Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
Originally Posted by The Pervy Sage
(Bukku of Zetsubou: Bundan 1 – Fuu no Matsuro) Book of despair: Chapter 1 – Seal of Fate
Rank: S rank
Chakra: gen = 30, seal = 30, fire = 50
Description: This is the first sealing spell of the Book of despair, written by the dark lord himself. The book of despair is one of 4 books containing ninjutsu “spells” said to be written by the dark lord himself. The book was found many years ago after being lost for thousands of years and is the only one of its kind. The user will always carry this book. The blank pages of the book have the seals on the for fuuin jutsu, to save the user having to carry scrolls. If they are not carrying it, they will have it sealed within a special seal on their hand or glove if they are wearing one. If the book needs to be summoning it will be a part of this jutsu and will cost 10 chakra. Once the book has been summoned the user will break the seal (B rank) on the book opening it to its first spell, the Seal of Fate. There are 3 stages of this seal.
Stage 1: Upon breaking the seal to release this jutsu, the user will chant the ancient words written on the page.
“Let the darkness of hell burn yours soul for eternity”
Upon doing so, the words of this “spell” will cast genjutsu upon anyone within range of this jutsu who can hear it. The illusion spreads around the field of the night, darkness and a red moon. As it does, dark flames erupt from the ground in a square formation mid-range around the user. This gives off the presences of evil that would send chills down a man’s spine. As the illusion is created, the targets will see hands, like those of zombies, come out of the ground grabbing their legs holding them in place. As this genjutsu is a distraction for the second layer of the jutsu.
Note: This genjutsu is A ranked.
Note: Counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn
Stage 2: As the dark flames of the illusion spread around the field, kanji formula spread across the floor beneath the flames making a circle of kanji formula all around the user, creating one giant seal on the floor. This can’t be seen as it’s hidden within the genjutsu, which is hard for people to tell that they are in. If the user is in the air the kanji formula will be written in the air, making a sealing circle that stops a person from going underground. If the ground is destroyed the seal remains until broken.
Note: This seal is A ranked and spreads around the field at the same speed as the genjutsu. The circle will continue to form if the genjutsu is broken.
Note: The kanji formula is not bound to the ground so if the ground is destroyed, the formula will remain.
Note: This counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn. So when used with the genjutsu in stage one, that's 2 of the users 3 jutsu per turn used already.
Stage 3: The genjutsu will have been cast distracting the opponent as the seal is set up ready to release the seal of fate. All the kanji formula around the field will light up as a pentagram forms under the targets within the circle so that they are standing on one of the lines. The user will activate the seal by closing the book saying:
“Release, Seal of Fate”
As they do, the seal will release spiralling black flames from all the seals in the pentagram. The users won’t be standing on any of the lines, but all his targets will be. These flames will shoot up long range into the air burning all in their path, leaving nothing but the seal of the dark lord burnt into the ground. The circle of flames is as shown in the image below with the user stood in the middle.
Note: This is the reverse of the sealing jutsu jiraiya used to seal amaterasu. It releases fire that is black, long range into the air, and is S ranked. The flames last for 10 seconds.
Note: This counts as one of the 3 jutsu per turn, and can't be used if the kanji formula isn't complete.
Note: The jutsu can be ended at any time. Each stage takes up one of the user’s jutsu per turn, so if the user ends the jutsu before stage 3, they can still use one more jutsu ect.
Note: The genjutsu is A rank. The seal formed on the floor is A rank. The fire released is S ranked.
Note: The black flames are just normal fire, but the blackness of them is to represent evil in the jutsu.
Note: Useable once per battle.
Note: If the 3rd stage is released, the flames will all errupt around the user, not under him, so the user will take little damage compared to anyone else caught in the flames as the fire is infused with their chakra.
Note: The genjutsu spreads around like the first Hokage’s infinity darkness jutsu, and about the same speed, along with the circle of kanji formula.
