Results 1 to 15 of 15
  1. #1
    Special Jonin anbu member Kdowns's Avatar
    Status
    Kdowns is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Posts
    498
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Kakashi vs Tobi Part 1 (first try at this)

    Here my Prediction if Kakashi vs Tobi happens

    Kakashi Realizes Tobi has kidnapped Naruto and chases after Tobi

    Tobi Realizes Hes being Followed By kakashi

    Tobi *yells for saskues Help*

    Sasuke: Yes?

    Tobi:I need you to stall him *points at kakshi* for me while i takes this to HQ
    For biju extracting

    Sasuke sees Naruto passed out

    Sasuke: naruto you dumbass....

    Sasuke *remembers The times Him and Naruto and rest of team 7

    Tobi: Sasuke Get Kakashi now

    Sasuke: On it

    Kakashi*sees sasuke on his way over to kakashi

    Kakashi:Sasuke OUTA my way gotta get Naruto Back

    Sasuke: i know but i cant let that happen

    Kakashi: What!!!!!

    Sasuke:Tobi has ordered me to stall u and i will

    Kakashi: Gah How do i break you out of it Tobi has u hypnotized

    Sasuke: I know But i cant control my body
    Sasuke: I can think on my own but cant Move on my own im under his control

    Kakashi:look me in the eyes sasuke
    Kakashi*activates Mangeyko sharigan*

    Sasuke:*GASP*

    Sasuke: * starts to realize what a dumbass he has been and Naruto will always be a brother to Him*

    Kakashi: Can you Help me get him back From the akaski

    Sasuke: But we both cant do this alone we need one more

    Sasuke *starts thinking about someone in particular*

    Kakashi: Already Thought ahead Pakkun would be here with It in a bit
    end of Part 1

    How do u like it so Far
    I already know this wont happen but it was for the hell of it And make your predictions for who pakkun is bringing Part 2 will be up in a few days
     
         
    Last edited by Kdowns; 11-24-2008 at 09:54 PM.

  2. #2
    taijutsi specialist konoha s beautiful beast's Avatar
    Status
    konoha s beautiful beast is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Location
    Georgia,Tbilisi
    Posts
    1,327
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    sorry man but too naive
     
         

  3. #3
    Member pervysage101's Avatar
    Status
    pervysage101 is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Posts
    232
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    once u wake up from fantasy land
    then post the real version of kakahi vs tobi
    until then sweet dreams
     
         

  4. #4
    Special Jonin anbu member Kdowns's Avatar
    Status
    Kdowns is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Posts
    498
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    lol forgot to put that it was first time didnt know it would suck that bad
    Will practice more
     
         

  5. #5
    RokuNR's Avatar
    Status
    RokuNR is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    In your brain >:D
    Posts
    19,822
    Post Thanks / Like
    saraisthebest! #henrikisevil
     



    Rofl. Aside from the grammar, which by the way wasn't E.A. Poe material, it was very naive. Sasuke wouldnt snap out of it like that. Sorry dude, but that wasn't even good.
     
         

  6. #6
    Special Jonin anbu member Kdowns's Avatar
    Status
    Kdowns is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Posts
    498
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    well can anyone give me tips for what i should of done
    they would be much appraciated
    lol was gonna have sasuke die by kakashi in rough draft but quess that would of been better
     
         

  7. #7
    Senior Member Akiza's Avatar
    Status
    Akiza is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Location
    Home.^^
    Posts
    28,327
    Post Thanks / Like
    Nothing but a specter...I'll
    be around.^^
     



    Quote Originally Posted by Kdowns View Post
    well can anyone give me tips for what i should of done
    they would be much appraciated
    lol was gonna have sasuke die by kakashi in rough draft but quess that would of been better
    Well, it would have been better if u have waited for the next naruto manga to come out.
    You couldn't wait until Friday, could u?
    Well...it was good for a prediction, though...reps for that.
     
         

  8. #8
    RokuNR's Avatar
    Status
    RokuNR is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    In your brain >:D
    Posts
    19,822
    Post Thanks / Like
    saraisthebest! #henrikisevil
     



    Quote Originally Posted by Kdowns View Post
    well can anyone give me tips for what i should of done
    they would be much appraciated
    lol was gonna have sasuke die by kakashi in rough draft but quess that would of been better
    not bad for a first timer, just far too naive. :D
     
         

  9. #9
    Special Jonin anbu member Kdowns's Avatar
    Status
    Kdowns is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Posts
    498
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Quote Originally Posted by kakashithunder View Post
    Well, it would have been better if u have waited for the next naruto manga to come out.
    You couldn't wait until Friday, could u?
    Well...it was good for a prediction, though...reps for that.
    couldnt wait and was kinda bored and wanted to give it a try
     
         

  10. #10
    Special Jonin anbu member Kdowns's Avatar
    Status
    Kdowns is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Posts
    498
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    hehe sakura was gonna come with pakkun
    when she showed up she would of Punch Sasuke in the head Killing Him
    Than Kakashi is gonna be like Oshit
    and tell sakura *thanks* sarcasticly
     
         

  11. #11
    Senior Member Akiza's Avatar
    Status
    Akiza is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Location
    Home.^^
    Posts
    28,327
    Post Thanks / Like
    Nothing but a specter...I'll
    be around.^^
     



    lol dude lol.
     
         

  12. #12
    Special Jonin anbu member Kdowns's Avatar
    Status
    Kdowns is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Posts
    498
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    im just comeing up with random crap right now
     
         

  13. #13
    Member 6th hokage's Avatar
    Status
    6th hokage is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Posts
    387
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    roflmao...it was entertaining in a comedic way...keep them coming :D
     
         

  14. #14
    The Yellow Flash sandshark's Avatar
    Status
    sandshark is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    Wherever I want ;)
    Posts
    1,504
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Nice try :o way to naive though.
     
         

  15. #15
    Special Jonin anbu member Kdowns's Avatar
    Status
    Kdowns is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Posts
    498
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Maybe i should just make comedic Scripts
     
         

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •