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    MY ideA OF THE FINAL BATTLE

    FIRST OF ALL I SUCK @ DISS
    2ND LY



    Criticize all u lIKE I AM JUST SO BORED (Life is meaningless now when ur 18)


    ANYWAYS
    FINal Battle sequnce
    PART 1
    Summary (recap)
    PAIN is ded madra is dead
    akastuki is fallen

    : Reunited with his best friend and beaten back into reality saskue joins forces with naruto after he see his strength and realize proctecting others u care about the most is true strenght )
    NAruto in sage made HAD FUSED WITH EMS SASKUE
    BEHOLD THE AWESOME POWER OD THE DESTINED CHILD
    (can't think of name ) ZENNOSKUE

    KABUTO LAughs WITHE the full power OF EVIL
    THE OPPOSITE OF ALL GOOD
    (inner soul kabuto STATES) NARUTO HAS grown up al ot
    he has never given up i wonder if he is the one that Can cleanse my evil heatrt he did it before he can do it again?

    FULL POWERED EVIL GOD KABUTO V.s ZENNOSKUE

    inside ZENNOSKUE(NAruto & sakue combined there powers and the nine tailed fox is working & cooperating with them)


    KAbuto Who has all the previous kages OF the 5 great nations @ his beck in call FROM beyond the graves summons all of them including jirya and HANZO AND the sage of six paths


    (The 4th hokage looks @ kabuto
    thinking u bastard
    u wanat me 2 fight my son )
    >KABUTO SAY keep them buzy while i go abosrb some of gods powers

    (he may hurt me a bit but ij sut need alil & that power will mutliply inside me)

    KAbuto confronts god GOD ZAPPS him with holyl ighting from his holy spirit
    KABUTO ABOSRBS IT and fall out of HEaVAN
    ( AND THEn GOES KUKUKUKUUKUKUKU)


    While zenoskue battles LEGENDARY FIGHTERS )

    Esle where sakura uses a secret jutsu that Rejuvinates (THE konoha 11 )
    team7
    team 8
    team 1o
    guys team
    (Kakashi Re awakens WITH ful EMS and THE WHITE CHAKRA )
    The tailed beast realsed from their prison and bring back their vessels
    gArra who is already alive
    feels the full power of shukau
    ALL 8 jinchurhi REawakend

    ALL of narutos allies and saskue comme rads battle
    KABUTOS new henchmen legnedary fighters of the ninja world
    THE Battle is intense
    WOrds cannot describe)

    (

    (Kabuot watcing from afar in his BLack hooded robes With PURE GLOWING WhITE eyes WITh A THE MOST EVIL AURA IN WATCHES then say hmph and dissapear in a black hole in his dark domain)

    P.S OROchiamru is dead but his sword is used by kabuto )
    )
    &THUS THE BATTLE BEGINS

    ZEnNNOzuke: AMaSTURE FUTON RASENSHURKIEN ...... against the 2nd hokage

    4Th hokage : (SO fast goes @ zennoskue)
    Cries ... Forgive me naruto )
    hirashin jutsu

    Else where
    Asuam:shikamaru u have grown up ..
    Flying swallow !!!
    SHIkameu:Shadow sewing
    (DMAN THAT bastard KABUTO)


    (raikages with hizashi standing in the middle)
    HIzashi : it has been a long time son
    i
    nEJi:father !

    SAkumo: kakashi do u finally understand what i did and y i did it........







    (WAT is this all of konhas and the great ninja heros of the world have awakened one the side of darkness)
    ( to BE CONtinued) ).....sorry i suck i know




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    just hoped u found it intresting
     
         

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    ye u r bad story writer.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by amin4ik View Post
    ye u r bad story writer.
    thank u very much
    :D
    told yeah
     
         

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    k THIS IS WATSI M IMAGIANSTION IT IS NOT GUNNA HAPPEN THOUGH BUT WAT DO U THINK
    ESSPECIALLY ABOUT KABUTO
    MAKING ALL THE KAGES RIZE
    i many finsih it i may not
    :no_ignore:
    don't care iam just bored
     
         

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    My mother told me if I don't have anything nice to say I should say anything at all...
     
