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    542 - 543-544 predictions! awesome predictions


    Raikage is back at the HQ pacing back and forth with Tsunade sitting down and Shika an d the others engaged in other things.

    Tsuande: “Calm down, pacing won’t help.”

    Iruka walks in, “ yes Ma’am?”

    Raikage, “how could you let him escape like that, YOU were supposed to be the one to get through to him! This will be on your head if we lose them to Madara!”

    Tsunade stands up, “That will be enough of that, Raikage.”

    Raikage, “or what?”

    We see a fist slamming against Neji’s face.

    Neji lands a few feet away. {how did she get thru my defenses? It’s like she knows the patterns to my rotation, but how?}

    Sakura, “Neji, if you are in there, get control of your self, I am goin flight on you only because it’s you. But if you don’t snap out of it I will have to..”


    They both look. It is…

    Neji, “Lee?”

    Lee, “I will not let you do this Sakura, he is my teammate, and more.”

    Sakura, “Lee, you don’t under stand, he is not himself”

    Lee, “I understand completely what is going on, it is my moment to do two things.”

    He walks in front of Sakura and gets into a fighting stance looking at Neji.

    “to both save a comrade and fight my greatest competition.”

    Neji, “you are a fool, I have ultimate defense against your speed.”

    Lee, “yes you do have defense swift enough to match my speed Neji-san, but”

    He unwraps his hands and feet.

    “How long will it last against my technique.”

    He takes a different stance, similar to Neji but his hands are in a claw position.

    “Hidden Gate, open…. now Badger claw!”

    Foe some reason Lee is glowing bright green but with othe rcharacteristics of opened gates. He repeatedly striking a Neji.
    Neji is blocking blow for blow. He doesn’t have time to hit points at the moment he is just blocking.

    Neji {what is this technique Lee, what are you doing? Are you really gonna be the second person to teach me a lesson wit defeat?}

    Lee strikes Neji in the chest and he goes flying back but lands on his knees.

    Neji’s cloths are all torn where Lee was striking and he was Blocking.

    Sakura, {lee? You too have grown.}

    Lee, “I have to be the best at Taijutsu in the Leaf village and all five hidden villages. I have no jutsu to rely on. I learn form my defeats Neji. You have defeated me in training everyday since we were 10. I learned every single place on my body you hit all those years.”

    Neji, “yeah so what? So what Lee you are still just Lee!!”


    Guy and Lee are talking you see Neji walking away with Tenten clean , but Lee is bruised and dirty. H eis around 12.

    Lee, “he is unbeatable.”

    Guy, “No such thing, my youthful student!”

    Lee, “but Guy Sensei he ahs no weakness.”

    Guy, “hmmmm, well some people strike you where they are weak JUST to see if you share the same weakness, cause if you do It will be that much easier to defeat you.”

    Flashback over

    Lee “Do it.”

    Neji runs grumps up and runs to Lee quickly.

    Neji, “I plan to, 8 palms…16 palms….24.…36.….64 palms”

    Lee stands and looks at Neji with his arms down by his side.

    Sakura, “Lee?”

    Lee smiles, “I don’t share your weakness comrade.”

    Neji, “what?!”

    Lee lifts his arms, “Badger claw points of agony!”

    Lee strikes every single point Neji did with his claw shape hands, he is done in half the time I took Neji.

    Neji is laying in agony and screaming in pain on the ground.

    Lee, “those points you hit in your gentle fist are right beside the points of pain in the body. I hit them with the right amount of force you enemy will be in too much pain to fight”

    Sakura runs over to Neji, “I am sorry Neji, I can’t heal you until we know for sure it is you.”

    Lee walks over and grabs Nejis wrist and pulls then twist. Neji stops screaming.

    Neji, “Lee, thank you”

    Sakura, “how did you know It was him?”

    Lee, “simple. You can’t control someone’s mind that is in to much pain to think.”

    Naruto and Bee are now in a clearing Naruto has the scroll in his hand an d Bee is looking on.

