Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦
(Jigoku no Tenshi) - Angels of Hell
Originally Posted by Kira..
Range: Mid- to Long-Range
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Details: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user fills their hand with chakra. The user's hand then releases five humming bird-shaped entities which "fly" towards the opponent. (Please note that at this time they are still attached to the user's hand by strings lightning chakra.) The five (5) birds then puncture the target through their left and right wrists, their left and right ankles, and their abdomen. At this point, they use their "tails" (strings of lightening chakra), wrap around the target, allowing the user to pull the target closer for a short-ranged or even point blank attack. The strings can be separated from the user by a jutsu of equal strength.
~Hand Seals: Bird, Dragon, Tiger, Boar, Ram, Dog, Ram, Boar, Tiger, Dragon, Bird. Only the first three hand seals need to be performed if the user is an Uchiha, Hyguya, or a signer of the Hachidori contract.
~This jutsu can only be used a maximum of three times per battle in total.
~Lightning Nature Transformation can be added to this jutsu to make it more potent, adding numbness.
±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. This has many things wrong and you are failing to correct them. No point in wasting more time.
If possible, I would prefer that the following jutsu be left for Inzuna. He has a better understanding of the original jutsu, Roshida Mode, as well as summoning modes/techniques. If not, I understand.
(Roshida Mode: Burēku Seigen!) - Roshida Mode: Limit Break!
Type: Supplementary to Roshida Mode
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Details: When using Roshida Mode, limits to normal chakra flow are placed in the spinal column of the user's body to prevent permanent damage after extended use over the five turn period. By using Limit Break after initially entering Roshida Mode, the user can allow a stronger surge in chakra flow. In order to prevent damage to the spinal cord, the user is only allowed to stay in Roshida Mode for three turns as opposed to the usual five. Upon using limit break, signaled by a surge of chakra around the user directly after entering Roshida Mode, the user takes on even more humming bird-like features, growing long wings capable of flight, long, sharp talons on their hands, and a greater mass of feathers. The user's body weight returns to normal due to the increased weight from the wings and feathers, however, due to the stronger flow of chakra and greater general strength granted by Limit Break, their speed increases. Upon exiting Roshida Mode, the user becomes slowed, tired, and unable to keep open the tear in the inter-dimensional fabric that allows summons, forcing all summons to abruptly leave the field upon exiting the mode. The user's ability body strength decreases due to the sudden decrease in chakra flow, so, similarly to after one leaves the fifth gate, the user may feel extremely sore all over their body and will be unable to perform Taijutsu for the rest of the battle.
~The user can now use Roshida Elder Jutsu.
~The user can only stay in Limit Break for three turns, and must be entered on the sirst turn of Roshida Mode.
~The user is extremely sore and tired upon exiting the mode, and is rendered unable to use Taijutsu for the rest of the battle due to a decrease in general strength and chakra flow.
~Can only be used once per battle.
~Requires the user to be a signer of the Hachidori (Hummingbird) Contract.
±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Not only is this unapprovable as you have no right to choose who checks your submissions nor to make comments on the staff members who are checking them and his or her ability to do so. Let this be a warning.