Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦
Originally Posted by Jacob Moore
Changes in Bold
(Genjutsu: Donna Ko_tan Shita za Shin Beniya of Do_ri? Kaosu ando Hakkyo)-Illusion Technique: What Lies Beneath the Thin Veneer of Reason? Chaos and Madness
Description:This Genjutsu is one of the most efficient in history, created after several years of studying various powerful Genjutsu users. The user begins by placing the opponent under the influence of an illusion, where they dream they are falling off a huge cliff face, and continue to fall forever; meanwhile in actuality, they are merely dreaming, and their body is asleep. However, the true power of this jutsu comes with its secondary effects. While the opponent is asleep, the user manipulates the flow of chakra in the targets cerebral nervous system, causing the body to unnecessarily begin to produce large amounts of DMT because the target is dreaming. While usually the powerful Hallucinogenic properties of DMT are negated by MAOI (monoamine oxidase), if a large enough dose is produced, and reaches the brain before it can be metabolized by MAOI, the person will be subject to powerful hallucinations beyond their control. After this secondary process is complete, the Genjutsu is automatically cancelled out, and the afflicted person wakes up. This leaves the DMT to take its effect once it reaches the brain. Some psychological effects may include an experience of radiant colors, objects and surfaces appearing to ripple or "breathe", colored patterns behind the closed eyelids (eidetic imagery), crawling geometric patterns overlaying walls and other objects, morphing objects, a sense that one's thoughts are spiraling into themselves, loss of a sense of identity or the ego (known as "ego death"), and other powerful psycho-physical reactions. Many people will begin experience a dissolution between themselves and the "outside world." These strong hallucinations are also accompanied by seeing imaginary objects that aren't really there. Because the drug is all natural, and not "manifested" by the Genjutsu itself, the effects last a much longer time than any ordinary Genjutsu making it highly effective against affected targets (In reality, a dose like this would last around 3 minutes), this leaves the affected target subject to powerful illusions for a while, and unable to properly mould chakra and react accordingly to things going on in reality. All that is required to activate this Genjutsu is sight of the opponent from the waist up.
~Can only be used once
~Cannot use Genjutsu for the next turn, and can only use A Rank and below Genjutsu the next two turns afterwards.
~The effects of the Genjutsu (DMT) remain for the following 2 turns after usage.
~Note:(DMT/Dimethyltryptamine: is a naturally occurring psychedelic compound of the tryptamine family. Trace elements can be found in mammals and Humans produced by an enzyme during metabolism. Metabolism, as you are aware occurs actively while you sleep as well as while you are awake. This drug, is basically what makes you dream at night and the body naturally produces it.)
Since Genjutsu revolve around manipulating the cerbral nervous system to cause illusionary pain to a target, me manipulating that part of the Brain to make it "believe" that it needs to produce more DMT should also be possible.
±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Although in theory it would be possible, this became simply too close to a technique that needs medical training. And those customs require Nexus permission.
Description: The user begins by altering their stance, placing the left foot slightly forward, and holding their sword upright with the hilt in front of the right shoulder. The blade should also slope slightly to the rear (The Hasso Kendo stance for those who don't know). Upon taking this stance, the user performs a "Soul Resonance" with themselves, and with their weapon. By focusing chakra all throughout the body, the user establishes an equilibrium between themselves and their weapon where the chakra resonates within , much like what is done with the Samurai Sabre Technique. However, whereas usually the chakra would envelop the blade, this chakra forms a shell within the blade itself, where the chakra can rebound infinitely and effectively resonate with itself; As it forms a shell of resonating chakra within the blade allowing it to cut through near anything, unlike the Samurai Sabre Technique, this chakra cannot be released in the form of ranged chakra shock-waves. The constant stream of chakra throughout the body serves to forcefully augment the muscles of the body, bringing the user into a peak condition increasing their speed and strength by up to fifteen percent. The chakra released from the Tenketsu can also take the form of several whip like entities that can subsequently be used to repeatedly attack the enemy, with the intention of landing multiple crushing blows, that are also capable of slicing the opponent apart; These whips can also be used defensively in order to defend against close ranged attacks, and knock away incoming projectile weapons.
~The use of the whips counts as one of the three allotted moves allowed in a single turn.
~This technique can only be used to block incoming attacks of equal or lower rank.
±± Declined ±± The idea isn't bad but you added to many abilities. Also, this is similar to existing techniques, both Kenjutsu and Custom Weapons.
(Kage☆Boshi: Ichi no Kata Rengoku)-Shadow☆Star: First Form - Chain of Blackness
Description: This technique is a variation of the Samurai Sabre technique where the user utilizes shape transformation in order to change the shape of their blade to resemble a long sharp sickle-blade, with white ornante patterns on it with a handle attached for the wielder, accentuated with three short spikes. A long chain formed solely of the users chakra "solidifies" allowing for the user to throw it towards the opponent in the form of a long-range attack. Because of its range, it is an incredibly versatile and powerful style of fighting, however the style lacks in speed and stealth. With the chain being made of the users chakra, it encircles the users body at all times while in use giving some-what protection from assault on all sides. In this variation, the user does not release chakra shock-waves, as focus remains primarily on the shape and control of the chain.
~Can only be used three times per battle
Looks like this:
±± Declined ±± How long does this last? Because the description makes it similar to a technique mixed with a custom weapon.