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    A fantatsy Story Chapter14 Part 2

    Past chapters:
    Chapter 1 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 2 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 3 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 4 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 5 : 1 - 2 - 3 (wait a minute there isn't a 3rd part for my 5th chapter) :sy:
    Chapter 6 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 7 : 1 - 2 - 3 - 4
    Chapter 8 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 9 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 10 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 11 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 12 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 13 : 1 - 2 - 3
    Chapter 14 : 1

    Here's a character backstory:
    Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword beside summoning deities from another world.
    Ame: the sweet imp-princess she tries to help Gary restore his memory, with her healing abilities and water element use.
    Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
    Eduna:a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
    Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
    Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius.
    Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved by the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side.
    Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost, he is revealed to be an ancient deity that wants to bring all world to nothingness.
    Kalina: Gary's mother and the best known earth manipulator on the main land.
    magia: the type energy that's used to cast magic skills

    I'm sorry :ghehe: this time I won't be able to post 1part/day because of my examintations
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    Halmius the scion of Exoddia who was summoned from the dimension where Heins; Eduna's love, was used as a vessel to contain the overwhelming power of Exoddius the deity, engaging in a ferocious battle against the priestess Eduna and her fairy companion Rose, ending it with a stab in the heart of the immortal devoted woman…

    Rose was scared she screamed :"mamie!"…

    Eduna's rage has reached the surface, she started to bleed from almost every where, her blood evaporated covering her in a crimson fog, that simply transformed into a red blob of blood, a huge snake tail emerged, followed by the view of six red glowing eyes, Halmius stepped back…

    Witnessing the birth of the demon he yelled at her smiling :"show me the demon …Megidon!"…

    Eduna finally showed her horrific form, a large bare flesh blood leaking demon with a dragon like head three pairs of eyes two long sharp horns, her torso is nothing but a spine that links her chest with her lower parts, all this covered in a dark aura of evil magia, simply a gruesome beast…

    Rose couldn't move from fear, her senses are confused because of the huge evil she felt inside Eduna, she kneeled motionless, Eduna rised her arm and smashed Halmius who easily evaded the attack, he pulled a blade from his sleeves and charged more life force into the ground making his whole town become alive focusing on the demon, Megidon jumped back about a mile gaining a huge safety distance between her and the enemy…

    The demon rised her head up in the air opening her jaws even more than what it's expected thus the flesh around her teeth shreded her surrounding aura gathered over her mouth in a spherical form then rapidly covered in a dense cloak of dark flames, Halmius noticed her and said :"so you are going to do it…hmm"…

    Simulatingly Halmius dissambled his village making in fall apart on the ground, which tilited Eduna's position making her release a large destructive dark energy beam, and miss her target, the beam came in contact with a nearby mountain turning it immediately into dust… Rose witnessed this demonic powers in shock she was confused everything was annihilated to ruins in front of her eyes she ran away taking her friend's cloak and rapier, shedding tears…

    Halmius stood on the ruins of his village, staring at Eduna, he held his blade tightly, and in a flash rushed toward the demon, but her reflexes were beyond his estimation, even in this beastly body she was able to read him moves, stomping him brutely to the ground, he quickly pinned his rapier in the land to make pipes go rageous and tie Eduna's neck, he used this chance to soften the land under him and slip through her paws…

    Halmius emerged trying to cut Megidon's spine, but his blade just broke to pieces he got angered saying "damn… Zheinian power!" retreating back, but he was surprised by a huge skeletal arm emerging from Eduna's shoulder trying to slice him…

    A water stream stopped the attack, it was Rose's who stood carrying her friends equipements, she bite her lip and scolded Eduna :"mamie! Stop! Please you have to regain your mind back!"…

    The mindless demon growled and tried to attack the crying fairy, but Halmius blocked that attack with a piece of land, he turned to Rose saying :"it's not for saving your pathetic existence, now retreat",as he clapped his hands creating chains of shining light, that tied Eduna to the ground, the rageous demon shaked and with one brute move she broke free, and disappeared…

    Rose tried to sense her :"she is here…" Halmius interrrupted her :" I know…" and released some flashing bolts from his palms to the sky, making it rain, Rose suspected something: "sensory rain…eh what are you going to do next?"..

