Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
Want a fire version too if I could possibly
Originally Posted by ~Korra~
[Katon : Gurandofaiyāfenikkusu ] - Fire Release : Grand Fire Phoenix
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Just like Korra's Grand Water Phoenix Jutsu but with fire the user will focus all their fire chakra into the sky. When they have enough chakra in the sky they start to create a giant phoenix that is the half the size of Gamabunta made of fire. When the phoenix is form it will explode into a large barrage of mini phoenixes that are the size of Abumanre bugs (and as such completely visible) and will come down onto the opponent with such great force that even if they were underground up to 3 meters underground the phoenixes would still break through and do minor damage like breaking a little into the skin but not do faultily damage. Although the small phoenixes don't actually move that fast, they pact great momentum.
Note: Cannot use any fire jutsus for the next turn
Note: It takes 2 jutsu moves to form.
Note: Has to be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Every mini phoenix isnt S rank.
Note: If the user does not find a way to defend them self or avoid the attack the jutsu will hurt the user.
♠ Declined ♠
Reminds me of Selendrile's fire birds and also Kage Phoenix's technique. Too similar.
Link to Reaper Scythe Arts Approval http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...8&postcount=71
(Sishen Liandao Yishu: Shinigami wa u~iru) Reaper Scythe Arts: The Grim Reaper's Will
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Though it was develop form the elemental infusion, Korra was able to intensify the jutsu to create scythes made out of pure chakra non-elemental and elemental chakra. These chakra scythes are able to cut sharper then normal scythes. When using chakra the chakra scythes each have different effects.
Katon: The scythe is made up of a dark reddish chakra and when in contact with an opponent can produce a burning effect upon contact.
Suiton: The scythe is made up of a dark blue chakra, making the scythe more flexible and can increase the length up to 3 feet.
Raiton: The chakra made up of yellow chakra increasing the scythes penetration and to have a numbing effect upon impact.
Doton: The scythe made up of brown chakra can have its weight either increased (3 times as much) or decreased (3 times as much) to either increase impact or speed, depending on the situation (only one weight change per use, meaning either use this infusion for more weight or less with each use)
Futon: The blade is made up of green chakra increasing its cutting power.
Normal Chakra: The scythe is made up of light blue chakra and can be dense enough to stop ninja tools and ninjutsu (Up to B rank)
Note: Usable 3 time a match
Note: Must know Reaper Scythe Arts and must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Can only have one infusion active. With earth infusion, each changing of weight counts as a use.
Note: Each infusion can stop/cut in half the element its stronger then(depends on the opposing jutsu size) and can be broken by their weakness chakra by an A rank or higher.
♠ Declined ♠
Alright, let's break this down, mate, as I am very hesitant about you using each of the scythes like that.
First off, the scythe itself. How large is it, and how does one generally grasp it? It should also last a certain amount of time, as you are utilizing each of the elements.
Katon: The scythe is made up of a dark reddish chakra and when in contact with an opponent can produce a burning effect upon contact. How does one expect to wield scythes of fire? They are intangible, and can easily be blown out by Wind jutsus.
Suiton: The scythe is made up of a dark blue chakra, making the scythe more flexible and can increase the length up to 3 feet. Alright, I can relate this to D-Rank Water canon jutsu, but the way it works is a bit iffy. You can increase the length up to three feet? Does this make this mid range? And also, how might the attack of this differ from regular scythes? It can't be just water.
Raiton: The chakra made up of yellow chakra increasing the scythes penetration and to have a numbing effect upon impact. The scythe's penetration? You need to be more specific here. And alright, I understand the numbing effect, however, you need to state a limit on that, and where exactly it numbs the opponent. Entire body? Certain limbs where the scythe makes contact?
Doton: The scythe made up of brown chakra can have its weight either increased (3 times as much) or decreased (3 times as much) to either increase impact or speed, depending on the situation (only one weight change per use, meaning either use this infusion for more weight or less with each use). This makes sense, but you need a limit on how many times you can increase or decrease its weight.
Futon: The blade is made up of green chakra increasing its cutting power. Hm...well, Wind would at least be the most emphasized upon, wouldn't it? There's much more you can do with Wind than just increase its cutting power, but alright.
Normal Chakra: The scythe is made up of light blue chakra and can be dense enough to stop ninja tools and ninjutsu (Up to B rank) I grasp the concept of this, but Ninjutsu is a generic concept and I don't know how it can generally stop all Ninjutsu up to B-Rank. How would you stop killing intent or haze clones? But alright...
Snake Signing Thread http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=141664
(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Arbok) -Summoning Technique-Arbok
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Arbok is a purple cobra that is slightly smaller than the snakes Orochimaru summons in the manga/anime. Arbok has the ability to use Genjutsu up to B rank. Arbok is most used to carry dead bodies for Korra and other people that can summon him. Arbok can carry upto 10 dead or unconscious bodies in his stomach. If he tries carry any more the 1st body that was swallow will be lost due to it being get kick out and move to Arbok stomach.(Sorry about the graphicness ).
Note: Must have snakes
Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Can be summon twice a battle and can be on the field for 5 turns.
How he looks like:
♠ Declined ♠
Alright, summons that can use Genjutsus are extremely sly. First off, ensure that this is the ONLY ability your summon can have. Secondly, can only be on the field for four turns.
Also, when your summon uses Genjutsus, you need to state the range and how many times it can use Genjutsu in a match.