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    Chronicles Of The Legendary Storm III

    Authors Note:If you are new to the Chronicles read the other chapters
    The Prologue
    The Journey

    The Chronicles Of The Legendary Storm
    Chapter 3
    The Beast Inside Me


    Narrator: The last chapter of the Chronicles. Darui awakens to find out he is damned by his whole village so he goes on a adventure around the world to learn from the greatest lightning masters in the world


    Darui:Well this is Konoha. Hmm seems peaceful and full of life.

    Narrator:Darui removes his headband and starts his descent into the village. As he walks he see's the children, happy families and it makes him feel warm inside.

    Darui:I might have to use Storm Sensor to find Kakashi in this village.

    Narrator:Darui sends storm chakra all around Konohagakure in search of the biggest source of lightning chakra. He then sense a unbelievable source of lightning chakra a couple of meters away at some kind of training ground.

    Darui:That has got to be Kakashi. Well the easy part is over now I just got to get him to train me.

    Narrator:Minutes later at the Training Grounds.

    Naruto:Kakashi sensei what are we doing for training today.

    Kakashi:Today we are going to learn your second elemental affinity.

    Naruto:Awesome! Wait how are we going to do that?

    Kakashi:We are going to try all of them. The first will be doton. Here is what I want you to do.

    Narrator: Kakashi throws Naruto a rock.

    Kakashi:I want you to infuse your chakra into that pebble and make it levitate.

    Naruto:I will try my hardest.

    Narrator:Naruto continuously struggles to levitate the rock for a few minutes then suddenly the rock levitates.

    Naruto:See Kakashi Sensei. I did it!

    Kakashi:Very Goo.... Watch out!!!

    Narrator:A kunai flies by just barely piercing Kakashi's mouth cover and goes into the ground.

    Naruto:What the heck was that!?

    Narrator:Kakashi and Naruto turn their heads to see Darui standing in a tree.

    Darui:Sorry for the slight intrusion but I came to talk to Kakashi Hatake. Both of you have a large lightning chakra reserve but i dont know which is which could you help me?

    Kakashi:(Thoughts) Naruto, Large Lightning Reserve!?

    Kakashi:I am Kakashi Hatake of Konohagakure.

    Darui:If your Kakashi, then you must be Naruto Uzamaki. Im Darui, Well I have come here for 2 reasons. When I tell you this you may not tell anyone.

    Naruto:Well spit it out!!

    Kakashi:I'm going to listen.

    Darui:Im would like to inform you Killer Bee and The 4th Raikage of Kumogakure have been terminated by the hands of Kabuto.

    Kakashi:.....

    Naruto:Uncle Bee is .....

    Darui: I couldn't save Bee or Boss. I have came for you to train me so that I may get my revenge and protect my village.

    ???: Your Pathetic!!! Asking for the help of others and sobbing about the deaths of others.

    Darui:Get Out Of My Heaaaaddd!!!

    Narrator:Darui grasps his forehead and falls from the tree. He struggles and shakes in pain across the ground.

    Darui:Aaaaahhh!! Who are you what do you want from me!

    The 8-Tailed:Do you even comprehend the power you have fool!! Im The 8-Tailed Bijuu!!

    Narrator:Time suddenly slows down as he hears those words. He sees Kakashi and Naruto rushing to his aid then suddenly he is face to face with the The 8-Tailed Bijuu.

    The 8-Tailed:You are trembling from the pain that is the cost of this great power. Bee had to endure this pain his whole life and he never did more than flinch at it. Bee was crazy to put me in you. Stating you have potential and skill. You are nothing and never will be able to protect Kumogakure. But you will have a chance if you just pull that seal of this gate and I will lend you all the power you need.

    Darui:Your Right.

    Narrator: Naruto and Kakashi rush to the aid of Darui as he seems unconscious.

    Naruto:Wait Kakashi, He said something!

    Kakashi:What did he say.

    Naruto:I think he said "Your Right". Oh man I know what that means. Kakashi back away.

    Narrator:Kakashi backs away as Naruto sits in a meditative stance. Naruto then uses his Nine Tails Chakra Cloak. As Naruto meditates it brings him into Darui's soul where he sees Darui about to pull the seal of the gate for the 8-Tailed Bijuu.

    Naruto: Darui Nooo!

    Darui:I'm sorry but he is right. Im sorry for wasting your time but it must come to this.

    Narrator: Darui then fully pulls off the seal immediately releasing The 8-tails from his soul. Naruto also gets knocked out of his soul. With Naruto back in his body he informs Kakashi.

    Naruto:Run Kakashi, It's Darui's Tailed Beast. He released it!!

    Kakashi:Damnit

    Narrator: Kakashi and Naruto stand and look as a the 8-Tailed Bijuu rises from Darui's body

    The 8-Tailed: I'm free so its time to cause havoc!!

    Narrator:While Darui is still unconscious. The 8-Tailed glared at Naruto and Kakashi.

    The 8-Tailed:Time to say bye bye. Tailed Beast Bomb Go!!!

    Narrator: The 8-Tailed shoots a blast of raw chakra at Naruto and Kakashi.

    Kakashi:Oh My God.
    Naruto:Oh My God

    Narrator
    On The Next Chapter Of
    Chronicles Of The Legendary Storm
    The Great Resolution

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    Re: Chronicles Of The Legendary Storm III

    Pretty cool. I'm going to take a wild guess and say english isn't your first language some grammar and spelling errors here and there. i give it 7/10
     
         

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    Re: Chronicles Of The Legendary Storm III

    cool man but naruto can stop that bijju bomb right
     
         

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    Re: Chronicles Of The Legendary Storm III

    nice.
     
         

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    Re: Chronicles Of The Legendary Storm III

    Quote Originally Posted by naruto kyuubi View Post
    cool man but naruto can stop that bijju bomb right
    We will see in the next chapter
     
         

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    Re: Chronicles Of The Legendary Storm III

    This chapter was amazing to say the least. I will agree with the first poster as English doesn't seem to be your mother tongue and if not then you only need work on spelling mainly but besides that the chapter was an enjoyable read! I was actually surprised that the Hachibi would be the one revealed inside him lol It is cool how Kirabi chose to transfer the Hachibi into Darui as the medium. The following chapter will be even more explosive for sure and I cannot wait to read it ;) Continue your work as you're are doing a great job thus far ^.^
     
         

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