         

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    this is what i think of it [place random insulting comment here] and/or [place random complimenting comment here]
     
         

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    meh
    lol i was bored & i know it sucks alrigt
     
         

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    FINE THIS THREAD IS FOR REVLIING STRESS SAY ALL HE HURTFUL THING U WANT
    I AM PISEED OF @ HOME BORED THATS Y I MADE THIS THREAD BUT UR free 2 say DO NOT BEOMCE I A MANGA WRITER
    JSUT DON'T b 2 INUSLTING CAUSE WAT I SAY may get me banned

    HOWEVER ALSO JUST say u suck
    UR A NOOB
    OR WHATEVER
    OR emo
    do noT SWEAR CAUSE IT WIL GET U IN TROUBLE
     
         

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    as simon would say there not enough words in the english vocabulary to describe how awful that was !
     
         

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    TY I NEED RELASE ALL MY AGER
    MORE HATRED FOR THIS THREAD COME ON
    :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:mad::D:D:mad::mad::D:mad::D :mad::D:D:D:D:D
     
         

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    I didnt hate it one bit but even found it interesting... But the whole Sasuke fusion and the Kabuto getting "HOLY POWERS" needed more explaining... Why would god grant Kabuto his "Holy Power" and Sasuke fusing with naruto... Dragon Ball Z had fusion and over killed it.

    It was what i would say suited as and epic MOVIE!!
     
         

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    i actually thought it was good it could be a possible final battle
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kdowns View Post
    i actually thought it was good it could be a possible final battle
    Ya if Kisshi and the other writers were drunk, on drugs, and half dead
     
         

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    Stop saying you suck the story was fine.. the spelling and grammar is what you suck at
     
         

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    im got ur story pretty intresting .. plzzz continue the fight ... !!!!!!!! i would like to see the end !!! reps added
     
         

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    ok bro you want me to be honest or to lie well heres the lie
    it was really good bro i really liked it and youre really talented at writing these kinds of stuff i think you should really continue this rofl and that part with sakumo and kakashi and shiakamaru and asuma totally sucked

    (thinks in mind should i tell him the truth now O_o?umm lets see if i told him a truth what would it be ohh yeah dude you suck hard that thing was totall noncence lmao naruto fusing with sasuke that would be something so akward i mean think about it and kabuto with gods power i mean WTF O_o rofl hahahahahaahahaha and please try to find something so that you wont be bored anymore hahahaha but i would like to the ending of that shikamaru asuma fight and sakumo kakashi thout so continue it)

    P.S dont take my words seriously i awlays make fun of you even on msn haha but continue this thing i wana see the ending
     
         

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    HAHAHAHA :D I must ask something : Why are U always bored? :D
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by platinum69 View Post
    I didnt hate it one bit but even found it interesting... But the whole Sasuke fusion and the Kabuto getting "HOLY POWERS" needed more explaining... Why would god grant Kabuto his "Holy Power" and Sasuke fusing with naruto... Dragon Ball Z had fusion and over killed it.

    It was what i would say suited as and epic MOVIE!!


    Quote Originally Posted by -shikamaru- View Post
    ok bro you want me to be honest or to lie well heres the lie
    it was really good bro i really liked it and youre really talented at writing these kinds of stuff i think you should really continue this rofl and that part with sakumo and kakashi and shiakamaru and asuma totally sucked

    (thinks in mind should i tell him the truth now O_o?umm lets see if i told him a truth what would it be ohh yeah dude you suck hard that thing was totall noncence lmao naruto fusing with sasuke that would be something so akward i mean think about it and kabuto with gods power i mean WTF O_o rofl hahahahahaahahaha and please try to find something so that you wont be bored anymore hahahaha but i would like to the ending of that shikamaru asuma fight and sakumo kakashi thout so continue it)

    P.S dont take my words seriously i awlays make fun of you even on msn haha but continue this thing i wana see the ending
    :mad:
     
         
    Last edited by SAKumono26; 11-12-2008 at 11:58 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Quote Originally Posted by Xero View Post
    Stop saying you suck the story was fine.. the spelling and grammar is what you suck at
    :confused::D
    well i got MY high school diploma so iam done learning
    hell
    even got an award
    so no i am drink my juice
    :D
    like isaid 18 is meaning less now
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by SAKumono26 View Post




    :mad:
    rofl hahaha
     
         

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    you suck?
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by -shikamaru- View Post
    rofl hahaha
    bully
    :no_ignore:

    shoot i am

    Quote Originally Posted by Konoha Red Fox View Post
    you suck?
    yes
     
         
    Last edited by SAKumono26; 11-12-2008 at 12:17 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    no u dont suck bro .. that wa amazing pretty amazing plzz write more ....
     
         

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