Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦
Since my last submission 10/25/11 so new week!
(Zōo | baransu | sereniti ) Hatred|Balance|Serenity
Chakra cost: 35
Damage points: N/A
Description: One day, the user has set upon to travel mountains and rivers, until he found something more then he was looking for. This monk has said: “I believe that true focus lies somewhere between rage and serenity…” The warrior must learn to balance his desires, emotions, and abilities. After the warrior had misbeliefs, the monk finally showed the warrior his serenity, hidden inside his own brain, then serenity had finally came into balance with his anger, as the monk had shown him, his lost memories of his mother.
As serenity represents water, and rage represents lightning, as using that principle the ninja could become faster at using those elements and need less handseals, and he could also gain a small boost to them, around +5.
-Can only taught by Dr. House
-Can only be used once a battle
-Lasts ti'll the battle is over and must be done in the beginning of battle.
~Declined~ Was that monk's name Charles Xavier by any chance :p? Anyway, take out the +5 boost, and define the speed enhancement.
(Suiton:Firutārenzu) Water Release: Filter Lenses
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will basically channels his suiton chakra onto his eyes, creating a really thin surface, much like contact lenses ontop of the cornea, allowing the user to not to get blinded by an extreme/strong light.
~Declined~ While water does diffract the light, it still allows it through. And considering it's an extremely fine layer (a couple of millimeters at most) the effect is almost non-existent. I light the idea behind this, but you'll need to work on it some more.
Originally Posted by Dr. House
Sumitsukigasa - Dante's Horn of Sorrow
Chakra: 40 (-15 each turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: It has yet been said within many dusty old books that a great man named Dante Alighieri has gone to save his loved one from the great evil toad of Myobokuzan, Gamafer. Dante had gone down into the pit of death, into Gamafer's lair. After 7 days of a bloody fight, Dante failed to save his flower, and he showed no mercy to Gamafer. After the bloodbath, Dante carved a blade from Gamafer's mighty horn and he took these pieces to be forged by Hephaestus, the nearby blacksmith. He had forged the mighty double-bladed sword, and named Sumitsukigasa. The double-bladed sword is made of mostly unbreakable bone, harder then steel. Because of the blade part is made of bone, and most of it's parts, the weapon weighs almost half of it's size, and can be handled in order to reach high speeds. The -15 chakra in each turn is because Sumitsukigasa sucks the user's chakra in order to maintain it's ability, which is being always in the state of having itself imbued with wind chakra, quite similar to (Fūton: Kaze Kyōka no Tsūru) - Wind Release: Wind Enhanced Tools, and it won't stop until the double-bladed sword is out of short range from the user. If the user wishes, he may channel more of his chakra into the sword, which is an additional -10 chakra in each usage, in order to extend the pre-existing wind chakra inbued within the sword, onto 5-6ft. As the wind chakra has been extended on the sword in order to reach 5-6ft, the blade becomes an S-ranked wind blade, but for only that turn.
5+ to every wind attack.
-Because of the sword's abilities, only a Sannin may hold the sword.
-Because of it's wind affinities, only who mastered wind may use it.
-If user wishes, the wind chakra imbued within the sword can be extended so that it will reach onto 5-6ft.
-Only may Dr. House use this, and who he allows.
-If someone tries to hold it, the sword will start sucking most of his chakra out of him, leaving him with a feeling of drained.
-I took out the Mid range part, and I added the 5-6ft, so leaves it with short range, as you have suggested,
-I have added 15+ to every wind attack, because the weapon had an affinity of wind, and it boosts the user's wind attacks.
-I have also added "if enemy holds it"
-Feel free to edit, if you see something wrong.
~Approved~ Made it +5 again.