Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
(Genjutsu/Ninjutsu: Itachi Ken ) Illusion/Ninja Arts: Skunk Stung
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs 1 handseal, casting a genjutsu on the area around (Mid-range). The genjutsu has a high impact but is very short-lived. It will induce a death/damage-like experience, which will trigger an immediate response of "vanishment" or "release", it's effects added by the shock factor and the usage of physical chakra as a guidance. While on normal opponents it will have no real or significant effect, when used on clones or summoned animals, it will make them experience an impact intense enough to reflexively reverse them or vanish them. Even if the targeted opponents are linked together by a chakra-exchanging techniques, the short-peak of this technique will still follow through. The one handseal can be kept for more than one usage. This is to double the effect, as multi-layered genjutsu or for a more focused/concentrated approach (reaching up to Long-Range). Any clone technique or summoning animals lower than A rank will be efficiently affected by the wide-spread usage of the technique. Summons A rank and above will require an individualized concentrated casting (thus spending 1 jutsu per animal). Summons ranked Boss (allowing for a current king and/or a queen, if fit) will require both an individualized and a double-layered usage (regardless of the rank).
*Requires 1 turn between usages*
±± Declined ±± Idea is ok but range...no. Mid range max. Also, Genjutsu can't be casted on an area. It needs specific targets. I don't get also why you have the ninja art part added. It seems to be a simple genjutsu all together. However, its applications on Shadow Clones... We saw when Itachi put Kakashi's shadow clone in a genjutsu that they are left unaffected by some genjutsu so you might need to explain that part a bit better. But the core idea seems ok.
(Burakku Grimmu: Nekura Dowa no Karasu Omoi) Black Grimm: Twisted Tales of the Crow's Mind
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Requires the user to perform the multiplication of the triple 6 number of handseals, 216 total, spending a normal Kage 30 seconds. Upon conclusion a powerful genjutsu is cast in everyone within range, a beautifully complex and detailed illusion, more intricate than any other genjutsu. Inside the Black Grimm's realm, the user is able to recreate any fairy tale event, perverting and corrupting it's characters to become more gruesome and dark ever. The illusion last but a mere moment, within a turn in reality, but inside the realm, time is shifted eternally, regardless of turn or event. The trapped are left to fight inside their own minds, until they're able to defeat the user, which portrays him/herself as a character in the tale, yet controls the whole realm at will. While resistant to any physical release, for the genjutsu last but a moment in reality, the trapped ones need to mentally surpass the torture, first by discovering whose form does the user take in each event, by interacting with the illusion at will (including manipulating the terrain through jutsus). While everything is mutable at the user's will, the user can only change his/her appearance once , and must utilize the environment to further help hide or move (the user can only move as normal, can't fly or run faster than his/her own limitations). In addition to that, every time there is a reflective surface, the user's true appearance will alway be revealed. After the opponent finds the user, he/she only needs to touch or hit them with a jutsu once to break the genjutsu for everyone trapped. If the opponent dies in the genjutsu, he/she is left unconscious for the remainder of the battle, until the user chooses.
After performing this technique, the user is unable to perform any genjutsu for the remainder of the battle, and looses 30 health. The user is left sore, preventing the usage of complex taijutsu (A and above).
An S rank version of this jutsu, requiring only 40 chakra, can be performed. In such case, the genjutsu can only affect 1 target, leaving the user vulnerable to exterior attacks, or permitting the release of the trapped opponent by a third party. The consequences above mentioned only last 4 turns, and no health is lost. Either version can only be used once per battle.
MS users are able to preform Tsukuyomi in order to counter the genjutsu, neutralizing each other, if they have activated the MS before the genjutsu is cast
Inside the Black Grimm, no genjutsu can be used, apart from the Tsukuyomi
The most basic way to see this jutsu is as a big game of hide-and-seek. The user has one chance to change his/her appearance, and then she needs to change the environment, recreating a story or multiple different stories, in order to hid her true identity. On the other hand, the opponent will have his/her appearance all the same through the technique, including clothes and weapons, and will only need to deduce and touch the user once, using his body or a jutsu, and that will immediately break the genjutsu.
±± Declined ±± Idea is ok. Interesting, original. But this needs to be put in more approvable terms. This means, no Long range, no F-Rank. Also, chakra cost needs to be fitting of the template. This can and will be usable just the same as an S-Rank. However, you need to also make a more reasonable release method. Its too..."unspecific" as to how the battle, in our RP would work after the genjutsu is triggered also. Do you create a new series of events? like, start fighting inside the genjutsu in turns? does the enemy keep his ability to use techniques inside the illusion? and on the outside? wb you? It needs more...definition.
Originally Posted by Lili-Chwan
( Koukurage Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Toppi Shitei ) Box Jellyfish Summoning Jutsu: Coco Macaque
Range: Short (summoning the Larvae) / Long (On transmission)
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Allows the user to summon and vanish a pair of Coco Macaque. These Larvae are all linked together by chakra, so much that by charging chakra through one will be felt by the others. The user of this technique will summon a larvae on him/herself, and the other on any Box short range from the user, allowing the user to charge chakra through the Coco Macaque that will be felt by the Box, and the other way around as long as the larvae are in the user's and targeted Box's possession. Through a common understanding, the different intensities of the chakra information or frequency of information allows messages to be sent through any distance.
*It transfers just a signal, a small fluctuation. It is neither able to break someone from a genjutsu or block an attack like Minato's technique. It's like morse code. It's purpose is the same as morse code, being a form of primitive communication.*
*Coco Macaque twins can stay indefinitely in the battle, but there are only 4 pairs of twins in Archipelago (per contract holder)*
*Can be used by other Boxes*
*These larvae can't use jutsus*
♠ Whaaattt theeee. O___O Leaving these for Scorps or Xylon. ♠
±± Approved ±±