted Madara but it was a kagebunshin ) damn !

    Uchiha Madara : Up Here ! ( Katon Goukakyu no Jutsu , Great Fire Ball Technique )

    Uchiha Izuna : You wont get me! ( Casted Katon Goukakyu no Jutsu Too )
    ( 2 Mixing Katons Blowed Up )

    Uchiha Izuna : Ouchh..Thats rude!

    Uchiha Madara : whats the point of our training if we wont put our selves into it..well anyway lets get a rest first..im tired

    Uchiha Izuna : Me too..

    ( Cut Off Sound )

    Scene of Uchiha Madara And Uchiha Izuna Eating..

    Uchiha Izuna : Brother..do you think our clan is strongest..i mean theres a lot of clan out there especially our rival..the senjus.

    Uchiha Madara : Well..yeah..our clan is strong but were not the strongest..but still we are the unique one's among them

    Uchiha Izuna : how can you say that..dont tell me we are unique by having our sharingan..hyuuga's have their byakugan too

    Uchiha Madara : you see izuna..there is more than having the sharingan in our clan..but its our clans secret..
    dont bother knowing it..lets just eat

    Uchiha Izuna : ........ ( Thinking of something )

    Scene of Uchiha Brothers Sleeping..

    Uchiha Izuna : ( Still thinking "you see izuna..there is more than having the sharingan in our clan..but its our clans secret.." )
    whats that secret that brother mentioned..well i need to take a walk

    Uchiha Izuna : ( Walking then glances at their shrine ) ( remembers that " never ever go inside our shrine or you will see a monster )
    ..as if im still a kid.. ( goes inside the shrine )

    Uchiha Izuna : m..nothing special here.. ( notices something ) what with this scroll ( opens scroll )

    Uchiha Izuna : ( Shocked ) what the..this is impossible

    Uchiha Madara : nothings impossible for our clan..thats what makes us unique..having our sharingans improve and far more advanced

    Uchiha Izuna : but this is wrong..killing someone close to you just to obtain the mangekyou sharingan ?

    Uchiha Madara : now you know about our path..the uchiha clans path..thats why its our clans secret..maybe someday we will be required
    to follow that path

    Uchiha Izuna : no way..no one would follow this path..

    Uchiha Madara : think..we uchihas are the rivals of senjus..we are the clan that can match them..now do you want our clan to lose to
    the senju clan and still we are tainted by our path..then were just gonna lose ?

    Uchiha Izuna : yeah..i wont let that happen but still..maybe there's some other way to unlock this..

    Uchiha Madara : no..thats the only way we uchihas can have it..and besides its still not the time for us to use this improved doujutsu

    Uchiha Izuna : ............still

    ( Sounds : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-yOeT...eature=related)

    After 3 years of fighting with the Senju clan..both of them acquiring the Mangekyou sharingan

    Uchiha Madara : Damn it..we cant afford to lose !!

    Uchiha Izuna : Brother..lets just face the fact that our clan is not a match for the senju's..

    Uchiha Madara : Are you insane..i told you before that we cant afford to lose to them..our pride will be meaningless if that happens..

    Uchiha Izuna : Then lets just train more harder so that we can keep up with them..there's no point if we just brag things to our selves

    Uchiha Madara : Im sick of this..thats why we acquired our mangekyou sharingan so that we can have the power to keep up with them
    but still we need to train just to fight them..

    Uchiha Izuna : ( Face of a caring little brother ) .......well its up to you brother if you dont want too..

    Scene Of Uchiha Brothers Sleeping..


    Uchiha Madara : ( Begans to wake up and feels something strange ) whats happening..my vision..somethings odd.. is this the blindess
    that the scroll is mentioning..

    Uchiha Madara : ( Wakes up and goes to the shrine then read the scroll )
    "acquiring the mangekyous eye will give you the power but will lead you to a path of darkness"
    "this kind of darkness can be countered if two different kind of mangekyous will combine and thus giving you a new light and power"

    ( Sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bn8fR...eature=related )

    Scene of a war against senju and uchihas..(Weakened Uchiha Madara uses 2 divine mangekyou skills to save himself)

    Uchiha Madara : hashirama you bastard..Feel this pain..( Tsukoyomi )

    Hashirama Senju : ( Cannot be affected by Tsukoyomi )

    Uchiha Madara : A Wood Clone!

