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スティンガー Sutingaa | Stinger Arts
Stinger Arts derived from no existing form of martial arts or fighting styles. Instead, it was founded by Scorpio, who is also known as the Desert Stinger. The Stinger Arts was developed by Scorpio after observing a tiny scorpion in the desert. Along time, he began observing Giant Scorpions instead, which do exist in the Narutoverse desert as seen with Giant Centipedes and Giant Birds. [Proof]
After years of development and practice, Scorpio was capable of utilizing the scorpion-like stinger that he himself had attached to his back. How he does it will be explained in the section below. Co-founder of the Stinger Arts was a man named named -Yusuke-. He was friends with Scorpio and began utilizing Stinger Arts in his own way. Unlike Scorpio, -Yusuke- had no intentions of attaching a metal stinger to his back and instead, he developed his own usage of Stinger Arts and it was through stingers that was placed above the arm and hand (picture above), made entirely out of pure chakra.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style
Within Stinger Arts, there are two different types of stingers. The ones that are worn on the user's back, directly on the tailbone and the ones worn on the user's hands. Some techniques may be only restricted to one, whereas other techniques might be available for usage for both types of stingers.
Agility plays an important role in Stinger Arts. Unlike real scorpions, most users of Stinger Arts move with incredible stealthy speeds to land lethal blows. Stingers are naturally sharp and can pierce through human skin and flesh. With the incorporation of Stinger Arts, users will be capable of piercing, even through bones, when acquired enough practice and skill.
Regarding back stingers, through the manipulation of chakra within those stingers, the user will be capable of moving it around, if needed or wanted to, just like how a normal Scorpion can move their stingers around and jab them into their foe.
Besides this, the techniques under Stinger Arts mainly revolve around creative or not very creative usages of the stinger, along with twists here and there, involving chakra, elemental chakra, art of sealing or acrobatics.
(Fuuton Piripirijutsu : Rasen Kichigai) - Wind Stinger Arts : Spiral Madness
Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
Rank : S
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : 80
Description : The user concentrates wind chakra as a layer over his body and stinger, then makes a short, yet swift jump into the in a backwards somersault-manner. As the user is in the air and reaches the desired angle, the user straightens both his body and stinger towards that angle. Using the prepared wind chakra, the user conjures both a burst of wind and a vortex of wind that envelops the user's body. The burst of wind makes it so that it pushes the user's entire body and stinger towards the intended direction, without messing up the user's body and stinger structure. The hurricane surrounds the user's body, taking on the shape of a drill, the tip of the stinger being the sharp tip of the drill. Another comparison could be made with a spinning top. This body of wind also acts as a defense against external attacks. The burst of wind to push the user and vortex happens simultaneously. The drill-like vortex of wind is capable of grinding through earth, imbue with fire, nullify lightning and pierce through water and wind. Following the principles of elements, this vortex will only be able to imbue and go through B-rank and below fire techniques, dissipate upon contact of A-rank fire techniques (S-rank and above earth, wind and water techniques) and get consumed entirely by S-rank and above fire techniques, which in the process, severely burns the user if not dealt with properly. If the user manages to travel at least one range (5 meters) while still retaining the wind vortex around him, the user's body and stinger will still be rotating madly fast, leveling the destructive power of a B-rank technique, even if the wind vortex gets dissipated or consumed in flames.
Note : Created by Yūsuke
Note : Can only be used twice per battle
Note : Must be a master to use this in a practical battle
Note : No wind techniques higher than S-rank to be used in the same turn
Note : While technique is active, no performance of other elemental technique besides wind is allowed
Note : Masters suffer dizziness momentarily (in the turn the technique finishes), students-in-training suffer dizziness for two turns (including turn it finished)
(Piripirijutsu : Sasori Haji) - Stinger Arts : Scorpion's Grasp
Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
Rank : A
Range : Short - Mid
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points : 60
Description : With this technique, the user is capable of extending and launching the length of his scorpion tail to great extents to land a hit on a target. The user's stinger can be launched at high speeds, taking into consideration also that it's created out of metal, allows it to shatter rocks into pieces and pierce through metal. If need be, the user is capable of altering the direction of his stinger to his or her liking, but it may or may not have effect on it's built-up momentum and speed, based on the course of action executed with the stinger. The stinger can also travel underground for much more stealthy purposes and surprising results or bind around the body of several humans.
Note : Created by Yūsuke
Note : Technique lasts until retracted
Note : Speed of stinger does not boost the technique's power beyond A-rank
Additional effects and Restrictions
- Hand Stingers; these can be created and dissapated at will, with pure chakra. The structure of the hand stingers is entirely up to the user when creating it. The first picture at the top is the, 'default' look of a stinger, if the user does not intend to have their stingers be longer, wider or have a special shape. Despite being made entirely out of chakra, the stingers have all the properties of a solid stinger. [Note that future techniques may require special shapes/length/width]
- Strength & Flexibility; users with stingers on their back have tremendous strength and flexibility to avoid having the structure and weight, even if light, of the stingers from burdening them. The flexibility allows for unique movement patterns and tricks to be done.
- Movement; users with hand stingers have been trained to be able to stealthily and swiftly move around the battlefield with the aid of chakra suppresion, as if, someone using Silent Homicide technique in the Hidden Mist technique. Applying quick speeds in their blows, allows them to pierce through flesh and bones.
- Accuracy; masters of Stinger Arts are capable of pinpointing and stabbing certain spots on an opponent's body, even when blind after calibrating and memorizing the opponent's body size, structure and features.
- Rank; there are only two ranks here, master and student. One shall be labelled as master after mastering all the techniques or after being deemed worthy of being at the level of master. Students are those still in training or just not ready yet.
- Any additional effects or restrictions, not stated here, will or shall be within the techniques as they are made.
Really cool idea, just a few things that need to be fixed and clarified. One, you have too many additional effects; tremendous strength, great flexibility, swift and silent movement and pinpoint accuracy are too many all in one. And the only ones that truly make sense with this style are pinpoint accuracy and great flexibility (maybe increased strength, but that just gives you too many bonuses). So you need to reduce the number of those. In addition, I have a problem with the hand stingers; the idea of releasing pure chakra in that sustainable way seems to not only infringe on Hyuuga abilities but even go beyond what the Hyuuga clan is capable of. If anything I would say bracers that can retract and extend the hand stingers would be fine, but just releasing them from pure chakra without any sort of substance to mold them around would not only require Hyuuga-level chakra control, but if you want to still go with it and convince me that it's completely doable, you would need to use a technique whenever you use them. Finally, I need you to clarify how sealing techniques can be used with this, or just remove that part of the CFS, since you kind of slipped it in at the end of the description.