Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦
(Jiton/Katon Release: Taiyo no Oki-Sa) - Magnetism/Fire Release: Solar Magnitudes
Originally Posted by ~Xanthe~
Chakra cost: 50
Description: This jutsu is considered one of the most devastating Jiton jutsus created by ninja.The user will concentrate his chakra in the form ofmagnetic waves 10 meters above his head by extending both arms toward the sky, attracting any metal within mid range above his hands (this occurs in an incredible speed, taking a between 3-4 seconds to recolect all the metal, regardless of the amount of metal). After collecting all the metal within the area into a gigantic sphere, the user will infuse it with large amounts offire chakra, reaching temperatures close to about 1000 C. Before blaxing liquefied metal drips onto the user,he will swing both arms downward, releasing the giant ball towards the direction of his choice (once released, the user cannot control the ball any longer). The ball will destroy anything within its path and after crashing will produce a huge crater, leaving nothing behind. The ball covers a wide area. The effects will be the same as a meterorite crashing on earth. If the user is within mid-range of the explosion, he will suffer -20 of damage.
-No A-rank and above fire for the next two turns
-This move counts as two of the three moves available
-The user cannot use water jutsus the same turn and the next turn
-No magnetism related techniques in the same turn or next turn
-The user after throwing the ball will feel physically exhausted, slowing down his reaction time and body movement by half
-After releasing the ball, the user's hands will be moderately burned, unabling the user to use no more than 2 jutsus in the next turn.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Can only be used by magnetism users
-Can only be taught by ~Xanthe~ and Gin-San
~Declined do not resubmit~ And we're done with this one. I gave you a chance to work it out but this one is just plain OP.
(Satetsu o Chissoku) - Choking Iron Sand
Type: Attack / Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Description: The user unleashes their Iron Sand as a light powder in the air and throughout the ground. The powder isn't close enough to itself to have an electrical current pass through it. The user then creates a repulsive magnetic shell around them that repulses the Iron Sand, and other metals, away from the user. When the opponent breathes, they begin to draw in Iron Sand into their lungs. The Iron Sand lattices will then cut away at the opponent's lungs quickly due to their natural respiration. If the opponent is moving, this cause their natural respiration to increase, causing the Iron Sand to tear away their lungs quicker.
~Usable once per battle.
~Lasts 3 turns, can be deactivated while in use.
~No Iron Sand jutsu while active.
~No S-Rank or higher lightning jutsu while active.
~The user must have used only two jutsu the turn prior.
~No A-Rank or higher Iron Sand jutsu for four turns after use.
~No A-Rank or higher Fire jutsu for three turns.
~Declined do not resubmit~ OP O__O.
(Meiton: Masuku Rikugun) - Dark Release: Vizard
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A (+5 to Taijutsu/Basic Ninjutsu, +10 to all fire/lightning jutsu, +15 to all Dark Release jutsu)
Description: The user will hold their left hand to their left eye and begin exerting their Dark Chakra through out their face, the Dark Chakra then progresses their the user's body in a high rush. The Dark Chakra comes from a sealed portion of it in their left hand, inside the Meiton mark of their hand. The Dark Chakra then takes the form of a white mask that seeps Dark Chakra. The Mask adds Dark Chakra throughout the user's body and gives them a boost in their chakra system (due to the rush of Dark Chakra through their chakra system, they can't be put under Genjutsu B-Rank or lower). The mask also gives more thrust to the user's taijutsu, Basic Ninjutsu, Dark Release jutsu, Lightning jutsu, and Fire jutsu.
-Only Lightning, Fire, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu (Including Kaito's Taijutsu), and Dark Release jutsu are usable while under the mask's effects.
-Can't have done more then two jutsu the previous turn.
-Only lasts 4 turns.
-Can't absorb jutsu while under the effects of the mask.
-No Dark Release jutsu after use for 3 turns.
-No A-Rank or higher Water jutsu the turn after expiring.
-No S-Rank or higher Lightning jutsu for 3 turns after expiring.
-No S-Rank or higher Fire jutsu for 3 turns after expiring.
-The user will feel exhausted after using the mask and not be able to move as fast as they could before for two turns.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Can only be used by Dark Release users. Each mask is unique to the user. (Effects are the same.)
-Can only be taught by ~Xanthe~
~Declined~ This is ridiculously OP. You do realize you're boosting all your S-rank fir/dark technique to F-rank in this mode? Even with all the restrictions you added it's unacceptable. Also, bleach rip off are quite hated in here (). If it was Roku who'd check those it would've been an instant "do not resubmit".