    Naruto, “have a lot of questions to ask, it Is bout time I got some answers.”

    “that will have to wait…”

    Bee pulls Samehada and Naruto goes RS as they turn to see.

    Nagato leaning on Itachi’s Shoulder, “…cousin”

    Itachi, “please lower Samehada 8 tails jinchuriki, we are not here for you.”

    Naruto, “he is telling the truth, what are you doing here? Aren’t you being controlled by Madara?”
    He lowers RS.

    Itachi, “Actually it is Orochimaru’s lackey that has raised us, Kabuto. We ar ehere to help you, the best way we can.”

    Naruto, “why did you call me cousin?”

    Nagato, “ I am Nagato Uzumaki, grandson of the Uzukage of the whirlpool village.”

    Naruto , “what?!”

    Itachi, “Naruto if you would be so kind?”

    Naruto, “oh of course. “

    He makes two shadow clones they take Nagato upon there shoulders.

    Nagato, “yes I am your cousin through clan lineage. We are known for our long lives, grand chakra, seal knowledge and owners of the Rinnegan.”

    Bee, “I don’t get it Mr. dead, Rinnengan was a fluke my bro said.”

    Nagato, “the only people in our history to posses the Rinnegan…..were Uzumaki!”

    Itachi, “it is true Naruto the tablet of knowledge in the Uchiha hideout states the true purpose of the Uchiha, to protect the Sage of six paths lost clan. Which means Naruto…”

    “I must protect you!”

    Next….what the hell?


    Naruto, “Protect me?!”

    Itachi, “yes, the Uchiha were the protectors of the peace, the younger brother. At first the we had gotten beyond the rivalry of the original Sage children, but eventually it stirred up again.”

    Nagato, “which brings It to the Uchiha and Senju. The Senju were part of a whole. The younger sibling fathered two major descendents, the Uzumaki and the Senju. Which is why the two are so closely related and so similar in potential ability.”

    Naruto, “so why is there another half of the Uchiha or something?”

    Itachi, “the other half of the direct descendents of the older brother are the Hyuuga. At some point they realized that tranquility will make the I droughts not mature to a Sharinghan. At that point they took the proper measures to make sure that that level of dugouts never matured any further.”

    Bee, “you mean they keep it in the clan , to keep it away form the man?”

    Nagato, “The Uchiha, mixed with different clans and families which is why NOT all Uchiha can or will awaken a Sharinghan much les a Mangekeyo Sharinghan.”

    Naruto, “wait , how does any of this help me now? Why did you stop me form unlocking this scroll?”

    Nagato, “cause now is not the time, you have something very important to do, you questions can wait til after you keep your promises, don’t you think?”

    Naruto looks at the scroll, then throws it in the air and make several signs and it disappears.

    Iruk is with the Kages still.

    Tsunade, “that is all he said? That Naruto, well I really don’t think there is any stopping him now.”

    Raikage, “what?! He was out of his mind in the forest, thinking he could stop this war by himself!”

    Tsunade, “what secret does he know about?”

    Raikage looks at Tsunade but says nothing.

    “Iruka, I called you here for this reason, I want to know what the Raikage knows.”

    Iruka steps back, “but Lady Hokage, it has been a long time since I have done that jutsu, no tsense I was injured and…”

    Tsuande, “did I not clear you for full active chunin status? Also that jutsu comes natural to you, you were so talented that before the inury you had your choice of interrogation squad or ANBU, am I right?”

    Iruak, “yes ma’am but..”

    Raikage, “what fool plan do u have Tsunade, I am the leader of this Alliance, the head Kage!”

    Tsuande, “NO you are the head general in this war, Not the leader of all the villages. If you have a secret that could end this we must know now!”

    Iruka, “guess that’s my cue, first. Secret jutsu blind eye!”
    The sensors in the room look around as if searching.

    Sensor, “what where did they go? I can’t sense them r see them anywhere?”

    Shika, “hmmm, Iruka walked in now minutes later they are off the radar of the sensors? I remember that technique, Iruka. I also know the one after it, be careful young friend.”

    Iruka is standing in between both of them, “secret juts meeting of the minds!”

    The Raikage and Tsunade both freeze and there eyes get big and empty of color. Iruka is standing with his hand together. Both of his eyes are filled with many different images.

    Bee, “say what?! That’s my brother , you must be talking bout another1”

    Naruto, “no the Fox showed me, for centuries the fox has been full of anger because the part of him with out hatred has been kept locked away, underneath the cloud village.”

    Tsuande, “how reached of a village would do such a thing?!”

    Iruka is kneeling on the floor as if exhausted.

    Raikage, “ It was not my doing Hokage, I am merely the one who inherited it.”

    Tsunade, “Naruto was right, you could have prevented all of this. How could you do it how could you keep…”

    Naruto “ The fox’s heart is sealed under the Cloud Village!”

    Suddenly Naruto goes fox eyes, “After we are divide into 9 separate entities the longer we existed the more we became real, we all have hearts and flesh an blood, when we exist outside of a body, while we are inside is when we are just chakra.”

    Naruto returns, “8 tails still as a heart that is why Bee was able to get thru to him. Long as the Heart of the fox is there there is no way he will cooperate with me.”

    Bee, “but how could my bro have stepped in an been a hero?”

    Tsunade to Raikage, “Every Kage has the one time choice to release the heart so it can go back to the fox. But every single one of you chose not to, why?”

    Iruka coughing, “power, if they let the Fox get his heart back, all his power will be complete and IF he is inside a jinchurikki that ninja will then completely bond with it becoming more powerful than any jinchurikki or kage ever known , even the 1st Hokage and Madara Uchiha combined.”

    Raikage, “you are right. I didn’t want Konoha to have that power, none of the Kage’s before me wanted you to have that power!”

    Back to Naruto and the Others.

    Itachi, “it is true and a bonded Biju cannot be controlled by outside forces, their chakra and mind is to intertwined with the host. This war would not be happening if the current Raikage released the Heart, cause no way anyone could pull the fox from you Naruto. You would be bonded forever.”

    “bonds? You still talking about bonds Loser?”

    They all turn to see Sasuke standing with bandages over his eyes and Zetsu with him.

    Sasuke, “I must be hearing things, get these bandages off of me my eyes feel fine.

    Suddenly A hand is placed over his bandages.

    Kabuto, “not just yet, I want to savor this moment. A reunion to last all time. Is everyone ready?”

    Naruto & company are prepared to fight.

    Sasuke rips the bandages off.

    Sasuke, “Hmm, 8 tails, Naruto...{his vision is a little blurry, but it clears up when he focuses on Itachi} Itachi?!”

    Kabuto smiles, while Zetsu retreats into the ground.

    Sasuke, “Naruto, your too stupid to master Genjutsu, 8 tails you wouldn’t know my brother, I don’t kno who you are crippled old man!”

    He looks at Kabuto, “you! Orochimauru did this with the 1st an d2nd Hokages, now you used on my brother?!”

    Itachi, “you will all burn!!!”

    Itachi whispers, “h Sasuke.”

    Naruto looks angry.

    Sasuke starts to bleed form his Amaterasu eye. The EMS is a hazard chemical sign.

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    We see Sasuke flying back landing on the ground sliding into a tree.

    Naruto is in RS mode, he has just uppercut Sasuke.

    “damn you! Are you so far gone you would attack your brother for no reason?! You already got vengeance once already!”

    Sasuke getting up holding his jaw with his Amaterasu eye closed, {He has gotten faster, and stronger, no matter} “you still talk too much Loser!”

    He runs towards Naruto making hand signs.

    Naruto, {what is happening to me I can see what he is doing but it’s like there is more to it.} Sasuke, don’t…”

    Sasuke, “shut up! I am tired of your talking!”