Note: The 3rd stage can be released at any point, but isn’t as effective as it would be when the full pentagram forms as less area is covered with the jutsu.
Note: The seal itself isn’t S ranked, the fire released from it is S ranked, the seal holding the fire is A ranked. Like how jiraiya’s sealing method could hold amaterasu.
Note: No fuuin in the next turn.
First of all, changed the rank. I made it S rank because A ranked genjutsu + A ranked Fuuin is S rank in total
I've added notes after each stage to make it clearer
Added/editted the other bolded parts
I also took out a couple of restrictions because before it was forbidden ranked, meaning heavier restrictions but i think it's now balanced, if not, i'll change it some more.
~ No. There has to be a way to stop the kanji, by breaking the ground, also remove the can do in air part. ~
(Bukku of Zetsubou: Bundan 2 – Zetsubō no hon) Book of despair: Chapter 2 – Adventure seal
Rank: Forbidden (S ranked gen + A rank water + A rank fuuin)
Description: This is the second sealing spell of the Book of despair, written by the dark lord himself. The book of despair is one of 4 books containing ninjutsu “spells” said to be written by the dark lord himself. The book was found many years ago after being lost for thousands of years and is the only one of its kind. The user will always carry this book. The blank pages of the book have the seals on the for fuuin jutsu, to save the user having to carry scrolls. If they are not carrying it, they will have it sealed within a special seal on their hand or glove if they are wearing one. If the book needs to be summoning it will be a part of this jutsu and will cost 10 chakra. Once the book has been summoned the user will break the seal (B rank) on the book opening it to its second spell, the Adventure seal. The user will open their book, revealing a seal that will release a special genjutsu combined with an attack.
Genjutsu: The genjutsu will be released as black hands shoot out of the book grabbing the target/targets, pulling them into the book. Unless they break the gen, no matter what they do, it will be in their head and they can’t break free of the hands. These hands pull them into the book as though it’s sealing them. The next thing the target/targets know, they are landing in a wasteland like that of a nightmare with a labyrinth in front of them as the users voice echo’s around them:
“You have been sealed within my book and I shall tell your story. I am the author of the book so I shall decide your fate. There is only one way out, and that is through the labyrinth. You are unable to use any jutsu as that is not what is within the story. If you make it through the labyrinth alive, you will break the seal freeing yourself. Should you die in the labyrinth… well, rest in peace. If you break the rules of the book, then you shall be… erased from the book. That is the law of story writing, never go against the plot.”
This illusion will seem so realistic, enough to convince almost any ninja it’s a fuuin and that they have been sealed. If the targets are bound in this illusion, usually they will try to fight through the labyrinth to get out and free themselves, but they will run into illusions of the users clones in the labyrinth and will be stuck in a free form spar with them until they can hit them.
Reality: While the targets see the illusion of themselves being pulling into the book with great speed, in reality, water is forming under that rising quickly around the targets body. A 1 inch layer of water will form around the target/targets body in 5 seconds. As it forms a kanji formula will rise up with the water, sealing the target, much like gaara's sand sealing technique that was seen to be used of edo tensei. This seals the target for good ending the match.
Note: The genjutsu is like itachi's genjutsu's where it's all happening in their head, so their bodies don't move, just in their minds.
Note: Overall the jutsu equates to a Forbidden ranked. But, the genjutsu is S ranked, the water forming is A ranked (so people don't argue when it comes to breaking it off, i gave it a rank) and the fuuin seal is A ranked.
Note: Useable once
Note: No other jutsu can be used while this is being used
Note: Takes up the users 3 jutsu per turn.
Note: No fuuin for 2 turns afterwards
Note: No genjutsu in the next 2 turns.
~ First, "stuck in a free form spar", you cannot predict what the opponent does on seeing your clones; for all you know, he might decide to throw jutsu at them. Second, there has to be some time lapse between the activation of the genjutsu and the water. Third, the sealing cannot end the match; there must be some way to fight back or some other thing that depowers it ~
±± Leaving both for Emperor ±±