Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦
resubmitting an approved custom jutsu:
(Hakke Eien no) - 8 Trigrams Eternal
(Hakke Eien no) - 8 Trigrams Eternal
I added this (forgot to add the speed of the jutsu):As the user is releasing a series of large amounts of chakras from his chakra points, the user is moving at a speed of Lee without weights.
±± Declined ±± Keep the old one. A normal Taijutsu Master that is a Gentle Fist Master of your rank already moves at that speed and i won't allow you to boost it up even more.
(Jūho Chikarar No Ken) – Gentle Step Taking Control
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (+Depends on the Jutsu's Damage Points being taken)
Description: As the hyuuga user is known for the disruption of the chakra stream, and hyuuga member may exert a line chakra, line like stream from their palm, the hyuuga member has learned to take control ti'll some extent of the opponents jutsu. The hyuuga user will first have to either use a chakra burst, or the chakra stream exerting from their palm, in order to take control of the jutsu. As the hyuuga's arm movement are close to the speed of 3rd gate, he'll be able to take over the jutsu within that timeframe. The user had to go through extreme training of Gentle Fist, streaming chakra, and this technique has to be taught.
To take control over Solid like Earth/Ice elemental:
As the Solid based jutsu is coming into the user's way, the user may channel a fine chakra steam from their palm, as the chakra stream will impale the jutsu and make cuts where the opponents jutsu is controlling the very element. Thus cutting off the enemy's chakra control from the jutsu, the hyuuga user may take control of the jutsu, and re-direct the jutsu onto any way they're want it. Since the enemie's chakra control was disrupted this is possible. As the chakra line had made cuts into the very element, it may be possible for the hyuuga member to re-figure the structure of the earth jutsu. the hyuuga member has to constantly emit the chakra line, because the very element stands together with their chakra.
To take control over Gas forms like Fire/Wind/Steam elemental:
As the fire/wind jutsu comes in their way, the hyuuga user will expel a serious amount of burst of chakras from their palm at high speeds, as these bursts reach the jutsu, it will disturb the momentum of the chakra, and the very chakra of in itself, and as the user is exerting chakra, he will disturb the chakra within the jutsu, and as the momentum goes the opposite way, the very element (meaning wind/fire) will follow the path of the bursts of the chakra.
To take control over liquid forms like Lava/Water elemental:
This is the most difficult of all, because the user has to perform a spin, which will re-direct the flow of the element. As The user starts spinning from left to right, (this barrier is not intended to protect up fully, but to take control of the enemie's jutsu) in order to create a spinning barrier, as the liquid had made a contact with the barrier, as the barrier spins, instead of having razor sharp dents on the barrier, it will have blades like dents like water turbine, and it will re-direct the water straight back to the enemy. As it makes contact, the barrier will channel chakra (disturb enemies chakra within the liquid) into the liquid (the very element) in order to re-direct it into a direction of the user's wish. If the liquid has taken a form and as it makes its impact, the jutsu will be re-directed as a wave. As the user begins to spin, the barrier will reach onto mid-range, since it is intended to re-direct a jutsu, and not completely deflect it, like the original barriers, which is for defending. As it is connecting, the barrier will absorb the chakra of the enemie's chakra and replace it with his own as the distruption of the enemie's chakra happening, thus regenerating the user's any minor injuries and chakra.
~Can be used by Dr. House
~If used with S-Ranks, it can be used 4x
~If used with A-ranks it can be 5x
~If used with Forbidden, it can be used 2x but the user will take 15% damage from the jutsu, and another -30 from the very basic of taking the jutsu over.
~May be used by Sannin, must master Jyuuken
~Doujutsu may see it
~While this used against S-ranked, there can be only 2 jutsus in that turn, if used against forbidden, there can be only this technique within that turn.
~After re-directing Forbidden, the user won't be able to move from the current position, and perform Jyuuken for the next 2 turns.
±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. No taking controll of your enemies jutsu. Didn't i decline this already a while back? O_o
(Jyuuken mōdo) – Jyuuken Mode
Chakra cost: 40 (-10 Each Turn)
Damage points: 80 (+15 points to every Jyuuken Style)
Description: As we know, Hyuuga users are famous for their very own unique techniques, the Gentle Fist. Gentle Fist as we know, had to do with exerting a serious amount of chakra, which will either way disturb or cause several damage to the user, or the user's techniques. While the Jyuuken Mode is on, similar to (Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists where the user's arms are covered within chakra due to the constant emit of chakra over his arms, but in this technique, the user's whole body will be covered within that type of exertion of chakra. As this Jyuuken is active, all of the Jyuuken techniques' abilities will increase +15 in the view of damage points, due to the exertion of chakra being already implemented, and the chakra which has to be used in order to perform the technique itself. The 80 damage point is because it is made of similar technique like the (Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists, the user's whole body will be covered within the exerted chakra, and will cause damage when the hyuuga user is implementing its attacks. As because the hyuuga's user most complemented abilities is to disturb the chakra flow, once the hyuuga master has made a physical contact with the enemy, the chakra being exerted from the hyuuga master's body will disturb the enemy's chakra flow. The enemy will become paralized for 1 turn upon touch. As because of this, the user's reach will increase 3 feet. Because of this extreme exertion of chakra, the user's heart rate will increase, and because of fast blood flow, the user's reaction will increase +1, their speed will match to 1st gate.
~May be activated 1x, but lasts 5 turns.
~After 5 turns, the user will feel -50 damage because of the over exhaustion of themselves, and will be hardly able to move in the turn when the jutsu has been over and for another 2 turns.
~When this jutsu is active, only one jutsu may be performed during the turns.
~No clones can be active, only Kages may perform this, Masters of Jyuuken.
~Due to the excessive useage of Jyuuken, the user won't be able to perform any tai moves, nor any Jyuuken styles in the same turn when this mode was over and for another 2 turn.
~If the user de-activates this before the 5 turns had been over, the user will feel -30 damage and for the same turn and next turn will only be able to use 2 jutsus, barely be able to move for the same and next turn, won't be able to use any jyuuken for the same turn.
~In order to perform this, the user has to first activate (Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists and (Juho Tsuin Raino no Ashi) Gentle Step Twin Rhino Feet in the same turn (They're basically an exertion of chakra from arms and leg, therefore the user shouldn't have a problem using these two at the same turn), and the next turn he may activate this Mode.
~While this mode is active, jutsus which require handseals or something that may be exerted from the body like Nagashi won't be able to use.
~Can be taught only by Dr. House
±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Its grossely overpowered and it doesn't respect the concept of Gentle Fist. I+ve explain this before.
Also you should have quoted your submission of the other techniques.