    He is covered in lighting and then pulls his sword about to strike Naruto then he disappears & appears behind him.

    Naruto doesn’t turn around, even though he knows he is there. Right before the blade strikes he grabs the blade turns and places his hand on Sasuke’s chest.

    Naruto, “I am sorry.”
    A seal forms on Sasuke. “chakra summoning seal; restraint technique!”

    Suddenly Sasuke loses his chidori field and his eyes go back to regular pupils.

    Itachi, “amazing, a true Uzumaki it seems.”

    Nagato, “how did he know that, how was he able to perform it so swiftly?”

    Sasuke falls to his knees, “what have you done to me?”

    Naruto, “you no longer have access to the chakra that goes to your jutsu, you are like Lee now. I trapped your jutsu in a summoning seal, your Eternal Mangekyo is no longer eternal.”

    Bee, “it can be summoned now , but who has his power now?”

    Naruto stops RS and pulls up the back of his shirt, there is an Uchiha crest surrounded by seal designs in the middle of his back.

    Kabuto, “well that didn’t go as planned.”

    He makes hand seals, then several Edo coffins rise.

    Itachi, “get up Sasuke, you need to fight.”

    Sasuke, “do not tell me what I need to do! In case you haven’t noticed, I am without the Sharinghan, thanks to that loser Naruto!”

    Nagato, “hmmm, you have very high standards, calling someone that just beat you with one hand a loser.”

    Naruto, “Bee, hand Nagato Samehada, I have an idea.”

    Bee tosses the sword to Nagato.

    Nagato catches it with both hands and uses it to stand up, “good Idea Naruto, I can feel it, it is amazing amount of chakra this might just do the trick!”

    The coffins open and reveal.

    Nagato, “oh no, Uzukage.

    Itachi, “father?”

    Naruto, “mom?”

    Bee, “no it can’t be, no you MONSTER!!!”

    Kabuto, “oh good my guess was right…this is YOUR son!”

    WE see the Uzukage has a staff, Fugaku has a kunai, Kushina with her hair blowing in the wind, and a boy no older than twelve that looks like Bee except with a cap on backwards and smaller shades. He has a bo staff and a pair of sai in front of his belt. His arms are folded.

    Fugaku, “what is this, Itachi, Sasuke? Is that Naruto?! Wait, is this the forbidden jutsu of the Hokage?”

    Kushina, “Naruto? My son, you look just like Minato.”

    Kid, “father? Is that you?”

    Bee, yeah B minor, it’s me, I am sorry, I didn’t protect you and I can’t save you now.”

    Naruto, {he is rhyming, this is serious, I will not fight my mother, dad would kill me!”

    Fugaku suddenly attacks Sasuke, but Itachi blocks with his kunai. Itachi kicks him back.

    Uzukage makes hand signs, “wind and water: jet stream blast!”

    He heads towards Nagato but at the last minute he stands straight up and, “push!”

    He sends It back to the Uzukage.

    Itachi, “Sasuke stop feeling sorry for yourself, the eyes are not what makes a warrior, it’s what lies behind them.”

    Kabuto, sends a snake flying directly towards Sasuke ready to bite him. Itachi is busy with Fugaku but sees it. Just when he is about to burn it with black flames Fugaku slashes his eyes.

    The snake is about to bite him when. Naruto holds his fore arm up to get bitten but he is in Sage mode and it doesn’t go thru.

    Naruto, “if I knew taken your eyes would a made u a kunoichi I might have chosen a different tactic! Get your sorry ass up and fight!”


    Kushina slaps Naruto with her chakra chain. It turns his head and knocks blood from his mouth.

    Bee is blocking but not attacking B minor. He fights similar to Bee but with a Bo staff. His sai are still on his belt.

    B Minor, “father, why are you crying, it is okay, this is not your fault. I was happy.”

    Bee, I am happy too son, so is your Uncle, in his own way.”

    B minor, The why aren’t you rapping, you promised everyday you tell me a new rap until I was a jonin.”

