Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
Originally Posted by Kamishiro
[Manipyureito Yougu/Suiton: Uesokudo Omokasui] - Manipulating tools/Water Release: Overrated Mainstream
Chakra Cost: 50
Description: Similar to "Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop" The user creates openings into the sky however instead of creating a single opening the user creates three opening into the sky,one opening above the opponent with 5 meters and one 5 meters from his left and one 5 meters from his right,the user uses each opening to summon different stuff,the user uses the opening above the user to create lots of water spikes that rains down on the opponent alongest with two big metal spikes,one on the right side of the water spikes and one on the left side of the water spikes and thus the metal spikes and the water spikes smashes the opponent from the above,the user uses the second opening that is on the opponent's right to summon lots of strong,sick and big strings made of metal that wraps around opponent from the front side,and at the same time the user uses the opening that is on the opponent's left side to summon lots of strong,sick and big string which is also made of metal that wraps around the opponent from his back,wrapping all of the opponent's body with sick string binding the opponent in his place and also inflicting damage to him due to the pressure that the strings will cause while being around the opponent,causing the opponent to be open for water and metal spikes that is coming from above.
- Requires a mastery over Water Release
- Requires a mastery over Manipulating Tools
- Counts as two moves
- The user won't be able to perform any Manipulating tools technique nor Water techniques at the same time
- Counts as two moves
- The user won't be able to perform Manipulating tools techniques nor Water techniques higher than A-rank
- Can only be taught by Kamishiro
±± Declined ±± Too much going on. Simplify as this is borderlining DNR
(Karasu Kuchiyose no jutsu: Shiroryu) - Crow Summoning Technique: Shenron
Description: Shenron is a small sized crow compared with the other crows,being 10 meters tall including his tail.Shenron posses a skin with sky-blue color which makes him the most beautiful crow. Shenron is a very unique summon, due to the fact he doesn't attack anyone at all even if someone attacked it,and instead it runs away trying to escape,and being the only way to defend against itself is to run away,Shenron granted a quite fast speed that makes him faster than any crow summon ever,however running was not the resolve as Shenron couldn't run away from ever body and even if he was faster than lots of summons and people there were still people and summons that were faster than him and thus he was being hit by them by that time there was a shinobi who is a signer to the crows contract,he was as Orochimaru when it comes to experiments that is why Shenron decided to go to him,the shinobi agreed to it however he told Shenron it will cost some sacrifices to give him abilities which will make him able to escape/avoid anyone that tries to attack him,and Shenron agreed to the needed sacrifices,and so on the shinobi made the experiments and after months,he turned Shenron to some kind of a leather crow,he took the skin of a chameleon and made several experiments on it and then put it on Shenron,however due to that,Shenron lost the appearance of a crow and it gained a dragon appearance instead however in exchange of that sacrifice Shenron became able to use the ability of the Chameleon,it became able to hide anywhere using it's leather that turns to the appearance of the place where the Chameleon stay which help it to hide from it's enemy however the experiment that the shinobi made into the leather of the Chameleon made Shenron able to use the ability of changing his leather to fit the place that he is insdie while he is flying and thus he becomes invisible to the naked eye,it also gave Shenron the ability to control whether he appears or hide using his leather ability which made Shenron after that a secret weapon for spying.
- Shenron is able to speak Enlish.
- Must sign the crows contract.
- Can not perform any attack of any kind.
- Lasts for 6 turns.
- Only ability is the fact that Shenron could use his leather to fly invisible.
±± Declined ±± in that whole section not a single period. Reword and submit written in a proper manner. Remove the language he can speak. He can speak you to, period. Ability is a bit too much.
‡ [Vongola Sakugu: Buru-Maboroshi] - Vongola Gear: The Sky Phantom ‡[/B]
Originally Posted by Kamishiro
Description: The Sky Phantom is a very unique weapon.It was created by the Vongola Primo who is the leader of the Luciano Family, The Sky Phantom has a metalic gray color like many of the other rings,however it is not made of iron or steel, it is created by a very unique mineral that possess no name however this mineral allows the Ring to store two things, first is a great quantity of water that is all stored within it, this amount of water is used by the user when needed and due to that quantity of water, the wielder of the ring may use the water that is inside the ring instead of using a water source however this can only be used several limited times, the second is that it posses a great quantity of chakra stored also within it as it was created, this chakra allows the user to sense anything within the battlefield as long as he is wearing the ring. In addition to the mitalic gray color that the ring posses, The Sky Phantom has some silver decoration in some certain places in it , it also possess some kind of weird crystals placed on it is top that posses a Sky-blue color, that crystal possess a word engraved on it which is "Vongola' that word turns to black color whenever the user is inside a genjutsu.
ʊ If the user used the ability of non using water source to the techniques that requires a water source in a fight more than 3 times the chakra water chakra inside the ring won't be available anymore in the fight.
ʊ If the user took of the ring from his finger he can no longer use the sensing ability of the ring in the fight he is using it on even if he reworn it.
ʊ Can only be used by Kamishiro and whoever has the permission to do so.
ʊ Must master water release to use the Ring's water abilities.
±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Completely ridiculous. A weapons that enables you to use Water techniques without a water source AND apparentely for some magical reason can make you sense anything on the field better than a kioshi or chaKra sensor. And the part I colored is barely understandable.