Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
Shinigami Reaper (japanese/english name is same for this sword)
Originally Posted by Enzup
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu)
Description: The sword was made by ancient priests of hell and heaven at a sacred place by using hairs, bones, skin, blood and senses of a living shinigami himself which gave the sword life and transforming ability. The sword was named after the shinigami. And it is believed that the shinigami is living in the form of sword now.
The size of the sword is very big. The hilt itself is of 2m height, and the blade is of 3m height making a total length of 5m, and its cross guard is of 1m length, while the blade is of half meter. It is a double-edged sword. And have a little curvature in the edge part and pointed on front. The sword is quite thick but the whole blade is covered with the hairs of shinigami which are very sharp, sharper than normal katana. All of its senses are almost covered with hairs on blade. It also have a very long chain tied to pommel part. The blade is bloody red in colour which is supposed to be the blood of millions of people killed by it and of shinigami himself. It also has 2 black strips originating from the rain guard to some extent on blade, and it was supposed to be the curse of people died from it. Its original weight is 1 ton but only for Enzup its 1 kg.
-This sword is indestructible and have Kage Ranked chakra (1400 chakra points)
-It has life of its own just like samehada and thus it can react on its own when required.
-When Chakra is passed to the sword, then the chain remains the same but the sword transforms to |Fire- Phoenix|, |Water-Shark|, |Earth- Dragon|, |Lightning- Snakes|, |Wind- Porcupine|
-Passing any chakra to the sword, counts as a move, which is equivalent to S-rank Offense/Defense/Supplementary.
-Can channel chakra to the sword only once per turn. Can't transform to same animal 2 times in a row.
-The sword can only transform in the animals listed above, and only when user passes chakra to it, not on its own.
-If user gets hit by a jutsu while holding this sword, then he will receive an addition of +20 damage points.
-The sword only listens to Enzup.
Completely removed the paralysis part. Added chakra in numbers. Removed the ability to cut and slice through solid. Added small parts in Bold.
Anything else of which I should take care sir ^_^
±± Declined ±± Define the animals, how long they last, what can they do, etc etc. It transforms into a phoenix with fire....ok...and? Also the part about one ton and what not, remove it. Takte the chakra of it completely out. Even if it has chakra and is a living sending thing, no need to compare it to ninja, otherwise it becomes also vulnerable to Genjutsu and other effects. Add a note stating clearly that this sword can't sense chakra.
(Doton: Gōremu Tsubasa) – Earth Release: Golem's Wings
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Just while using the technique "Stone Golem or Great Stone Golem", user adds more of his earth chakra and concentrates it on golem's back, and thus when golem is expelled from the user's mouth, it already has two giant wings of earth emerging out of his back, giving it ability to fly.
Note: -Can only be used in conjuction with "Stone Golem or Great Stone Golem" techniques.
-Can also be used after expelling golem.
-Golem can carry atmost 2 people at a time on his back.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.
±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit.
(Katon/Raiton: Jisatsu Maniakku) - Fire/Lightning Style: Suicidal Maniac
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-Death of user-)
Description: This forbidden technique requires sacrifice and a lot of lightning and fire chakra. So user stands still and then starts concentrating his lightning and fire chakra in his stomach in a small ball. He keeps on concentrating the chakra for some time, and once tremendous amount of chakra is concentrated in the stomach, user makes Tiger handseal and says "baku" and as the moment he says "baku", the ball inside the user's stomach expands instantly turning into a giant sphere and thus user explodes. The sphere envelopes everyone and everything within 10m radius (mid-range). The impact of the explosion is that great that everything is turned into ash within range.
Note: -For concentrating chakra in stomach, user must stand still for 3 seconds. In this period of time, he can't move, or do anything.
-Can only be used if user hasn't used any lightning or fire move in his previous turn.
-Can only be used if user hasn't used any S-Rank or above technique in previous turn.
-If user explodes and opponent gets caught in it, then the match would result in draw.
-Can only be used by Enzup.
±± Declined ±± Op. Also, this makes it so that it provides easy draws or wins even if you die.