Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
(Kuchiyose Gava) - Summoning Wind Crow Gava
Description: After making few handseals the user summons a giant and heavy crow named GAVA, who uses powerful wind attacks. he looks like a big Raven with white eyes, which is extremely powerful and battle type,he can use powerful attacks with his beak and his wings, it has sharp edge beak which is able to pass through the solid rock defenses also has very strong claws.user can ride on his back to use combos.he has got very fast speed and also has very loud noise which can be used to disturb/distract the opponent, he is able to fly high in the sky where opponent's jutsu's are unreachable but the same goes for him too, means his very own techniques wont be effected (wont cause damage to the opponent) from that range.
- Can be summon trice a battle.
- Can only use Wind jutsu and up to S rank.
✘ Declined ✘ Where should i even begin =_= , Ok you can start by removing every "powerful" and "very powerful" stuff out of the description, can he use the Wind techniques that require handseals as well or not, determine his size exactly, words like "Huge" or "Giant" is too broad, If he's capable of breaking through solid rock "earth" defenses or attacks it needs to be limited, up to what rank can he break through, and it would mean that it's an ability that will count as a move and also be restricted to a limited usage, make him summoned only once per battle, and put a turn limit that he stays on the field in, remove that flying high so the opponent's attacks wouldn't reach him completely, remove the "very fast" speed and "very loud" noise, it would require Sound release, and even if you had it i won't allow it after that beak ability.
(Kuchiyose karasu Xee) - Summoning Illusion Crow Xee
Description:After making needed handseals, user summons a crow named XEE.He has crystal white eyes and full black body. As compare to boss Gava, he's a little small in size.He has double sized wings as compare to his body, that makes him move quickly and dodge many speedy and sudden attacks as well as gives him incredible speed.His specialty is using genjutsu, due to his speciality he's feared in crows as illusion master and Illusion sage. As having mastery over genjutsus and due to his fierce training in illusion arts, he finally possessed the same ability as Itachi, and can cast genjutsu by moving his body parts. (wings and beak etc)
• Can only be summon once per battle.
• User can't ride on him.
• User can't use genjutsu techniques as long as summoning is in the battlefield/fighting (exception of summoning's genjutsu techniques).
• Can only cast genjutsu,can cast upto S rank.
• Can cast genjutsu from long range.
✘ Declined ✘ I was having second thoughts whether or not to DNR it, after reading that whole "having the same ability of Itachi" thing, but i guess everyone deserves a chance, ok that ability you were talking about is actually related to his Sharingan, so take that out, take out the speed part and dodging techniques, restrict him to be able to use up to B-rank genjutsu and that's it, i won't allow him more than that, remove being able to cast genjutsu from long range, the range is determined with the genjutsu technique utilized and no way am i going to allow a long range genjutsu, that's an ability of NB genjutsu, make him only capable of using normal genjutsu techniques and nothing else, make him last 3 turns max on the field, i'll only give you one chance to make it approvable, after that it's a DNR, the links to the Itachi bio and the Summoning thread don't work, but i was easy going this time only after that i won't bother checking your techniques if you don't submit them properly.
UchIha ItachI bio link = http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=200497
Crow Summoning Thread = http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=229461
Note - Edited the speedy part.