Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
Resubmitting: Lol, stupid of me i messed up the description..and edited/deleted a few parts.
Originally Posted by Lucifer
(Doton: Rōzugāden) - Earth Release: Rose Garden
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-30 to the user)
Description: The user makes a quick sequence of three handseals, Hare → Tiger → Snake, and focuses a large mass of doton chakra throughout the whole battlefield. As the user forms the last handseal being the snake handseal he slams both of his hands on the ground thus releasing the concentrated doton chakra in a burst, the enemies can literally see the shockwave of the doton chakra through the ground spreading into every direction. By doing this the user will create/cause gigantic roses and spike branches made from silicate minerals found in the earth crust, silicate is basic earth mineral that can be found in the earth crust, the gigantic roses and spike branges are made out of this mineral, that can only found in the earth crust thus gaining a redish-greenish color, making them look like actual roses thought they are just silicate minerals combined by rock hard and dense stones given actual form by chakra. These gigantic roses are sharper than blades and much denser having dozens gigantic spikes stiking out of the core not the mention the green colored branches. These gigantic roses reach out up to 20-30 meters into the air, in a mayhem of branches and leaves each capable of piercing through metal, creating a forest of deadly roses which can penetrate the targets literally from all direction, the garden reaches out to all directions, being highly infused with the users Doton chakra, granting the user the ability to use earth techniques from the garden with increased speed and reduced difficulty, from the large amount of silicate minerals the ground will also be covered by this mineral.
♦ Note: This technique can only be used by Lucifer.
♦ Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
♦ Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart.
♦ Note: The user can't use earth techniques for two turns after this jutsu is used.
♦ Note: The user will take enormous damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-30)
♦ Note: The user cannot participate in close combat due to the severe damage taken by this jutsu. (doing so will result in killing the user)
~ Now, I quite like the idea for this one. However, the roses are too huge. Second, not only are you unable to move close combat, but I think just moving around at all unless you do so very slowly and carefully will kill you. ~
Resubmitting: Okay, so i've made a few changes and removed the part where it says that it can split into a twin sword, and edited or deleted most of the things that you said that made the spear over powered (which it did), so i hope that it's approvable now..
Originally Posted by Lucifer
(Gehena Rushifā) - Lucifer Gehenna
Chakra cost: 40 (+5 for the kenjutsu boost.)
Damage Points: 80
Description: Lucifer, this name was given to the holy double headed spear that has been said to have pierced Rikudou Sennin himself in his left side of his rib cage gaining the name Gehena Rushifā, while this spear was inside of Rikudou it absorbed some of his blood into the blade, that's why it gained the unholy name. This spear was found later in the holy mountains of Iwagakure sealed away in an sacred shrine, it was later found by a shinobi from Iwagakure, but the spear was in terrible condition so the man, re-forged the two-headed spear by coating it with a special materials. Very rare minirals found only in the mountains of Iwagakure deep within, the blade gained a highly silverly color almost blinding, and the spear itself gained a black with sacred golden colored markings (kanji) on it and a red ribbon tied on the top, the founder also remade the sheat with the same rare material thought he upgraded it, the spear does not have a sheat so the blades are always exposed, also the spear is one and a half meter long. The spear itself is indestructible it cannot be destroyed, making it quite effective in blocking and deflecting incoming attacks from basic weapons, the user can also break the spear in half, making it two smaller swords. Anything above a B-Ranked attack would hit Gehenna out of the users hands, but the weapon itself cannot block attacks. Lucifer Gehenna is very heavy to the point that dropping it flat on the ground would leave a huge indentation on the ground, allowing only its choses master to wield Lucifer Gehenna.
◄ The abilites of this weapon are, that it is able to channel earth chakra through both blades, and whatever the blades cut or touch turn to dust or stone, the user can decide.
◄ The user is able to manipulate the form of the blade, for example into a; Hook, Scythe, Axe etc. Thought not the hilt because it was originally a spear. (the user will need to add +10 more chakra to change the shape of the blade)
◄ The user can choose any B-Ranked earth technique and boost it with two ranks.
♦ Note: Lucifer Gehenna can only be used/given by Lucifer.
♦ Note: The user can use Lucifer Gehenna only once per turn.
♦ Note: Every move that Gehenna uses counts as one of the users 3 moves.
♦ Note: The user must have mastered the earth element inorder to use this weapon.
~ Remove all the history; cut it down to a sentence or two. Second, the part I boldedis incredibly OPed; and lastly, if your weapon can transform, its essentially multiple weapons in one CW that Scorpseh just posted will not be approved. ~