Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
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Originally Posted by Selendrile
(Hyō Unarigoe)- Pantera’s Snarl
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Hyō Unarigoe is an advanced, form fitting, white, segmented body armor that fits comfortably and perfectly around the entire lower portion of the wielder’s body. Hyō Unarigoe is composed of a lightweight, yet incredibly durable chakra metal. Tight, leather, chakra mesh is located under the basic armor and around the joints and points on the body requiring a large amount of movement and flexibility (such as the ankles, knees, etc). The knees have bladed projections on the front of them for cutting/slicing. The feet and ankle portion of the body armor are solid black, and contain several metal claws protruding from the toes. These provide the wielder increased traction on slick or difficult terrain (such as ice, etc). The claws can hook into surfaces to stop on whim, or aid the wielder in immediate directional changes. The bottoms of the feet are padded with a noise muffling material, allowing for near-silent running. However, the real ability that Hyō Unarigoe possesses is much more deadly. The strength of Hyō Unarigoe increases as it becomes dirtier, regardless of whether it is from mud, water, or anything containing chakra. Whenever a technique physically touches or makes contact with any part of Hyō Unarigoe, it saps the technique’s chakra, either completely dispelling or reducing the rank of the technique. This absorption does not apply to genjutsu, as genjutsu is not a physical manifestation of chakra. This also leaves the armor somewhat stained with black blotches. The chakra metal of Hyō Unarigoe will then stay charged with the chakra absorbed from techniques. When needed, the wielder will transfer the stored chakra from the armor to himself to be used to increase the power of his next technique.
Note: Can only be used by Selendrile unless given permission
Note: Can only absorb up to B-rank worth of chakra from a single technique per absorption
Note: Hyō Unarigoe is indestructible, but doesn't mean it can destroy everything
±± Declined ±± Increase the power? how much? Also, how many times can it absorb? It needs to count as a move. If its a full body indesctrutible armor it makes you immune to kunais, blast damage and basically most lower ranked ninjutsu, taijutsu and kenjutsu. You know fairly well thats a no no. I asked you to define the armor and its techniques better, not to leave them generic and undefined while adding a factor to it that will make it unapprovable and prone to abuse.
(Suiton: Kaizoku no Uragiri no Ikari)- Water Release: Rage of the Sea King’s Betrayal
Originally Posted by Selendrile
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will perform three hand seals, and then channel their water chakra to their feet. By stomping on the ground, the user will perform nature transformation on their chakra, changing it into water. The stomp on the ground raises a 360 degree ring around the user from underground, which extends up into air just above the user’s height. The ring of water is thin but does not compromise its strength, which allows the user to easily through it. This can be used to defend against attacks. Once the ring is formed around the user, they have the option of performing another hand seal, which unwraps the ring starting from the back, wrapping it around to the front, forming a straight water wall. The wall will then release hundreds of marble sized bullets of water as it is unwrapping, covering the entire battlefield in front of the user. These bullets can reach up to long range.
*Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
*Note: No water techniques above B-rank for the same turn
*Note: Usable twice per battle
±± Declined ±± Xylon was quite clear...
Approved here... Approval
(Raiton: Pachipachi Ninja no Kutsu)- Lightning Release: Crackling Ninja Shoes
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user channels lightning chakra to his feet, which then travels into the ground, three meters in each and all directions around the user. This technique lays dormant, until it is activated when any earth technique is used within its vicinity. The chakra reacts to earth chakra, and as such will release a pulse of lightning, destroying any earth technique before it can have any real effect.
Note: Can only be used by Selendrile
Note: Usable twice per battle
±± Declined ±± If you want something like this you'll need to do it through a new technique. Not to speak that "dormant chakra" as a concept to trigger a response/technique is something bound to require somehow a fuuin.