i had a general outline for my story thought up but it has slipped my mind and now currently thinking of a new outline then fill it in, will probably compose of 4-6 chapters. will try to finish it soon possibly releasing a chapter every day after i have wrote it. i already had chapter 1 done but made some changes. i'll share it with you guys and if i see interest i'll continue with it
A Past Rival: Chapter 1 - revenge begins
It's a beautiful afternoon in Konoha. The day marks the 9 year anniversary for the battle of
peace. Naruto has taken the title of hokage and Hinata as his bride. He is a hero known through
out the shinobi world. Naruto and friends meet at the cemetery to remember their friends who
have fallen in the battle and pay their respects.
Naruto: come hinata, Kurama wants to grab a bowl of ramen before we go home (he smiles)
Hinata: (hinata smiles back) dont be silly, kurama cant eat ramen
they arrive at Ichiraku's shop and grab a seat and order a bowl of ramen
Teuchi: my my the hokage is here. 2 special orders of hokage ramen coming right up
Naruto: you can still call me Naruto.....and make it 3 special orders please
Teuchi: oh....so Kurama wants one to eh Naruto (in a jokingly manner)
(Naruto smiles back)
(Kurama inside Naruto has a smirk on his face)
Naruto looks over to Hinata and wonders whats on her mind as Hinata looks like something is
Naruto: hey, Hinata is there something you want to tell me?
Hinata: (blushes) oh no its nothing, it can wait
Naruto: still blushing after 6 years
Hinata: well, I...
Naruto: i love that you're weird
(hinata smiles at naruto)
They both leave the shop and begin their walk home. it's a quite evening in the village. kids
run across the street chasing a cat. Naruto looks as it brings back his childhood memories.
Naruto: hey, kids. after you've caught that, bring it to shizune
Hinata tries to pick up the conversation that was left at the ramen shop. as she begins to speak there is a loud
noise over the village. there is a puff of smoke, the smoke clears and the 7 tails appears and
crashes to the ground. Naruto is confused and dashes toward where it has landed. and tells Hinata to stay behind
Naruto: hey, Chomei. is there something i could help you with (Naruto's shocked), HEY!! how did
you get out of your seal anyways!!
Chomei: Sorry Naruto but i cant control myself
Kurama: Naruto boy, something is wrong. Chomei doesnt look ok.
Naruto: what do you mean. Kurama
Kurama: (glares at Chomei) Naruto get ready, he means to attack
Naruto: what do you mean attack!!. i thought the tailed beasts were at peace!!
Kurama: i cant explain get ready!!
Chomei prepares a tailed beast bomb. Naruto quickly goes into his bijuu mode and barely manages to deflect Chomei's
attack. an explosion occurs in the distance behind Naruto as hes glaring towards Chomei. Naruto
senses that the seven tails is stronger than usual
Naruto: hey!! chomei, why are you doing this, you could have destroyed the village. whats wrong
Chomei has this blank look on his face as if his mind was no longer there and suddenly dashes
towards Naruto. Naruto gathers chakra and unleashes his sage powers and dashes head on with
Chomei. Naruto with a massive chakra arm punches Chomei and he crashes to the ground. picks
him up and throws him. taking the battle away from the village
Kurama: Naruto boy, lets trade places, i want to speak with Chomei. hey Chomei!!, what is the
meaning of this. stand down or i will hurt you.
Naruto: somethings not right here. it seems like hes no longer there. his eyes are empty
Chomei attacks again. theres a bright yellow flash that stops Chomei in his tracks. as the light
vanishes, Naruto is covered in the nine tailed cloak and loud roar is sent towards chomei.
chomei flies high in the sky forming a tailed beast bomb and comes flying back down and as he does
he launches the tbb. Naruto fires one back but with the force of it coming down it goes through
Narutos and strikes Naruto. theres a big explosion and the dust settles. Naruto is bringing himself
to his feet.
Kurama: Naruto boy, we can no longer hold back against him. he means to kill you.
Naruto: damn it.....what is going on here. alright Kurama....lets go!!
Naruto covers himself in the nine tailed cloak again. extends the tails and wraps them around
chomei and slams him to the ground. he jumps in the air and gathers a massive amount of chakra
and blasts his tbb towards chomei. chomei still recovering from being slammed is struck with the
Naruto: that should do it...
Chomei hardly able to fly is still alive and begins to speak but Kurama does not recognize this
Unknown:.....so this is the power of the nine tailed fox. i merely wanted to test it's strength
and i've gotta say.....it's intoxicating (sinister laugh)
Naruto: wait a minute....who are??! and what have you done with chomei!!
Unknown: ohhhh you'll find out.......in time......little Uzumaki boy
theres a puff of smoke and chomei has disappeared