Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦
(Taijutsu: osoi unten) Taijutsu Style: Slow motion
Originally Posted by Piccolosan
Chakra cost: 40 Chakra
Description: Adrenalin forces the brain to "think" faster, making the person perceive time much slower. This uses chakra to imitate this effect and time "seems" to slow down resulting in better reaction time. Because of the heavy use of chakra to the occipital lobe, after this jutsu wears off the users will experience blindness for one turn and blurriness for the rest of the battle.
-Lasts 4 turns
-Can only be used once in a battle
-This only increases reaction time by x2 doesn't increase strength, speed, or durability of body
-Does not give better vision, only slows down time for user
-Can only be taught by Piccolosan
I think I understand what your saying about heavy draw backs
~Declined do not resubmit~ I should've done this the first time I checked it, sorry for wasting your time. The whole idea of slowing time was abused in this thread and will most likely never be approved again.
(Katon: Majin Faia) - Fire Style: Demon Fire
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 each turn.)
Damage points: N/A (+20 fire.)
Description: The user will via nature manipulation transform all his chakras into one of the basic five elements, Fire Release. By doing so, he will only have fire chakra running through his entire chakra system and his entire body, this will forcefully heat his body up to an extreme level where the user most likely becomes resistent to most fire attacks, as they simply do not burn him, making him resitent up to A-rank fire attacks. The heat from the user will aswell numb the user's nerves in his entire body, which will result that he won't even flinch if he got stabbed but simply continue on his movements. Also due the fact that the fire chakra the heart will pump faster, the brain work faster, which will result in him increasing his own speed (3rd gates speed), reaction time, and strength. However, not enough with that, the user will gain extra powers in the fire element, increasing it with one rank. However not only good things comes with power, this jutsu also is having it's downs. As the user will only be capable of using fire release only when this technique is activated, as he simply transformed all his chakras into fire. The user cannot stay in this mode in eternity, this state is limited to four turns, whereafter the user will be completly drained from chakra, leaving him only 1% of his chakra back. Because of so much strain to the body after 3 turns the user will go back to normal speed, thus the user still have one turn left with only fire jutsu to finish the battle. Once activated, a M appears on the user's forehead.
~Lasts four turns.
~User can only use fire when activated
~After four turns, the User automatically loses the fight if not won by that time.
~Must master fire and water elements to use this
~Can only be USED by Piccolosan
I added a restriction to the speed of this jutsu, I honestly don't know what else to restrict without actually changing this jutsu.
~Declined~ You don't get it, I never said to restrict it more, I said to take away abilities. This whole jutsu is a rip off of many already existing jutsu and you combined them together. If it isn't drastically different in your resubmission, I will decline it for good. Just a hint; don't mention the gates, don't make yourself resistant to fire (up to A-rank at least), the whole idea of turning all your chakra to fire was already done too.
(Suna: osoi suna) Sand style: Slow Sand
Chakra Cost: 40 Chakra
Damage points: N/A
Description: The use gathers in a huge chakra amount and quickly slams his hand on the ground. Then releasing this chakra unto the ground, the user uses the chakra to bring up the strongest of minerals from the ground. This is spread out up to long range and with an explosion the sand is brought up. This does not change the terrain rather it only brings up the sand. The explosion will only hinder vision for 5 seconds, after that all the sand will drop down to the ground. This creates one foot of sand, with this the opponents movement speed is cut in half, meaning running, zig zagging, etc anything that involves using the sand to move. Because this is has the users chakra, the user does not get slower.
-Can only be used once per battle
-No S rank sand jutsu at the same turn and the following one.
-Can only be taught by Piccolosan
~Approved~ Took out the part where you can sense your enemy and added the bold part.