    Hashirama Senju : (Mokuton: Jubaku Eiso Wood Release: Binding Nest)

    Uchiha Madara : Damn it..

    Hashirama Senju : Accept defeat and you will be spared

    Uchiha Madara : ( Amaterasu )

    Hashirama Senju : Black Flames!! ( Wood Release : Defensive Wood )

    Uchiha Madara : Shit..he escapeed...whattt the ( blurred vision ) ..my vision..it's happening again

    Uchiha Izuna : Brother! ( removed the binding nest ) lets move away..there's many of them..we still wont have the chance
    i have called for some reinforcements..

    Uchiha Madara : Lets go.. ( Still blinded )

    Hashirama Senju : ( Binding Nest )

    Uchiha Izuna : Shit..

    Senju Warriors : ( Stabbed Uchiha Izuna )

    Uchiha Madara : Brotherr!! ( Still blurry vision )

    Senju Warrior : Hashirama..Uchiha Reinforcements are coming..

    Hashirama Senju : prepare for retreat..Move

    ( Sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umqlDFeFknE )

    Uchiha Madara : Brotherrr!! Breathe..Im sorry..i cant protect you..my
    eyes..damn it!! this can't be happening

    Uchiha Izuna : take my eyes brother...

    Uchiha Madara : what..what are you saying

    Uchiha Izuna : i know whats happening to you brother..ive read it too..the darkness that will engulf us if we obtained this doujutsu..take my eyes
    now..

    Uchiha Madara : this is not the time for that..

    Uchiha Izuna : its ok brother..i will be happy if you would take my eyes..if this happen..soon our clan will be the strongest just as you hope
    for..you will lead our clan to our best motives..you will be the one to take our clans name..

    Uchiha Madara : Izuna..

    Uchiha Izuna : dont worry..i will be living within you..we will be seeing the same intentions..we will be living the same path..we will see the
    same future..

    Uchiha Madara : ( Plucking both eyes while Madaras tears falls down )

    Uchiha Izuna : its time for me brother..make our clan proud..

    Uchiha Madara : My Brother..this new light..our new light !!



    ( Sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Nn7I...eature=related )
    "If Senju made a move..Uchiha made a move..if a country hired senju..the enemies would hire uchihas"
    but still both opposing clans had reached their limit..both clans were exhausted from all the fighting that is happening..
    so the thing happened..Senju clan made a truce with the uchiha clan..which uchiha did agreed..but there is one..only one
    opposing this truce..the name "Uchiha Madara"


    Scene of Uchiha Madara Bragging.

    Uchiha Madara : Where is the hatred we had for the senju clan!! What's the purpose of my brother's sacrifice!!
    where is the pride of our clan!

    Uchiha People : Quit thinking about our pride..think about our lives..so many have died within the wars we had with the senju clan.
    if this would continue..there is no more future for our clan

    Uchiha People(2) : even if you are our leader..think about your comrades..what would happen if this war will continue

    Uchiha People(3) : please respect our decision..


    As their leader..Uchiha Madara had no choice but to agree with the truce..thats what all the uchiha clan wanted..
    but still Madara thinks that later on the senju clan will just eliminate the uchiha clan..later on they formed konohagakure..all was remained
    peace until the day of supremacy has begun..the day Hashirama Senju became the 1st hokage in konohagakure


    Uchiha Madara : whats this happening..where is our supremacy? why did you pick hashirama to be the hokage in this land..is this it
    for us uchiha? is this what you wanted? for our pride to lose..well i wont let this happen..let me lead our clan to the supremacy we need.

    Uchiha People : what..by lighting the up the embers of war again? lets stop this madara..lets end up all this conversation and let harashima
    be our hokage

    Uchiha People(2) : dont let yourself overwhelm you..you have been engulf by your desire for power.

    Uchiha People(3) : your just going to make our clan tainted again by your greedy desires..even you stole your brother's eyes.

    Uchiha People(4) : just stop it..lets go

    Uchiha Madara : (Brother...Tears flow down remembering what izuna told him..)
    "soon our clan will be the strongest just as you hope for..you will lead our clan to our best motives..
    you will be the one to take our clans name.."

    Uchiha Madara : ill avenge our clan..i will avenge our clan!!


    ( Sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ai2Z-...eature=related )

    Soon Uchiha Madara left the village..betrayed by his own clan..

    ( Sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tDsRA...eature=related )

    until the day happened..until the day the EMS has tamed like a pet
    the most feared demon tails..the kyuubi..the 9 tails


    Uchiha Madara : now face my revenge..Konohagakure

    Later that night..at the brightest of the full moon..the attack has started..Uchiha Madara with his tamed kyuubi attacked konohagakure

    Leaf People : Shodai Sama! our land is being attack..the..the kyuubi..

    Shodai Hokage : The 9 tailed demon fox..only an uchiha can tame it..i knew it..i knew this day would happen

    Uchiha Madara : Face the pain of my revenge..Konohagakure..witness the greatest power of the uchiha!

    Shodai Hokage : Uchiha Madara!!..you have been taken by the desire of your power..the path your taking right now is the path
    of the downfall of your clan..stop this nonsense..

    Uchiha Madara : you think i will let you keep your supremacy in this land..you will just make our clan your dogs..you and your senju clan
    wont get my trust..i knew that you will exterminate our clan..witness..witness my power..i will avenge my brother and my clan!

    Shodai Hokage : you are full of it!! (Wood Release Secret Technique: Birth of Dense Woodland)

    Uchiha Madara : thats a big tree you got there but your tree techniques doesn't stand a chance on me..!

    Shodai Hokage : your the one who does not stand a chance on me! ( attacks madara with his sword )

    Uchiha Madara : your to slow! ( Fire Release : Great fireball technique..putting more power by the use of his fan )

    Shodai Hokage : ( Wood clone as a shield for great fireball ) that wont work against me

    Uchiha Madara : really? (came up behind shodai) (pulls out his sword and stabbed shodai) (poof)
    another wood clone!!

    Shodai Hokage : i know your weakness!! (from the air pulls his sword slashing madara's 1 eye)

    Uchiha Madara : Guhhhhhhhh!! damn..my eye..you bastard..what the hell did you do..diee ( Amaterasu )
    what..why isnt it coming..whats happening

    Shodai Hokage : prepare for your defeat Uchiha Madara (Kokuangyo no Jutsu ; Bringer of darkness technique)
    your desire for power has lead you to your destruction..now face the concenquence..

    Uchiha Madara : no..i wont die..you wont be able to kill me ( Guhh..spits blood)

    Shodai Hokage : (Stabbing madara) uchiha madara..such a worthy opponent..but we..we claim the supremacy..now.....this is the end
    for our rivalry..this will be our valley..the valley where i ended your life..
    Uchiha Madara : you...you cant..(falls down)

    Shodai..after killing madara..goes back to konohagakure to stop the kyuubi with his kyuubi supressing powers..


    at the place where madara falled......

    Uchiha Madara : this can't be happening..brother..izuna..our clan..i cant die like this..i failed our clan

    ( Sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8t05E...eature=related )


    ?????(1) : so this is the famous uchiha madara..what a suprise..you were beaten by a senju..by a rival

    Uchiha Madara : who..who are you..

    ?????(1) : lets just say that im like you..a person who hated the senju clan..a person like you and always wage wars..a person who desires
    supremacy..*sigh* uchiha madara..ive known you all along..all the informations about you..ive been spying your actions before..your
    motives and your power..i know it all..

    Uchiha Madara : how..how do you know me..i dont even know you..

    ?????(2) : zu zu zu zu zu..so im the one who will eat this body..my my..such a famous person

    ?????(1) : dont worry uchiha madara..your legacy will still remain alive..EVEN YOUR POWER!!

    Uchiha Madara : Nooooo....

    ?????(2) : ill finish you real quick..haha / shut up and just finish it!

    ?????(1) : Zetsu..preserve his remaining eye..that eye would be a great tool for my goal..

    Zetsu : zu zu zu zu..what will you do with it? danzo?

    Danzo : this eye..this eye doujutsu is a powerful tool..with this i can be powerful..soon all my goals will be completed
    the Sharingans true power..Uchiha Madaras Power!

    sorry for people that was not amaze by this..i promise to make much more beautiful ones..thank you again to the manga that TC9tails made..it inspired me to do this..enjoy!!
     
         
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    thanks, amazing.
     
         

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    awesome
     
         

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    whoa cool i think you 2 with tc9tails should make a fanfiction about uchiha its really good
     
         

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    yeah its really good
    him and tc should do that
    good idea shikamaru
     
         

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    Thank you for the responses..i really appreciated it :D:D
     
         

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    Doesnt make a sense. at that time danzo was a little kid the same age as 3rd hokage.
     