    Bee stops crying and smiles, “well I be damn a promise is a promise, Uncle A is Raikage and I am by his side keeping him honest. You fight real good almost as good as me, but when it comes to rhymes your minor and I am major Bee.”

    B minor starts to wither away, “thank you father, I have all the rhyme si need, love you.”

    He is gone.

    Naruto is dogging his moms attacks, “ Mom stop, I can’t beat you up, you’re my mom!”

    Kushina, “I can’t control myself, Naruto you must defeat me.”
    She starts to charge at with her chains spinning.

    Naruto, {there is a only one action to take.}

    Next we see Naruto hugging his mom as the chains wrap around him.

    Naruto, “I love you mom, I have a lot of friends, I study better, and I promise to eat more vegetables more okay? I am not mad at you and Dad, I love you both, and”

    WE see Kushina’s eyes with surprise.

    “I am gonna be the Orange Hokage after all!”

    Kushina starts to cry and wither, “thank you son, I am proud of you.”

    Itachi is holding his eyes as they are healing.

    Fugaku, “so you are the strongest we have? I am disappointed in you. Surely I thought you would have redeemed yourself after that issue at the lake.”

    Itachi, “I have power beyond you father, but I am not like you. You see we are both dead, but you died on the inside long before that night.”

    Fugaku is charging towards him. “the most powerful Uchiha, you are a joke.”

    Itachi, “No..”

    Sasuke is standing behind Fugaku with his chidori fist coming thru his chest.

    “he is.”
    Sasuke increases the charge.

    Fugaku, “very good son.” he withers.
    We see Naruto with his hands together releasing the seal on Sasuke.

    Nagato is standing over the Uzukage, “I am Nagato Uzumaki, Sage of the Six Paths. That is Naruto Uzumaki the chosen one to save us from this. He will carry on the Uzumaki to the greatness they were meant for.

    Uzukage, “So be it.”

    He disappears with ashes in the wind.

    Kabuto , “shit! Okay, then!”

    He makes hand signs for Edo Tensei.

    Suddenly in front of Kabuto is Itachi.
    “No, not you!”

    Itachi points at him.

    Kabuto is seen screaming.

    Naruto, “Genjutsu.”

    Sasuke, “I am not gonna be your puppet Naruto, free me.”

    Naruto, “Not until I save you.”

    He goes RS mode.

    “But right now I have to find Madara.”

    He expands the RS field and engulfs him, Sasuke & Bee they disappear.

    Kabuto on his knees, “release.”

    Itachi and Nagato disappear.

    He collapses.

    Next, with the Edos gone what will Madara do?!
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    Re: 542 - 543-544 predictions! awesome predictions

    Hmmm.....Interesting. I wonder if it will be close or not.

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    Re: 542 - 543-544 predictions! awesome predictions

    excuse, what?

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    Re: 542 - 543-544 predictions! awesome predictions

    started good.... but then it became a bunch of bull

    1. Kushina cannot be invoked, her soul was seal in naruto with the fox
    2. Naruto pooping new techniques from nowhere? That's not how it goes
    3. Sasuke vs Naruto, one of the most anticipated battles in the story, just that crappy?

    It was good. just too much far fetched...

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    Re: 542 - 543-544 predictions! awesome predictions

    i'd love to see that happen

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    Re: 542 - 543-544 predictions! awesome predictions

    Thats kinda what I thought. A little far feched.

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    Re: 542 - 543-544 predictions! awesome predictions

    its started good - then it got childish homie - -

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    Re: 542 - 543-544 predictions! awesome predictions

    Dude, would be cool if this all happened!, (You write it yourself)?
    Got me reading well worth it :D

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    Re: 542 - 543-544 predictions! awesome predictions

    lols i find it funny in some way

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    Re: 542 - 543-544 predictions! awesome predictions

    It was pretty good but Lee would not be able **** with my boy Neji and neither would Sakura.

    Nevertheless it would be epic if that was to happen.

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