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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Good Job.

    (Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast
    moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.

    Focus on the size and the power of this jutsu. (link the picture so that you will understand what I mean)

    10 sentences.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Whoa...that's huge!

    *I start concentrating a huge amount of fuuton chakra inside me and once again I start compressing it to make more room for new molded chakra; as I'm molding chakra I do the "Ram" handseal and I channel chakra around my body; I start mixing it with the air around me and start creating a tornado and compress it once again, adding more and more chakra until it reaches high density and raises to it's highest limits; as it's raising I add more and more chakra to it making it bigger and more powerful; once done I direct it at the woods and it leaves nothing behind*

     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Try again. Be more detailed.

    also, [;] is not used to end a sentence......so stop using it. just use a period.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    You're killing me, and no, I won't stop using semicolon just because I want to use it. Fair enough?

    *I start concentrating on my physical and spiritual energies; as I'm concentrating I try to keep the balance between these two using natural transformation; after I start creating chakra inside my chakra circulatory system I start feeling the air around me and a light breeze passes through my body making my chakra become fuuton chakra; as I'm concentrating fuuton chakra in my body I start channeling it through my whole body because I can release a greater amount of chakra if I release it through my whole body; even though if I release chakra through my body it won't be enough to create a huge blast of wind so I start compressing chakra making it stronger and making more room for new chakra; as I'm repeating the process over and over again I build up a huge amount of chakra enough to create a huge blast of wind; as I reach my limit I release the chakra around me and start mixing it with the air around me; as I'm mixing chakra with the air I start rotating it creating a small vortex of wind using shape manipulation; after I created a vortex I start adding more and more chakra I gathered, to create a growing tornado; as I'm adding more and more chakra I'm also speeding the tornado up and once it gets out of control I release it in front of me and hope that it will hit the woods as I can't control on my own*

     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by McRazor View Post
    You're killing me, and no, I won't stop using semicolon just because I want to use it. Fair enough?

    *I start concentrating on my physical and spiritual energies; as I'm concentrating I try to keep the balance between these two using natural transformation; after I start creating chakra inside my chakra circulatory system I start feeling the air around me and a light breeze passes through my body making my chakra become fuuton chakra; as I'm concentrating fuuton chakra in my body I start channeling it through my whole body because I can release a greater amount of chakra if I release it through my whole body; even though if I release chakra through my body it won't be enough to create a huge blast of wind so I start compressing chakra making it stronger and making more room for new chakra; as I'm repeating the process over and over again I build up a huge amount of chakra enough to create a huge blast of wind; as I reach my limit I release the chakra around me and start mixing it with the air around me; as I'm mixing chakra with the air I start rotating it creating a small vortex of wind using shape manipulation; after I created a vortex I start adding more and more chakra I gathered, to create a growing tornado; as I'm adding more and more chakra I'm also speeding the tornado up and once it gets out of control I release it in front of me and hope that it will hit the woods as I can't control on my own*

    If you think I'm killing you then please feel free to find another senpai or sensei to train you. The use of the semicolon to end the sentence is improper English, and rather annoying when I know that you know that it is incorrect but you do it anyway.

    So either use a period or find another senpai/sensei. Its totally up to you. Fair enough? Good. So fix your sentences to reflex such as a new post or I will have assumed you have found another person to teach you and will not post in this thread again.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    That is not improper English. The way I'm posting has nothing to do with SENTENCES...they are just parts of a big sentence which I'm allowed to divide in separate parts...but whatever...I'm not here to argue...Everyone here is trying to find a way to be different than someone other which is very hard here and everyone is trying to find a way not to copy someone else and if I want to put semicolons I will put them and neither God will stop me.

    If you are dumping a student because someone is using semicolons than you have a big problem with yourself. And giving yourself right to tell others what to do and how to act (not counting the sempai-ship) is more annoying...Good luck with your teaching, I'm sure I'll find someone other.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    What the fuck is this shit?
    You've outdone yourself, faggot.
    This is a whole new level for you, your mama must be proud.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    What I've read in this last page is simply unacceptable for a Sensei or a Sempai.

    Loki, you're clearly abusing your powers for you own sick reasons and I can't allow you to continue. You will be reported to the Sensei group and will lose your right to teach as a Sempai.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Why force an imperfect to be perfect when it's impossible?
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    what the...this is insane..
    Completely abusing teaching powers man..

    Fausty..you just made my sig quote
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by Izuna Uchiha View Post
    What I've read in this last page is simply unacceptable for a Sensei or a Sempai.

    Loki, you're clearly abusing your powers for you own sick reasons and I can't allow you to continue. You will be reported to the Sensei group and will lose your right to teach as a Sempai.
    So I was abusing my powers as a senpai by asking him to make 5 sentences to explain in detail what he is doing? Then by asking him to not use colons, as it is not a complete sentence, but just a bunch of broken up sentences combined into one larger sentence, then it is abusing my power?

    I didnt ask him to have perfect grammar and spelling, only that he replace semi colons with periods. Then when he responded no and fair enough, I said he could find another senpai if he wanted. I've had sensei's always post you must use proper english and grammar, and give a standard for what they expect. all I asked for was 5 sentences unless I state otherwise...which means that it was a more complex jutsu to perform than the standard and a period. If it causes me to be written or or stop being a sensei then so be it.

    Not one of my other students have complained about writting 5 FULL sentences to explain a jutsu. Jutsu that require 2 parts get 10 - 15 depending on what it is.

    So Please, if this is improper training getting them to explain a jutsu so that they understand it and I know that they understand it before moving onto the next then I resign as a Senpai and will let Jinbei know as well.

    Also, all people who are not Sensei's or a Mod please remove yourself from my training thread, as you are simply spamming, and it is not tolerated.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by BloodLust Loki View Post
    Good Job.

    (Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast
    moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.

    Focus on the size and the power of this jutsu. (link the picture so that you will understand what I mean)

    10 sentences.
    Quote Originally Posted by BloodLust Loki View Post
    So I was abusing my powers as a senpai by asking him to make 5 sentences to explain in detail what he is doing? Then by asking him to not use colons, as it is not a complete sentence, but just a bunch of broken up sentences combined into one larger sentence, then it is abusing my power?

    I didnt ask him to have perfect grammar and spelling, only that he replace semi colons with periods. Then when he responded no and fair enough, I said he could find another senpai if he wanted. I've had sensei's always post you must use proper english and grammar, and give a standard for what they expect. all I asked for was 5 sentences unless I state otherwise...which means that it was a more complex jutsu to perform than the standard and a period. If it causes me to be written or or stop being a sensei then so be it.

    Not one of my other students have complained about writting 5 FULL sentences to explain a jutsu. Jutsu that require 2 parts get 10 - 15 depending on what it is.

    So Please, if this is improper training getting them to explain a jutsu so that they understand it and I know that they understand it before moving onto the next then I resign as a Senpai and will let Jinbei know as well.

    Also, all people who are not Sensei's or a Mod please remove yourself from my training thread, as you are simply spamming, and it is not tolerated.
    *****, please.
    You think you are teaching anything? You forgot the most basic rule of being a sempai/sensei, posting description about the jutsu and teaching the way of performing the technique. All you do is post a technique and require a detailed description from your students while you explain completely nothing, if you call this training, you should be buried in the ground and thrown rocks at.
    P.S. Removed sempai status.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    I just can't get over the fact that I made 40+ posts in this thread and NOW I get a response like that?
    Also for your information, I had other Senseis/Sempais and no one ever told me not to use semicolon.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by Fausty View Post
    *****, please.
    You think you are teaching anything? You forgot the most basic rule of being a sempai/sensei, posting description about the jutsu and teaching the way of performing the technique. All you do is post a technique and require a detailed description from your students while you explain completely nothing, if you call this training, you should be buried in the ground and thrown rocks at.
    P.S. Removed sempai status.
    I'm sorry Faust, but can you please refrain from posting in my thread as you are not a sensei or mod? You have a removed sempai status. Its is not a sensei or a mod. Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by McRazor View Post
    I just can't get over the fact that I made 40+ posts in this thread and NOW I get a response like that?
    Also for your information, I had other Senseis/Sempais and no one ever told me not to use semicolon.
    once again. All I did was ask you to use a period instead of semi-colons. I didnt ask you do anything that was weird except to make complete sentences, instead of one big run on extra long sentence, in which the ways you were using the semicolon were wrong in the first place. You replied that I was killing you and you were trying to be different by using the semicolons. I didnt yell at you. All I did was say that if you thought I was being unfair in anyway shape or form (ie killing you), you could find another senpai to train you.
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    But its cool. I'm resigning Izuna so don't bother reporting me.