         

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    Amazing.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by supremespoiler View Post


    (this is not true..its just a script i made and i was inspired by tc9tails..thank you very much)
    ( please use the sound for more pleasure ^_^ ) :d

    (sounds : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=snjtr...eature=related)

    scene of uchiha madara and uchiha izuna..



    uchiha madara : Come on little brother..is that all you've got..

    Uchiha izuna : Then take this ( throws a shuriken at madara )

    uchiha madara : ( deflected the shuriken ) you think you can hit me with that.. ( smoke coming at his back ) what the ?

    Uchiha izuna : Got you!! ( trying to land a kick and hitted madara but it was a kagebunshin ) damn !

    Uchiha madara : Up here ! ( katon goukakyu no jutsu , great fire ball technique )

    uchiha izuna : You wont get me! ( casted katon goukakyu no jutsu too )
    ( 2 mixing katons blowed up )

    uchiha izuna : Ouchh..thats rude!

    Uchiha madara : Whats the point of our training if we wont put our selves into it..well anyway lets get a rest first..im tired

    uchiha izuna : Me too..

    ( cut off sound )

    scene of uchiha madara and uchiha izuna eating..

    uchiha izuna : Brother..do you think our clan is strongest..i mean theres a lot of clan out there especially our rival..the senjus.

    Uchiha madara : Well..yeah..our clan is strong but were not the strongest..but still we are the unique one's among them

    uchiha izuna : How can you say that..dont tell me we are unique by having our sharingan..hyuuga's have their byakugan too

    uchiha madara : You see izuna..there is more than having the sharingan in our clan..but its our clans secret..
    Dont bother knowing it..lets just eat

    uchiha izuna : ........ ( thinking of something )

    scene of uchiha brothers sleeping..

    uchiha izuna : ( still thinking "you see izuna..there is more than having the sharingan in our clan..but its our clans secret.." )
    whats that secret that brother mentioned..well i need to take a walk

    uchiha izuna : ( walking then glances at their shrine ) ( remembers that " never ever go inside our shrine or you will see a monster )
    lol..as if im still a kid.. ( goes inside the shrine )

    uchiha izuna : Hmmm..nothing special here.. ( notices something ) what with this scroll ( opens scroll )

    uchiha izuna : ( shocked ) what the..this is impossible

    uchiha madara : Nothings impossible for our clan..thats what makes us unique..having our sharingans improve and far more advanced

    uchiha izuna : But this is wrong..killing someone close to you just to obtain the mangekyou sharingan ?

    Uchiha madara : Now you know about our path..the uchiha clans path..thats why its our clans secret..maybe someday we will be required
    to follow that path

    uchiha izuna : No way..no one would follow this path..

    Uchiha madara : Think..we uchihas are the rivals of senjus..we are the clan that can match them..now do you want our clan to lose to
    the senju clan and still we are tainted by our path..then were just gonna lose ?

    Uchiha izuna : Yeah..i wont let that happen but still..maybe there's some other way to unlock this..

    Uchiha madara : No..thats the only way we uchihas can have it..and besides its still not the time for us to use this improved doujutsu

    uchiha izuna : ............still

    ( sounds : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-yoet...eature=related)

    after 3 years of fighting with the senju clan..both of them acquiring the mangekyou sharingan

    uchiha madara : Damn it..we cant afford to lose !!

    Uchiha izuna : Brother..lets just face the fact that our clan is not a match for the senju's..

    Uchiha madara : Are you insane..i told you before that we cant afford to lose to them..our pride will be meaningless if that happens..

    Uchiha izuna : Then lets just train more harder so that we can keep up with them..there's no point if we just brag things to our selves

    uchiha madara : Im sick of this..thats why we acquired our mangekyou sharingan so that we can have the power to keep up with them
    but still we need to train just to fight them..

    Uchiha izuna : ( face of a caring little brother ) .......well its up to you brother if you dont want too..

    scene of uchiha brothers sleeping..


    uchiha madara : ( begans to wake up and feels something strange ) whats happening..my vision..somethings odd.. Is this the blindess
    that the scroll is mentioning..