    He jumped at her and pushed her to the ground blocking the back tail attack with the rest of his blade at the same time, of course his broken weapon got shattered to pieces, then he grabbed the tail and pulled the demon spinning her and tossing her in the air, but Eduna used this chance to charge another dark flame blast and release it toward him, Rose pushed him to safety and insulted :"it's not for saving your pathetic existance!", Eduna landed on the ground and charged with her horns at them, but Halmius used his repelling holy barrier to block this raging beast, but the demon was too strong that the force of the barrier pushed Halmius and Rose away instead…

    Landing in the middle of ruins, the scion and the fairy had fallen, Halmius stood and with a cruel stare he gazed at Eduna he said :" then insist" he closed his eyes and clapped his hands, Rose asked :"what are you going to do?", he answered :"quite mortal…"…

    The land started to glow in white, the rain stopped, the sky cleared, Halmius spread his hands rising them to the sky, Eduna started to float, every thing started to float, like the gravity is gone, he slammed his fists to the ground and a large seal was forming on the ground, with shining symbols, Rose was surprised she commented :"wow! This is…", Halmius said :"the Heavenly punishment seal…it's the perfect solution to demons like her"…

    Rose got angered :"Demons!...hey don't call her like that!"…

    The man answered emotionlessly :"her existance was false from the begining of her creation so her fate is to be banished from the living world"…

    Rose rushed at him but he kicked her to a wall next to them, "stay calm your turn'll come" he commented…

    Eduna was chained heavily by glowing chains of light, she tried to break free but it was a futile try, he smiled, Rose shouted at him :"Why are you doing this?! who are you anyway?! Are you Heins?! Or are you Julius?!"…

    He smiled and said :"neither, I represent the failed fate of a doomed world…do you know why we were summoned here…heh of course not, this is beyond your foolish mortal understanding… I failed, no Exoddius failed to fullfill his oath so all of us scions weren't perfect we couldn't achieve our goal of restoring his body, most of us isn't possessed totally by that deity…"…

    Rose interrupted :"who cares!? why you are doing this to her?"…

    He answered :"like you don't know…I'm Heins, her lover it's true I'm sharing this body with Exoddius, but I still have my consciousness, I discovered that he was right, the mortal world need to be removed from creation"…

    Rose couldn't move too much due to being exhausted and feeling pain from hitting the wall earlier, so she just stared at her friend, witnessing her being sealed…

    The beast was totally chained, the seal on the ground opened like a gate that lead to a dark open space, the chains pulled her more, struggling to be free Eduna tried, but she couldn't resist the power of this seal, she slowly was swallowed by the seal, which closed and the symbols simply disappeared like a sparkling glass shards "finished" said Halmius then turned to Rose

    Rose couldn't help herself her feet were paralyzed she could do nothing but to shout in his face :"salauds! What do you want?"…

    He pulled another blade and approched her slowly he said :"don't worry your death will be slow and painless, since you don't know where are the branches, then your existence is as useless as any other mortal", approaching more…

    Rose tried to fire some flame bullets but they easily got repelled by the approching enemy, just when few steps are only left for Rose's death, he rised his sword , her eyes were pinned to the view of the black blade's tip, the sword moved…and blood soacked her face, Halmius vomitted a lot of blood, he slowly stared at his stomach, where Eduna's tail penetrated him "impossible" was his last word, the beast broke free from the seal, as Eduna tossed him away in the air slicing him in two pieces…

    Rose was shocked of this horrific scene, she couldn't move nor fight, she knew it was the end,only waiting for her death, witnessing the once called friend approaching her…

    Rose closed her eyes and smiled saying in a barely clear voice :"Zhein, I'll love you forever…Pervers I wish you and Petite a better life…tree boy I'm sorry you weren't my type of men…"…thoses were her words when only a step is left between her and the rageous monster…
    To be continued
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    now who wants Rose to die and why...:zonder:

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    Re: A fantatsy Story Chapter14 Part 2

    Gee, that was really good, but i dont want rose to die, i want her friend to control the demön

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    Re: A fantatsy Story Chapter14 Part 2

    OMG,big likeeeee! Loved it! :D

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    Re: A fantatsy Story Chapter14 Part 2

    Awesome chapter.

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    Re: A fantatsy Story Chapter14 Part 2

    I don't want Rose to die! :/
    Great chapter as usual! Keep it up ^_^
    ... and don't worry about not posting a part everyday

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    Re: A fantatsy Story Chapter14 Part 2

    don't make her die
    awesome chapter :3 you never disappoint

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    Re: A fantatsy Story Chapter14 Part 2

    nooh dont kill her Epic chapter all the same, but please dont kill her

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