    But for your information. I separated training. I had them give detailed description of jutsu in the training thread for them to explain how to use it, and give examples on other ways to use it if necessary.

    Then they had battle training, where I at first had them battle another of my students to see what they already knew, and to correct the usage of techniques as they went along. Telling them what they did wrong or could or could not do. Also providing a link to Izuna's Elemental Combination training so that they could see and understand how to increase the range of jutsu, increase the power, and even increase the power but shorten the range of a jutsu.

    But you would have known that if you all had simply ASKED me what I was doing and why I was training that way. I was trying to give them battle experience instead of making these dull training sessions where all I did was reply and reply and reply to the same stuff over and over again.

    Even Pervy corrected me in one of those sessions. The only reason that I stopped doing that is because some of my students were not replying due to RL stuff. Adams30 and McRazor himself didnt respond for like a week, and I wasn't going to hold up my other students because they had RL stuff to deal with.

    But I thank you all. Instead of correcting me and showing me what I was supposedly doing wrong you simply flame or report me for incorrect training when you actually had no idea what you were talking about and only saw half the picture. Its much appreciated.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    How do I have a removed sempai status? I could become one anytime of the day, I just dislike the RP.
    No problem, always glad to ruin your fun.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by Fausty View Post
    *****, please.
    You think you are teaching anything? You forgot the most basic rule of being a sempai/sensei, posting description about the jutsu and teaching the way of performing the technique. All you do is post a technique and require a detailed description from your students while you explain completely nothing, if you call this training, you should be buried in the ground and thrown rocks at.
    P.S. Removed sempai status.
    Quote Originally Posted by Fausty View Post
    How do I have a removed sempai status? I could become one anytime of the day, I just dislike the RP.
    No problem, always glad to ruin your fun.
    Now please. Stop Spamming.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by Fausty View Post
    *****, please.
    You think you are teaching anything? You forgot the most basic rule of being a sempai/sensei, posting description about the jutsu and teaching the way of performing the technique. All you do is post a technique and require a detailed description from your students while you explain completely nothing, if you call this training, you should be buried in the ground and thrown rocks at.
    P.S. Removed sempai status.
    One just can't understand simple things.
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by Fausty View Post
    How do I have a removed sempai status? I could become one anytime of the day, I just dislike the RP.
    No problem, always glad to ruin your fun.
    Wanna be my senpai? :3
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by Gobi Gobletsson View Post
    Wanna be my senpai? :3
    You betrayed me for that Howard guy. </3
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by Fausty View Post
    You betrayed me for that Howard guy. </3
    Nuuu, I would drop forward anytime for my Fausteh. D:
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by Gobi Gobletsson View Post
    Nuuu, I would drop forward anytime for my Fausteh. D:
    I might for a temporary time... <_<
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Quote Originally Posted by Gobi Gobletsson View Post
    Nuuu, I would drop forward anytime for my Fausteh. D:
    works for meh.... less work... sounds good right about now...
     
         

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    Re: Loki Sempai [WIND]

    Loki, After reviewing your training techniques, I have deemed you unfit to train. You do not know the proper techniques to training. Also you are in no way able to stop training a student because they don't use grammar the way you'd want them too.

    From this point forward you are stripped of any and all sempai status and unable to become a sempai until deemed otherwise.
     
         

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