Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
New summon. I looked over everything, but do contact if there is a confusion or issue of sort, as i barely submit customs it'll take me too long resubmit which i find rather inconvenient. It will be much appreciated ^^
Summoning: Eidolons (Shoukanjuu)
Scroll Owner: Xylon
Description: Eidolons are spiritual beings bought summoned by the user. These apparitions are summoned from the city of Valhalla.
Valhalla (known “as the invisible world”). Myth speaks of Valhalla as the city lost in Time/space. In reality Valhalla resides in between outer world planes and real world. It is a mechanical graveyard, an empty city. The center of the city is huge building, the shrine. The shrine sustains Goddess Etro, the central figure of Eidolons. Her existence keeps the eidolons from leaving to the outer world plains and allowing them to be summoned back to the real world when called.
When certain individuals succeed in gaining etro’s trust she gifts them with a brand which allows them manipulate the Eidolons. Spiritual beings are useless in physical combat, when calling forth eidolons the user must summon their mediums to possess. These are the bodies made from the mechanical parts spread across valhalla. For every eidolon the user is able to summon the seal changes extending another branch, each branch has transcribed into the body and eidolon itself. Allowing the user to summon them at will since unlike traditional summons the contract is off souls rather then blood. As such besides the fact that reaching valhalla(being in the center of realms) is impossible without time/space ninjutsu, signing a contract is also unnecessary. Etro's brand, manipulates spirits and the user merely summons bodies.
They usually appear in the shape of armored knights (5x-10x larger than normal humans) often affiliated with a particular element. Not having bodies made of flesh and bones they are resistant to a variety of damage. Though their elemental natures force them to take heavy toll if hit by the opposite element. If the medium breaks apart, the eidolon leaves. Most eidolons, if not all possess an ability to transform shape, the Gestalt. Thus allowing the user to wield or ride them.
Other users who have signed the contract: N/A
Summoning Boss: N/A
Other summons tied to the contract: N/A
Example Basic Summon:
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: The basic summoning spirits. Versatile and efficient, they take over the weapons of sorts. Possessing a shield automatically protecting the user from attacks ( up to ?? rank) or sword attacking at users will from any direction or range. They are able to possess users custom weapons.
Note: Example Restrictions.
~I discussed this with Izuna months earlier, as promised i didn't got involved with deities. Etro is irrelevant and will have nothing to do with these summons(they are nothing but walking, talking weapons and armors) it was only to shape their history.
~I made sure its plausible, summons are of all sorts. Animals, chimeras and statues. I decided i'd make one with spirits and existence of these has been proved countless times in narutoverse. The eidolon world being in outer planes and all nothing irrelevant details to add a bit to their concept.
~Lastly, i made these likely because i wanted advantages. Most conventional methods and defenses against summons shouldn't work giving me an upper hand. Of course these comes with a separate set of weaknesses i wont mention in the description. These are notable, but if it seems overpowered i can explain how certain stuff which can prove to be a huge weakness.
-Context taken from Final Fantasy series of square enix-
±± Declined ±± Sorry but even if inconvinient, you should know fairly well that no extinct, mythical or non existant animal or being can be submitted as a custom summoning contract. I has been said multiple times before. The only thing that is accepted are submissions from old contracts like the Griffon and Dragon contracts that were approved long before this regulation was set into place. Allowing you to summon "spirits" would mean i'd have to allow all other members to submit any mythical or ethereal being they want. For custom summoning contracts we only allow the submission of existing, real, non extinct animals. Don't Resubmit.
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Afterburner is a step-by-step propulsion technique, allowing the user to travel at MACH1 speed. After successfully activating Wing Blades, the user positions them in a fan like manner behind his back. The swords spin pulling in air and pushing it from behind creating propulsion pushing and pulling the user ahead. Once maximum speed is achieved, the windmill principle creates a high pressured twister behind. Using Fire Release the user then ignites the air to create added thrust dramatically increasing the speed. Once reached MACH1, the users moving body creates a massive shockwave following its route capable of blowing away huge summons and making deep trenches in the ground.
Note: Usable twice, ends wing blade.
Note: The user creates an added chakra shield to dampen the damage, being hit by anything enroute can cause serious skeletal damage or even instant death. Regardless of the shield protecting the user, the technique causes 20 damage to the user.
Alternate: The user can charge the technique without movement and release it in a sudden burst to cover shorter range, more faster more efficiently.
~ http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Turbofan < reference used, the technique is rather simple. And I had the proper means with my custom weapon. To confirm my thoughts I asked SY opinion earlier.
~ Wing Blade, last submission, makes more sense after you read that. *http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...ostcount=3294*
OMG look at the date :p
±± Declined ±± Sorry but this is ridiculously oped for our current level of restrictions. Also, no more real life speed references. You need to set a comparison to a cannon thing in the Manga to determine your level of speed. Anything too much like EIG or that collides with them is DNR. Anything that makes you move at the same, nearly the same or above the speed of Minato, Lightning Armor, etc are all DNR. We don't even allow Swift Customs anymore.
Ninja Art: Magnificent Expansion (Ninpo: Sedei Kakuchou)
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/a
Description: The technique expands the size of the users equipment, the expansion is variable to the amount of chakra used. The expanded weapon could be giant for that matter and attack strength and efficiency in usage proportionally increase and decrease respectively.
±± Declined ±± Too general. "Range: Variable"? Also, do you require being in touch with the weapon? How exactly does the weapon expand? Is this basically a similar technique to the Transformation technique? What about CWs? Would this be used on them? Limits in size? Giant in Narutoverse can be anything from the Giant Axe/Hammer we saw used by Bee's friend to the size of Gamabunta. This has too many "lose ends". Define it better.
~There might be existing techniques for this i haven't looked over. Regardless, those probably wont work the way i'd want to use this technique so i still chose to submit this, hope it isn't a problem.
EDIT: Removed the spoilers... >-> Should allow these though, consumes too much page space. Added more techniques.