    Uchiha madara : ( wakes up and goes to the shrine then read the scroll )
    "acquiring the mangekyous eye will give you the power but will lead you to a path of darkness"
    "this kind of darkness can be countered if two different kind of mangekyous will combine and thus giving you a new light and power"

    ( sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bn8fr...eature=related )

    scene of a war against senju and uchihas..(weakened uchiha madara uses 2 divine mangekyou skills to save himself)

    uchiha madara : Hashirama you bastard..feel this pain..( tsukoyomi )

    hashirama senju : ( cannot be affected by tsukoyomi )

    uchiha madara : A wood clone!

    Hashirama senju : (mokuton: Jubaku eiso wood release: Binding nest)

    uchiha madara : Damn it..

    Hashirama senju : Accept defeat and you will be spared

    uchiha madara : ( amaterasu )

    hashirama senju : Black flames!! ( wood release : Defensive wood )

    uchiha madara : Shit..he escapeed...whattt the ( blurred vision ) ..my vision..it's happening again

    uchiha izuna : Brother! ( removed the binding nest ) lets move away..there's many of them..we still wont have the chance
    i have called for some reinforcements..

    Uchiha madara : Lets go.. ( still blinded )

    hashirama senju : ( binding nest )

    uchiha izuna : Shit..

    Senju warriors : ( stabbed uchiha izuna )

    uchiha madara : Brotherr!! ( still blurry vision )

    senju warrior : Hashirama..uchiha reinforcements are coming..

    Hashirama senju : Prepare for retreat..move

    ( sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umqldfefkne )

    uchiha madara : Brotherrr!! Breathe..im sorry..i cant protect you..my
    eyes..damn it!! This can't be happening

    uchiha izuna : Take my eyes brother...

    Uchiha madara : What..what are you saying

    uchiha izuna : I know whats happening to you brother..ive read it too..the darkness that will engulf us if we obtained this doujutsu..take my eyes
    now..

    Uchiha madara : This is not the time for that..

    Uchiha izuna : Its ok brother..i will be happy if you would take my eyes..if this happen..soon our clan will be the strongest just as you hope
    for..you will lead our clan to our best motives..you will be the one to take our clans name..

    Uchiha madara : Izuna..

    Uchiha izuna : Dont worry..i will be living within you..we will be seeing the same intentions..we will be living the same path..we will see the
    same future..

    Uchiha madara : ( plucking both eyes while madaras tears falls down )

    uchiha izuna : Its time for me brother..make our clan proud..

    Uchiha madara : My brother..this new light..our new light !!



    ( sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8nn7i...eature=related )
    "if senju made a move..uchiha made a move..if a country hired senju..the enemies would hire uchihas"
    but still both opposing clans had reached their limit..both clans were exhausted from all the fighting that is happening..
    So the thing happened..senju clan made a truce with the uchiha clan..which uchiha did agreed..but there is one..only one
    opposing this truce..the name "uchiha madara"


    scene of uchiha madara bragging.

    uchiha madara : Where is the hatred we had for the senju clan!! What's the purpose of my brother's sacrifice!!
    Where is the pride of our clan!

    Uchiha people : Quit thinking about our pride..think about our lives..so many have died within the wars we had with the senju clan.
    If this would continue..there is no more future for our clan

    uchiha people(2) : Even if you are our leader..think about your comrades..what would happen if this war will continue

    uchiha people(3) : Please respect our decision..


    as their leader..uchiha madara had no choice but to agree with the truce..thats what all the uchiha clan wanted..
    But still madara thinks that later on the senju clan will just eliminate the uchiha clan..later on they formed konohagakure..all was remained
    peace until the day of supremacy has begun..the day hashirama senju became the 1st hokage in konohagakure


    uchiha madara : Whats this happening..where is our supremacy? Why did you pick hashirama to be the hokage in this land..is this it
    for us uchiha? Is this what you wanted? For our pride to lose..well i wont let this happen..let me lead our clan to the supremacy we need.

    Uchiha people : What..by lighting the up the embers of war again? Lets stop this madara..lets end up all this conversation and let harashima
    be our hokage

    uchiha people(2) : Dont let yourself overwhelm you..you have been engulf by your desire for power.

    Uchiha people(3) : Your just going to make our clan tainted again by your greedy desires..even you stole your brother's eyes.

    Uchiha people(4) : Just stop it..lets go

    uchiha madara : (brother...tears flow down remembering what izuna told him..)
    "soon our clan will be the strongest just as you hope for..you will lead our clan to our best motives..
    You will be the one to take our clans name.."

    uchiha madara : Ill avenge our clan..i will avenge our clan!!


    ( sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ai2z-...eature=related )

    soon uchiha madara left the village..betrayed by his own clan..

    ( sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tdsra...eature=related )

    until the day happened..until the day the ems has tamed like a pet
    the most feared demon tails..the kyuubi..the 9 tails


    uchiha madara : Now face my revenge..konohagakure

    later that night..at the brightest of the full moon..the attack has started..uchiha madara with his tamed kyuubi attacked konohagakure

    leaf people : Shodai sama! Our land is being attack..the..the kyuubi..

    Shodai hokage : The 9 tailed demon fox..only an uchiha can tame it..i knew it..i knew this day would happen

    uchiha madara : Face the pain of my revenge..konohagakure..witness the greatest power of the uchiha!

    Shodai hokage : Uchiha madara!!..you have been taken by the desire of your power..the path your taking right now is the path
    of the downfall of your clan..stop this nonsense..

    Uchiha madara : You think i will let you keep your supremacy in this land..you will just make our clan your dogs..you and your senju clan
    wont get my trust..i knew that you will exterminate our clan..witness..witness my power..i will avenge my brother and my clan!

    Shodai hokage : You are full of it!! (wood release secret technique: Birth of dense woodland)

    uchiha madara : Thats a big tree you got there but your tree techniques doesn't stand a chance on me..!

    Shodai hokage : Your the one who does not stand a chance on me! ( attacks madara with his sword )

    uchiha madara : Your to slow! ( fire release : Great fireball technique..putting more power by the use of his fan )

    shodai hokage : ( wood clone as a shield for great fireball ) that wont work against me

    uchiha madara : Really? (came up behind shodai) (pulls out his sword and stabbed shodai) (poof)
    another wood clone!!

    Shodai hokage : I know your weakness!! (from the air pulls his sword slashing madara's 1 eye)

    uchiha madara : Guhhhhhhhh!! Damn..my eye..you bastard..what the hell did you do..diee ( amaterasu )
    what..why isnt it coming..whats happening

    shodai hokage : Prepare for your defeat uchiha madara (kokuangyo no jutsu ; bringer of darkness technique)
    your desire for power has lead you to your destruction..now face the concenquence..

    Uchiha madara : No..i wont die..you wont be able to kill me ( guhh..spits blood)

    shodai hokage : (stabbing madara) uchiha madara..such a worthy opponent..but we..we claim the supremacy..now.....this is the end
    for our rivalry..this will be our valley..the valley where i ended your life..
    Uchiha madara : You...you cant..(falls down)

    shodai..after killing madara..goes back to konohagakure to stop the kyuubi with his kyuubi supressing powers..


    at the place where madara falled......

    uchiha madara : This can't be happening..brother..izuna..our clan..i cant die like this..i failed our clan

    ( sound : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8t05e...eature=related )


    ?????(1) : So this is the famous uchiha madara..what a suprise..you were beaten by a senju..by a rival

    uchiha madara : Who..who are you..

    ?????(1) : Lets just say that im like you..a person who hated the senju clan..a person like you and always wage wars..a person who desires
    supremacy..*sigh* uchiha madara..ive known you all along..all the informations about you..ive been spying your actions before..your
    motives and your power..i know it all..

    Uchiha madara : How..how do you know me..i dont even know you..

    ?????(2) : Zu zu zu zu zu..so im the one who will eat this body..my my..such a famous person

    ?????(1) : Dont worry uchiha madara..your legacy will still remain alive..even your power!!

    Uchiha madara : Nooooo....

    ?????(2) : Ill finish you real quick..haha / shut up and just finish it!

    ?????(1) : Zetsu..preserve his remaining eye..that eye would be a great tool for my goal..

    Zetsu : Zu zu zu zu..what will you do with it? Danzo?

    Danzo : This eye..this eye doujutsu is a powerful tool..with this i can be powerful..soon all my goals will be completed
    the sharingans true power..uchiha madaras power!

    Sorry for people that was not amaze by this..i promise to make much more beautiful ones..thank you again to the manga that tc9tails made..it inspired me to do this..enjoy!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by amin4ik View Post
    Doesnt make a sense. at that time danzo was a little kid the same age as 3rd hokage.
    y r u so negatvie
     
         
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    I like the ending I though it will be Pain who finds madara's body but bang it zuzuzu
     
         

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    Nice story man! u and tc9tails made a good story
     
         

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    Thanks for all people that enjoyed by this..i promise to make more :D
     
         

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