Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦
(Jūho Bōgyo to damēji) – Gentle Defense and Damage
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Similar to (Jūkenpō: Ichigekimi) - Gentle Fist Style: One blow Body, but the user will focus onto parts where he wishes expel chakra from every chakra points on their body. As the byakugan user has trained with a kenjutsu master, instead of exerting chakra from his whole body, he may exert chakra where he wishes. That reduces the "wasting chakra on other part of the body effect" and also, as the chakra being focused into several places and not through the whole body, it makes it difficult, but a whole lot stronger. As the kenjutsu master was about to strike him, he exerted chakra, in order to throw his sword back, to lend a strike onto his tenketsu. Over the years, he also learned as to how to throw swords back which has a wider range of cutting like lightning/water/wind/katon channeled through it, so he learned to he may exert his chakra from the focused chakra points, in order to defend against those effects. Since this is an exertion of chakra from different points on your body, the exertion of the chakra are strong as an S-ranked bursts of chakra, thus why it giving the 80 damage, and reaches onto short-mid range.
~Must be sannin in order to be able to focus onto different places, and not just a whole body exertion.
~This technique can be done most affectively with byakugan active, because of the reaction time. If byakugan active, it takes no time in order to exert the chakra from the focused chakra points.
~This can be used as a combo with palm strike or finger strike, and obviously, can be done at the same time, since both of them are exertion of raw chakra.
~Can be used only once, but it lasts for 4 turns. After the 4 turns, the user will feel -10 damage, and will feel exhausted.
~While this is active for that turn, the user may only perform Gentle Fist Techniques.
~Must be taught by Dr. House
±± Declined ±± All the bolded parts are wrong. I don't even know were to start. I was tempted to DNR this one to be honest. I know you were taught by Lili in Gentle Fist. You already can exert blunt chakra blows from any part of your body if you remember correctly from the 3rd form. This is just adding many many many more abilities while not following the line behind gentle fist.
(Jūho Wan· suteppu· fōmu sūsen) – Gentle Fist One Step Form Thousands
Chakra cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage points: N/A (+15 Each Jyuuken Technique)
Description: The wise hyuuga from the clan had passed down this technique to the new generation, but for only those whom he sees to be the next "messiah", the chosen one. It all started when the great war against the Nine Tailed Fox, this brave human had avenged his family by attacking the Beast, but failed in his trials. As the times he was failing, once his heart pumped like the Beast's, the veins had popped out all over his body like someone is ready to die. He had pumped chakra from his chakra points like never before, having the techniques take inhuman strength, the techniques itself became bigger as he was the one standing out. After the war, he had survived with minor injuries, but he had one last fate. The wise hyuuga has demonstrated to Dante his skills, as the normal Gentle Fist Techniques to look much bigger then they are normally, which enabled him to fight the nine tailed fox, and to survive its attack. The wise man said that he may only achieve this, if there is someone's life in danger, or your own. The technique is an enhancement of Gentle Fist, where the user has learned to widen the 361 chakra points on his body to its maximum point, where he may reach his maximum potential. As the 361 chakra points has widened, every Gentle Fist he performs will be +15 bigger/stronger/faster then the usual. To understand this easier, if there is a Spin technique which is short ranged, it may reach onto mid range/much more range of protection. If Techniques like Twin Lion/Burst of chakra from palm/finger, It has a much wider reach/protection when this jutsu is active. As when this mode is active, every jutsu of his will cost him an additional +15 chakra, but in each +15 damage will be added. As because of this temporary enhancements which the body suffers (361 chakra points enlargement) these 361 chakra points are moving near/through the muscles of the body, as it will affect joints/muscles in his body. When using this technique, it will increase their speed to the point as fast as rock lee without weights, and since there are chakra points within the brain, it will also increase their reaction by +2 points.
~The mode is active for 4 turns, and afterwards, the user feels really tired, and must only perform 2 jutsus for the rest of next 2 turns.
~Must be Sannin, and master of Jyuuken.
~Only House may teach it.
~This mode is only good for Gentle Fist Techniques.
~Must only use Gentle Fist Techniques, while this mode is active.
±± Declined ±± Its severly overpowered and again it has nothing to do with gentle fist. Gentle Fist is all about not having strength but agility and intelligence and speed, attacking your enemy from within. this technique is actually the opposite of that. Physical power is a characteristic of Strong Fist.
(Hakke Rekka) – Eight Trigrams Degradation
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: As the hyuuga master had trained for decades, he learned to defend himself against elemental jutsus which he could never perform, due to the fact he is the master of the hyuugas, and that is all he knows. As hyuuga's main principle is to disturb one's chakra, the hyuuga master has learned to disturb his most feared enemy, the elemental chakra. Similar to a burst of chakra from the palms, the user performs a wide burst of chakra from the palms, thus disturbing the chakra flow within a jutsu that is advancing towards him. Once chakra has been disturbed within the jutsu, the jutsu will disperse or fall apart, due to the chakra being disturbed within it. If the user sends the burst of chakra within the ground intentionally, it will affect techniques which are connected to the ground.
~Only Dr. House and Passion may teach it.
~Can be used 4x
~Only may a sannin and who mastered jyuuken may use it.
~This is for the sake of encouraging close fight, using Tai, instead of nuking eachother from far apart ~_~
±± Declined ±± You can't insert your chakra inside your enemy's technique. Its a DNR but i'll give you a change to reword and re explain how you achieve what you purpose to do.